VN Ren'Py Completed Pure Love [v0.9.5 Public] [Mr.Axxx]

[KingFuzzy]

ugh... the dialog in this game during the beach sequence makes me want to puke for being so god damn cheesy and bad, because it can be boiled down to this.

"oh i love you!"
"No i love you"
"I love you more!"
"no i love you more"
"nuh uh, i love you more"
"i love you the most"
"i love you ten thousand"
"i love you infinity"

 

[whisperpuppy]

Its an ok game but i dislike that EVERY girl have humongous boobs.
They look so fake that i dont realy feel anything for the characters

It's a cartoon

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

ugh... the dialog in this game during the beach sequence makes me want to puke for being so god damn cheesy and bad, because it can be boiled down to this.

"oh i love you!"
"No i love you"
"I love you more!"
"no i love you more"
"nuh uh, i love you more"
"i love you the most"
"i love you ten thousand"
"i love you infinity"

Seems like there is enough love in the air.
Hey I just made up a good title for the next song for those crap artists..I mean rap artists...ha..ha.

 

[whisperpuppy]

Seems like there is enough love in the air.
Hey I just made up a good title for the next song for those crap artists..I mean rap artists...ha..ha.

"Seems like there is enough" I like it already. It's a thought provoking lyrical journey about how dumb it is to complain about renders and dialog in a free cartoon fantasy game.

 

[Avaron1974]

ugh... the dialog in this game during the beach sequence makes me want to puke for being so god damn cheesy and bad, because it can be boiled down to this.

"oh i love you!"
"No i love you"
"I love you more!"
"no i love you more"
"nuh uh, i love you more"
"i love you the most"
"i love you ten thousand"
"i love you infinity"

What is this insanity ... love talk in a game about love ... who thought of such madness?

 

[Stonebridge]

the girls have nice bodies, but they are all ugly

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

the girls have nice bodies, but they are all ugly

They don't look too bad. They will look better with each newer version....peace.

 

[Mikey Mike]

I'd like to congratulate the dev for smartly shifting gears towards pornographic bread and circuses. Give the deviant masses what they crave, and you'll reap the financial rewards! I'm still not keen on the sister's face though.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

I'd like to congratulate the dev for smartly shifting gears towards pornographic bread and circuses. Give the deviant masses what they crave, and you'll reap the financial rewards! I'm still not keen on the sister's face though.

Then don't think of her as a sister. Think of her as a friend.
By that I mean play the other version. There are 2 of them....peace.

 

[Mikey Mike]

Then don't think of her as a sister. Think of her as a friend.
By that I mean play the other version. There are 2 of them....peace.

Thanks for the advice but neither version is going to improve her harsh looks IMHO.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Thanks for the advice but neither version is going to improve her harsh looks IMHO.

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Right now I am not looking ar her face. It what lies below, I find more interesting...ha...ha.

 

[BoltonGuy35]

Great game for a starter and hoping for more of a choice based scenario type system in the future that will impact the storyline but other than that it was good.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Great game for a starter and hoping for more of a choice based scenario type system in the future that will impact the storyline but other than that it was good.

I'm hoping for that too. Every good game needs a consequence path or choice path.
Either that or a bad guy so we can enjoy it better by getting rid of him in the end...peace.

 

[whisperpuppy]

It's free. It is fantasy. Maybe long long ago in a galaxy far far away. It is a cartoon. Don't be basic. Peace.

 

[Luckzor]

Interesting game but lack of important choices, there are a lot, like open the door, show the room to the girls and a lot more but those don't change anything. The only "important" choices are cum in her mouth or face and maybe are other 2 more like that. This game could be a kinetic novel because choices not matter. You can't choose if you want to have all the girls, just two or one, if you want to fight with your sister when she is mean or forgive her, simple options that every game have and change a lot the gameplay.
And the girls design is other "problem", why they have faces so unnatural? The sister have the eyes almost at the same size that her mouth, you can't see that even in Chernobyl.

 

[whisperpuppy]

Interesting game but lack of important choices, there are a lot, like open the door, show the room to the girls and a lot more but those don't change anything. The only "important" choices are cum in her mouth or face and maybe are other 2 more like that. This game could be a kinetic novel because choices not matter. You can't choose if you want to have all the girls, just two or one, if you want to fight with your sister when she is mean or forgive her, simple options that every game have and change a lot the gameplay.
And the girls design is other "problem", why they have faces so unnatural? The sister have the eyes almost at the same size that her mouth, you can't see that even in Chernobyl.

You paid zero for the time you chose to waste. I've spent more time on bad netflix and I pay for netflix.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Interesting game but lack of important choices, there are a lot, like open the door, show the room to the girls and a lot more but those don't change anything. The only "important" choices are cum in her mouth or face and maybe are other 2 more like that. This game could be a kinetic novel because choices not matter. You can't choose if you want to have all the girls, just two or one, if you want to fight with your sister when she is mean or forgive her, simple options that every game have and change a lot the gameplay.
And the girls design is other "problem", why they have faces so unnatural? The sister have the eyes almost at the same size that her mouth, you can't see that even in Chernobyl.

I'm more into the story then anything else.
It' just 10 days so there is no room to be picky.
If it was longer then sure be picky all you want.
The next version will be just as different with new unexpected changes.
The artwork seem fine to me. The story is nicely developing.
This is not a sandbox, open world game. Just a click and play game.
The dev will take into consideration any changes that need or could be made in the next version.
So don't be shy and ask. That's what I did. I am glad those changes were applied.
A good form of communication is needed to make a game great.....peace

 

[Luckzor]

You paid zero for the time you chose to waste. I've spent more time on bad netflix and I pay for netflix.

Yeah but paying or not, not stop you to give a constructive opinion/criticism, everything if none is unrespectful. Actually some devs take advices and considered what people who no support them say them, if the advices ft with the game and universe.

 

[ImperialD]

well played this update , the games is getting better ,, still think the running thru the water and beach in shoes is a bit crazy .. other than that good game so far

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

well played this update , the games is getting better ,, still think the running thru the water and beach in shoes is a bit crazy .. other than that good game so far

That was the last update. Changes were made after that.
And changes will continue to be made on every version.
All that to improve on the look of the game for future versions.
In other words that was then, this is now.....only getting better and better....peace