VN Ren'Py Completed Pure Love [v0.9.5 Public] [Mr.Axxx]

[Avaron1974]

I'll say the same here that I have said to many other devs.

You make the game YOU want to make. Your first game isn't going to get massive amounts of support either way, people are already invested in other devs but most are open to supporting new talent.

Your first game is where you set the tone. You show people you can make consistent updates with the same quality you set. It doesn't need to be monthly, hell, most top devs will tell you never to release monthly. Give yourself time to make a good chunk of content you are happy with.

It's fine to take small ideas from you players but major stuff like characters and story content should all be you. If you start making content patrons/fans put forward you are no longer making your game and that's when devs tend to abandon stuff. They go way off what they started out making and no longer enjoy it.

The main thing is you enjoy what you are doing. This isn't the best thing to do if all you want is money because very few devs now ever make it past the 1k a month mark. It can be done but don't count on it especially on a first game.

Mainly we are here to see what you can do. It doesn't matter how many ideas, demands or requests you get i'm not looking to see you make forum dweller 24's game. By all means if you see something you like then that great but only if it's something you think works and it's something you can pull off while staying in line with the rest of the game.

 

[Sagah]

I know it's all personal preference, but i've encountered countless games that have otherwise interesting and unique models for the girls that are then "ruined" with MASSIVE unrealistic tits. Again, just my personal preference.

 

[Mr.Axxx]

I'll say the same here that I have said to many other devs.

Thanks for your response, it helped me.
I have an idea of how I should make my game but seeing at those negative comments. I am getting afraid of game developing. I know everyone has there own personal preference but I am not AAA game dev. I am just a bloody sole game dev. For me, I make a game that makes me enjoy of game developing. I take feedbacks also but it has a limit, it should not change my whole game. My game main focus is on the story, later on the characters. For me characters are beautiful.
Just saying:- making a game especially Adult game as sole dev was a war. We devs, we face the struggle of all the shit.

Again I am saying enjoy the game, the game had 3 girl characters one is big eyes and big tits, one is small eyes med tits with blonde hair, and another one is med eyes and big tits. I had a tag of big tits in-game page see that.

 

[Avaron1974]

Thanks for your response, it helped me.
I have an idea of how I should make my game but seeing at those negative comments. I am getting afraid of game developing. I know everyone has there own personal preference but I am not AAA game dev. I am just a bloody sole game dev. For me, I make a game that makes me enjoy of game developing. I take feedbacks also but it has a limit, it should not change my whole game. My game main focus is on the story, later on the characters. For me characters are beautiful.
Just saying:- making a game especially Adult game as sole dev was a war. We devs, we face the struggle of all the shit.

Again I am saying enjoy the game, the game had 3 girl characters one is big eyes and big tits, one is small eyes med tits with blonde hair, and another one is med eyes and big tits. I had a tag of big tits in-game page see that.

Negative comments you can't do anything about, even the popular devs get those. There are games on here that some people think are garbage yet others absolutely love and there are games on here people hail as the "best ever" and some people hate them.

No matter what you do you will find a player base. It will start off small and you build from that but you'll never stop the negative comments. People like what they like and somepeople will expect you to change your designs to suit them.

Don't.

It's your game you do what you like.

If people don't like the character models they will decide whether or not to play it, that's on them. If you start changing things you like to suit other people then you aren't doing what you enjoy. It's you that's going to be spending their free time with this project and you need to enjoy it.

You will see negative comments. Thank them for taking the time to check out your game and for their feedback and move on. Don't let it get to you. Others will enjoy it.

The thing you do need to keep an eye on feedback for are the important things. Bugs, spelling mistakes and grammar. As I said, if you see any ideas you like and want to add then that's great as long as it's something you'd enjoy making.

If you enjoy what you do then it shows and others will enjoy it too, not everyone though, you can't help that.

 

[joecoe]

Sorry if my comment sounded bad. The art style of this game is not for everyone, but I'm sure this game will find its audience. The mix between hentai and real characters is quite original, so it's likely to attract people who are bored with any of these styles. Another positive thing is that the main character is not a total dickhead, and that in itself gains the favor of some players.

 

[Exu]

I would suggest, in good faith, to find someone who can help you with the english. I'm no native myself, my english is not bulletproff and yet I can see some pretty obvious solvable grammar mistakes. Though the grammar is not bad enough to make it impossible to understand, the text and dialogues sound weird (And Lilly and Ava are quirky enough to not need the extra weirdness).

Other than that, I see no problem with your choice regarding character appearances. I guess they could be better, but still, it's your first game and you went with something other than overused 3D standard models and that's praiseworthy.

The story seems cute for now, and the promise of romance is something to look foward. Contrast between Ava and Lilly is interesting and something you don't see too often in other games. The music track goes well with the game ambience and makes me feel warm.

I wish you luck and to not give up if things start slow. And, as an advice, some people will keep acting like they are your boss, even if they are not supporting you. Well, they aren't, EVEN if they're supporting you. Listen to the feedback, but not to destructive criticism. Don't let them talk you into making a game you don't want to. If anyone want a game made exactly to their liking, they can start developing their one by themselves and see how smooth things go. Don't worry, this community is big enough; you'll find an audience.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

Wow, an actual ok looking MC model? That by itself makes me want to play.

but we got bimbos...which is way worse than a ok looking MC ç_ç

 

[Ed360]

seeing the tags and the pics looks like a vanilla game and this brings peace in a world full of ntr, corruption, rape games. I have high hopes for this game the models look good keep the great work

 

[ptahn]

To the people who think characters are weird.
My game is a kind of Hentai version where you see big eyes and big tits. the game stands between hentai and real life.
It's my own art style. It is your wish to play my game. I am not forcing anyone. And thanks for a lot of feedback. I will try to make the next version good. have a nice day.

I think your models have an interesting look. I have not played it yet, but I plan on it. Keep in mind, you are never going to make everyone happy. Ask yourself why are you making this game. If it is just for fun then make the game the way you want it and don't listen to anyone else about the content. Sounds to me that you are not here for the money. Just read the posts about game mechanics, seems like that's what you want to learn about.

 

[WildBillKatt]

Like the look of the models. Will wait for more content.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Wow that was fast.I like the story . It has great potential.
It has no multiple choices no alternate paths or endings.
This Ava is the MCS friend and he rents room or something like that?
Ava also seems to be a control freak.
It almost seems like a patch is missing here to make sense of this story.
Why does Eve talk like she was Russian or something? "We want to take rest"
I think you should fire the writer before the next version.
We are also missing Aunt Clara for next version I hope.
When is the next version?

 

[Mr.Axxx]

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Good News:- I removed cps (crawling text) because of most people's feedback.
Adding new rendering technique DOF to v2 game.
Fixing English in dialogues. (Yeah I am looking for a translator from my garbage English to some good English.)
[Who are interested to be a translator for my game they can PM me we will discuss rewards in PM.]
Maybe the best news of the day:- I am making an incest version of game. rewriting most of the dialogues in the incest version.

Bad news:- You Can't get rid of me. Because I am working on the game full time. I am not giving up on game. Enjoy your render and stay tuned for the next version. Have a nice day.

 

[Mr.Axxx]

Wow that was fast. I like the story . It has great potential.

I am the writer of the game. I am the sole game dev. My English is not that good.(Looking for translators ) I will improve it. At starting i made this game as Incest but later I removed it for patreon. You will find the Incest version in the next release. I planning to release next version before the end of this month. (Hope my PC don't kill me.) And when it comes to Clare (Aunt) you can see her on the 5th day of the game. Thanks for playing my game. Have a nice day.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

I am the writer of the game. I am the sole game dev. My English is not that good.(Looking for translators ) I will improve it. At starting i made this game as Incest but later I removed it for patreon. You will find the Incest version in the next release. I planning to release next version before the end of this month. (Hope my PC don't kill me.) And when it comes to Clare (Aunt) you can see her on the 5th day of the game. Thanks for playing my game. Have a nice day.

Is there a way we can fix the writing ourselves.
Every time I see those mistakes it makes me wish that I could.

 

[Guardra]

Bad news:- You Can't get rid of me. Because I am working on the game full time. I am not giving up on game. Enjoy your render and stay tuned for the next version. Have a nice day.

best bad news i ever heard. I'll keep eyes on this what to see where it goes. Keep up the good work Mr.Axxx

 

[lawfullame]

I am the writer of the game. I am the sole game dev. My English is not that good.(Looking for translators ) I will improve it. At starting i made this game as Incest but later I removed it for patreon. You will find the Incest version in the next release. I planning to release next version before the end of this month. (Hope my PC don't kill me.) And when it comes to Clare (Aunt) you can see her on the 5th day of the game. Thanks for playing my game. Have a nice day.

We developers who are not native English speakers have a hard time. Creating an adult visual novel in my native language would be worthless because I live in a fairly small country that most Americans can hardly find on the worldmap.
And except for a few small communities abroad, nobody else speaks my language.
Although, in this community, my country might be more recognized. it is is like a porn superpower, considering the number of pornstars per capita.

 

[Nightless]

Nice start for a game I think, Renders look quite good also MC which is rare and yeah english could be better but if it is not your main language that is normal. Maybe get someone to proofread your script you do not really need a translator just a person which is good with english to polish the text.

 

[truckerguy257]

Really love your but it really a shame the English is not on the level of the graphics.

 

[Mormont]

Just as well this is a harem game otherwise things could get messy with the 3 girls I'm guessing this is just going to be linear throughout? or will we get more choices in future updates? The models sure do look different haven't made up my mind on them yet perhaps they will grow on me in time, but good start so far good luck with the rest of your game.

 

[ShirouryuuAkihito]

Plz animate the scenes.....It will be much more AWEsome and WHOLEsome than it already is.