- Aug 6, 2017
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Umm this is written like a preteen novel. Also he dives into the ocean with full jumpsuit and comes out dry - lol
Don't get discouraged so fast man. Since it's your first game you are bound to make mistakes. Don't expect to start making money from the get go. There are a lot of new games every day and it's difficult to support all the games you like. Also instead of seeing the negative feedback as hate try to find things you can improve through these comments. Your game has it flaws but it's normal since you are new to this. It's not bad though. You've gone a little overboard with the lovey-dovey stuff, but it's ok. If you like working on this game don't let a few comments stop you. Just keep doing your thing.
- May 4, 2019
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Man, let's face it - the beach scene was a pure comedy... really. Walking through the sand on heels, the girl should be wasted or smth... And dive into the ocean fully clothed? Not the brightest idea too.
Despite the first paragraph, I've actually come with the words of inspiration - save it as your side project. Don't give up. You will not get any real profit from this one for sure, but the experience is also a valuable thing. You got some feedback (even if it's mostly negative) - analyze it and keep things saner next time. Perhaps, the wind will change.
P.S. Find some reliable work. I'm serious. Earn some money for living and label your game as a hobby for now. Otherwise, these bad comments will not be your biggest problem.
Despite the first paragraph, I've actually come with the words of inspiration - save it as your side project. Don't give up. You will not get any real profit from this one for sure, but the experience is also a valuable thing. You got some feedback (even if it's mostly negative) - analyze it and keep things saner next time. Perhaps, the wind will change.
P.S. Find some reliable work. I'm serious. Earn some money for living and label your game as a hobby for now. Otherwise, these bad comments will not be your biggest problem.
- Jan 14, 2018
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Forget the heels, the rest is a mess. Abandon this vn, partner with a writer and start fresh. If you want to make some money that is.
- May 4, 2019
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Not quite true - you can redo it using 'spot render'. You need to test the look ofc, but to imagine her walking on tiptoe is way easier.
- May 4, 2019
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No good results without learning. I bet he has some more rabbits in da hat. It's better to pull them off now.
- Jan 14, 2018
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You don't need a poll. You have 2 patrons and no one who likes the game here. Partner with a writer, they're not hard to find. Don't waste 10 hours a day on a v3.
- May 4, 2019
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It's up to you ofc, but didn't you put some efforts into this? You can quit anytime. Let it go for now - anger is not the best adviser.
- Jan 14, 2018
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Good advice. Maybe a good writer-partner would solve some of that quicker. Doesn't seem like the dev can afford to spend 6 months learning.
Please if concerned about my game and me. stop commenting on my post. I don't need your opinion.
- May 10, 2018
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This needs a kinetic novel tag..all the choices are single click choices that just attempt to con the player into thinking he's playing a game..he is not..he is just clicking to the next linear preset scene..this is as kinetic as they come..tag it and bag it!!
You should't take everything personal. You'll find that kind of comments even in the most successful games, because every person is different and they like different things. I for one don't like sharing, and I got so pissed off with a very popular game yesterday because it had forced sharing without any warning so I posted a shitload of what you might consider hate comments. I don't have anything personal with the dev, I just felt deceived in a way and I wanted to express it. And of course it wasn't just me. Your situation is different, but like I said before if you like working on this game, you should try and find things you could improve through these comments, so they have a positive impact on you. For example, Hyped said something about your writting. You could find someone to help you with it, or at least someone who is more fluent in english and can help you translating some of your thoughts in a better way.
- Feb 18, 2018
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Cheer-up bro cause its not that bad!
This isn't mine but like the content, and feel that its applicable to your situation:
Ways for Overcoming Fear of Rejection and Failure:
1. Accept the Fact of Fear:
It is essential to acknowledge the fact that you have fear of failure. No matter what is the intensity and frequency of this problem, but if you have it then it will prevent you from proceeding ahead in the life.
When you accept the situation, then you will be able to take appropriate corrective actions to improve the situation.
2. Know the Cause of the Fear:
In order to conquer the fear, it is first essential to know where it came from. You have developed the fear during your school days, or your early childhood, or the negative family environment or your first job. The fear of failure may also develop because of an uncomfortable episode in the life.
So, if you understand where it comes from, then conquering it will become easy.
3. Write down the Problem:
If you want to analyze the problem then the best way is to define it properly. The best way to do is to write it down on a piece of paper.
As far my experience is concerned, this will solve 50% of your problem. It is because it will also help you know what is exactly bothering you.
4. Accept Rejection as a Natural part of your Life:
One thing you must remember is that everyone suffers rejection at one point or more in life. Even the most successful people on earth have experienced rejection at least once in their lifetime.
Also, the most beautiful woman might not be attractive to every man. This is a part of life and you can never become one who everyone would love.
5. Don’t be too Strict on Yourself:
Bring critical to yourself do not mean that you would become an excellent performer. It is alright to have certain imperfections. No one is perfect and may lack the skills needed to do a particular job.
This does not imply that you do not possess the necessary, unique assets. Even you must have certain advantages, which you might have taken for granted.
6. Set Realistic Goals:
Another easy and effective way to overcome the fear of failure is to comprehend well that a rejection could work as a wakeup call. For example, you may apply for numerous jobs. But when you are applying for them there would be some clear requirements.
If you have none then you will experience rejection ones, twice, or more. As a result, you would pitch to more appropriate job vacancies.
7. Stop Thinking as it is the ‘End of the World’:
Another effective way to combat the fear of failure is to understand that you can never know what the future is about. Just don’t consider a one-time rejection at the end of your world. This is the problem with most other individuals.
If you don’t make it to a job or they are not able to gel well with few friends or they are not liked by any one of the girls or guys, then think it as the end of their world. Just be a little practical. You will discover that there will always be better opportunities. This is not the end of it!
8. Analyze the Cost of Missing Opportunities:
I am not saying to take advice from others always and every time, but it is better to discuss things first and then take a decision.
Whether you are making an investment or making an important career move or making any important relationship decision, the key is to make well-informed and calculated decisions.
For example, if you are taking a decision regarding your career with two aspects – one is a safe career with high growth opportunities, other is a risky career offering the best values.
Just make a positive motivation and this will urge to ignore the fear of rejection.
9. Write Down the Worst Outcome:
Another way to combat the fear of failure is to identify the worst outcome of a situation. It is essential to identify the worst possible outcome that can occur as a result of this situation.
You are losing the relationship, losing money, losing investment, losing health, losing a job, or losing prestige. When you will be aware of the worst possible outcome that will lead to stress and anxiety, then you will be able to combat the problem in a better way.
Slowly and gradually, you will be able to overcome the problem.
10. Develop Positive Thinking:
Positive thinking can help overcome the problems in a much better way. Visualizing the correct outcome is a way to develop your self-confidence as well as self-sabotage.
A positive behavior can help you combat the problem. It will always provide you with confidence and will ensure that you don’t make mistakes or experience problem while taking a decision.
11. Listen to Your Gut Feeling and Heart:
Taking approvals from others will not ensure that you will always take correct decisions in your life. Also, don’t take decisions just to please others!
If you fear of what others will say to you, then you might be making the biggest mistake of your life. Think again what are you really doing and what you wanted to do. There is no need to prove anything to others. Just listen to your heart.
12. Treat Rejection as a Lesson Learned:
You can handle failure in two ways. One way is to learn from it by asking yourself what your flaws were and why you were not able to make it a valuable experience. The second way is to escape the situation. The better way is to learn new lessons so that you become a more compatible and proficient person.
- Jun 23, 2017
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There is nothing wrong with taking the criticism and learning from it.
Some of the 1st games from the more popular devs here were utter crap. Not everyone starts being able to write their own scenarios and if he wants to learn he can also try lifiting scenarios off popular VN's, Hentais, and LN. From my perspective there is enough here where it is far from hopeless but it seems like the dev is taking all criticism personally.
Devs who do that or don't listen to criticism from patrons/f95 commonly don't last long or get many patrons. They either burn out or become a slonique.
I believe that might happen once the Aunt finally comes home.
What you expect is not in this game.
If you want to see porn that bad then go to a porn site.
Just don't go blind trying.
I am more interested in the story and artwork then blind fapping criticism.
By that I mean I like the drawings. The story is just getting started.
If you keep watching instead of complaining so much you could see that the story will start to grow on you. I want to see what happens when the Aunt finally arrives.
Will the mc also make a move on her and add her to his Harem?
Just like many other games it's a work in progress.....peace.
It's short enough for a short story.
Don't worry versions are comming.
Scripts don't fall of trees.
You just got to be patient.