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Not only name the 3 girls but you get to set there starting age.
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Damn didn't expect
to hit me that hard. Writing is excellent; game seems promising!
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Yes Gracie died just before the girls left to find there dad.
It tells you so in the game.
this game really came out swinging with the feels huh?
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Yeah, I felt that wasn't properly explained, the timeline. But I do totally agree. I mean, you could, as you did, put it together based on the girls being 18(min). But, that back story, the MCs progression, should be explain slightly more.
It wouldn't take much either, just a few lines slipped in somewhere, but could give birth to interesting story arcs, his struggle etc.
Though, I really love this story. It was a nice little twist on a story. I'm looking forward to more.
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You know a story-based porngame is really well done if you use the paper towel for drying tears instead of .. other things.
Kinda sceptical about the size of that beast (Harem? Love to obedience? Multiple personality-aspects? LIs outside of the three .... tennants? That's a LOT! Hope you don't get caught up by your projects Dammed..), and I don't pledge to 0.1ers out of principle - but if the next two or three updates are like that? Count me in.
One way or another, this is the birth of one of the big ones, guys and gals.
(... ugh, who am I kidding, I'll probably pledge anyway. I'm too much of a sucker for redheads with green eyes)
Kinda sceptical about the size of that beast (Harem? Love to obedience? Multiple personality-aspects? LIs outside of the three .... tennants? That's a LOT! Hope you don't get caught up by your projects Dammed..), and I don't pledge to 0.1ers out of principle - but if the next two or three updates are like that? Count me in.
One way or another, this is the birth of one of the big ones, guys and gals.
(... ugh, who am I kidding, I'll probably pledge anyway. I'm too much of a sucker for redheads with green eyes)
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Oof. Well, now I'm sad. I liked her introduction a lot
. Thought we'd have some time to catch up later down the line. Thanks. Must have missed it somewhere.
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i just started and i'am at the point of the letter and when she was sick and al those things i just break down in tears.. great work so far i give more feedback when i'am done.
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I was defending the story, dude."Over ten years ago..."
Over...
I get that the scene at the end was brief, but c'mon now. At least verify the veracity of your criticisms before going on tangents about them.
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"Over ten years ago..."
Over...
I get that the scene at the end was brief, but c'mon now. At least verify the veracity of your criticisms before going on tangents about them.
But let's say; sex at 14 - 16. Pregnant. Comatose but pregnant. (Gracie Vs You). Yada Yada. 2+ Years rehabilitation + setting up business. Daughters at 12+, maybe 13 or 14. Max, IMHO.
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Okay, yeah, I caught this. I think I misinterpreted it by accident and thought by "couldn't fight anymore" she somehow meant she stopped trying to seek treatment.
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I don't know - I chose the Dark, crush their expectations route, and a purple light enveloped this game, and several hours went missing. -_-
