a good number of typo and a couple error in the text but nothing seizure inducing or that would make some "engrish" comment be reasonnable, personnaly i don't like the yanno ... but i'm not a native english speacker so my school and game english may not be up to the level needed to make it feel ok ^^
the game have an interestng story and is not rushed with girls throwing themselves at the mc to get railled because he told them a couple compliments ... they still throw themselves at him a bit easily but it's a game and i don't think anyone would like to play through years of courtship and brainwashing to make them ok with the idea of polyamory >< so nitpicking would get us nowhere i like the pace and progression of the plot in this interesting story
i found no keyboard life threatening bug and god know there are quite a good number of those bugs in the games we get around here ^^ only "bugs" i found was with the barista, she speack of a meeting we never had a couple of time :S (while her profil say i did not miss any event with her) and after having gone through all map at all time they are accessible ... there is a few event i can't see, no scene in those if i believe the gallery, speacking of the gallery, i can't seem to acces the night creeping/crawling scene for the sexy cop
i'm a nitpicking maniac so i still find think to speack about, some eye candy scene are just too much of a pain in the ass to find some of them even with the hint had me close to either use the cheat mod to unlock them or just straight up abandoning or ignoring them, finaly got the idea to just look closely while using H key to see where some object was apearing when coming back to the "game"
even with all my nitpicking, i really enjoyed the current content and will come back eagerly for more, good job dev and thank you