V0.6
now, renders are off the charts. facial expressions, backgrounds, attention to every detail....yes it's at least equal to the best i have seen. nothing i write here will add to the high praise, i have no doubt (not read other reviews yet), others here have given in lavish detail.
i'm no expert but this was stunning to look at.
i have more to say but not first without talking about my favourite part of a VN. yes i love the N over the V and this one falls a little short there so far.
it's NOT in the dialogue as it is excellently written.
if you take the story and writing alone this has almost no hook and relies on subtle hints to create future intrigue as a hook. you want to know what is in hiding and how it will all play out.....well that is what we are meant to feel.
quite honestly, for me at least, it doesn't. BUT, and this is WHY i rate this so highly, despite currently lacking the writing hook, the developer uses their artistic talent to keep the reader pulled in by allowing the pictures to tell some of the story.
just for me, at this stage, the story is just not yet far enough along in it's opening to have me engrossed. the art certainly does.
when the story progresses to really involve it's plot devices i will no doubt be raising this to max review score, but for this stage i don't feel the same anticipation as i do for others here i enjoy reading.
i know i should, yet i'm still just nibbling the worm
now, renders are off the charts. facial expressions, backgrounds, attention to every detail....yes it's at least equal to the best i have seen. nothing i write here will add to the high praise, i have no doubt (not read other reviews yet), others here have given in lavish detail.
i'm no expert but this was stunning to look at.
i have more to say but not first without talking about my favourite part of a VN. yes i love the N over the V and this one falls a little short there so far.
it's NOT in the dialogue as it is excellently written.
if you take the story and writing alone this has almost no hook and relies on subtle hints to create future intrigue as a hook. you want to know what is in hiding and how it will all play out.....well that is what we are meant to feel.
quite honestly, for me at least, it doesn't. BUT, and this is WHY i rate this so highly, despite currently lacking the writing hook, the developer uses their artistic talent to keep the reader pulled in by allowing the pictures to tell some of the story.
just for me, at this stage, the story is just not yet far enough along in it's opening to have me engrossed. the art certainly does.
when the story progresses to really involve it's plot devices i will no doubt be raising this to max review score, but for this stage i don't feel the same anticipation as i do for others here i enjoy reading.
i know i should, yet i'm still just nibbling the worm