- Oct 8, 2022
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Thank you so much for trying the game, commenting and pointing out the problems!So, for my first play-through, I have to say not a bad start. English is not overall bad, just a few tweaks here and there with a proofreader then you are solid. I have never played a VN with AI art, so this idea is very welcome. I can clearly see the upside to using AI-generated art, as long as you can keep the same style thorough out. For this being your first game, and I don't know your background with AI-generated work, just a note from my point of view, depending on what you're using you can get really detailed with lighting, shadows, and resolution. Can't wait to see where this goes from here.
I have seen a few more complaints about the English, I will try to ask the friend that helped me to proofread to chapter 4 to check the previous episodes.
I am trying to personally edit scenes to make them look consistent on characters (I have some background in normal art rather than AI one like previous personal art version. I am trying to improve on it.) but I might be fail in some scenes so Is there a specific scene that bothers you? I can edit it.