Now this game...I dont know what to say... its probably too early...but I have to say its one of the amazing art works out on this website. The beginning is more for RPG/mmoRPG fans to relate to, I have played my fair share of those, but there's a bit too much game dialogue and not enough real life dialogue.
I would recommend focusing on the interactions with the people instead of the VR-games(ofcourse don't remove the gaming aspect of it, considering its focused on the particular VR game). But overall, since too early to say anything worth of value, it's a great start, renders are amazing, characters are amazing, and the story has emotion to it. Very few do these type of games.
Keep it up, you'll climb faster if you keep on like this.