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danvo2004

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Here's my WT & Improvement Mod for Reload v0.1
(Updating, will take sometime coz technical issues)

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I have corrected a few obvious mistakes. There will be some mistakes, coz I'm not a native Russian speaker. I tried my best. Let me know if you find any error.



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sorry just wondering if someone is updating the WT for ep2 ?
 
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the_high_king

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According to some, there's basically no NTR in this game. But to others, the MC is a HARD BETA CUCK. Who am I to believe? Could I get some insight on this? Thanks.
 

Dhtolc

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Thank you for your comments. I read it.
Why so much aggression? This is my first game and it's only episode 2 yet. I am very disappointed in the community of this portal. I was expecting some kind of sound advice, not comments along the lines of: see harem, want to see harem in version 2. In the second! Seriously?
Ok. I'll release all 10 episodes as planned anyway.
It's my hobby. I'm not a professional. I just want to share a story. All of the money raised on patreon goes to improving the game, currently on translate. Not into my wallet.
 

fabulous007

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I feel a bit sorry for you. Honestly a part of this community is cancer when it comes to anything that could be more or less related to ntr. Just look at the last review, 0 objectivity, pure bashing, how can this even be considered a valid review. We're in kindergarten. But it's cool if you don't take it to heart.
 

Dhtolc

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You said that your game will have harem
With romance elements .

But here we see all the potional Li getting fucked by other mans
Gf is how cheat on mc no harem games has ntr

If we leave all the gfs who are fucking others then who are left for mc ??

We know that all girls are not Virgins
But making them look like a cheap slut it's not a bright idea
No one wants a cheap slut who just want to jump on everyone
In there harem
This is the second version dude, I'm still introducing you to the world. As for the harem, in the second episode there is the option to have sex with any of the 3 girls at the party. If you're expecting a full-fledged harem in version 2. I have to disappoint you. Harem finales, will be in the finale. It's just logic.
Throughout the later episodes, there will be other fetishes and romantic lines. Throughout all versions, you'll be able to build yourself a harem by the finale. BUT NOT IN THE SECOND VERSION.
And you say everyone around you is engaged except the MC, for the current time with the MC - 4 sex scenes.

As for NTR. It will be in the game, but it will be implemented with the main involvement of the MC.

The MC "cheating" scene at the beginning of the game, is needed for the story. It just had to show that Christina is a whore.
I was surprised at all that who thought Christina was his girlfriend. He's just an errand boy for her. And for him the girl he likes. BUT NOT HIS GIRLFRIEND.

I will try to reveal the motivations of the characters in the next versions.
 

mofonistik

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This is the second version dude, I'm still introducing you to the world. As for the harem, in the second episode there is the option to have sex with any of the 3 girls at the party. If you're expecting a full-fledged harem in version 2. I have to disappoint you. Harem finales, will be in the finale. It's just logic.
Throughout the later episodes, there will be other fetishes and romantic lines. Throughout all versions, you'll be able to build yourself a harem by the finale. BUT NOT IN THE SECOND VERSION.
And you say everyone around you is engaged except the MC, for the current time with the MC - 4 sex scenes.

As for NTR. It will be in the game, but it will be implemented with the main involvement of the MC.

The MC "cheating" scene at the beginning of the game, is needed for the story. It just had to show that Christina is a whore.
I was surprised at all that who thought Christina was his girlfriend. He's just an errand boy for her. And for him the girl he likes. BUT NOT HIS GIRLFRIEND.

I will try to reveal the motivations of the characters in the next versions.
You're acting like the criticism the game has received has been that the harem isn't being assembled quickly enough, rather than that other guys are banging the girls in the game while MC is doing whatever. If that's your story, cool, but it's not exactly what most harem or romance fans seem to look for. At least now you're admitting it will be an NTR game. Not sure why you're so upset with the response. If you didn't want this response, you should have been more open about what the game actually is, instead of building expectations it isn't likely to live up to.

Some of the criticism is too harsh, but it's not for the most part the way you are portraying it - people complaining there isn't a harem within minutes.
 

linkinn

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One word of advice, don't mix Harem and NTR/Cheating or wathever you are calling it. And not saying this as a personal opinion, it's just common sense that they don't mix. Harem = 2 dicks too many dicks.

And as far as i remember the MC was going to the whore apartment to ask her to be his girlfriend so it is NTR and not "cheating", you introduced her to the player as a possible LI and then showed her getting fucked/sucking or wathever happened, you can't get angry with the response.
 

Dhtolc

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Well, apparently we have different concepts of NTR.

Let's be clear. Harem is a genre in which you will be able to collect a lot of girls and have sex with them all at once or in turns. If that's the case, that's the way I planned it.

Romantic relationships, by design, can be built with all the main characters and reach the "finale" of the relationship.

I might be wrong, but NTR is cheating, right?
I suggest the player in the following versions have sex with other people's wives. How NTR is this?

But I think I know what you're talking about. If NTR, it's much easier to tell the story on behalf of the MC girl and create a story around her.
And if the guy is an MC, it's better to "fuck all around".
 

fabulous007

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One word of advice, don't mix Harem and NTR/Cheating or wathever you are calling it. And not saying this as a personal opinion, it's just common sense that they don't mix.
It's not "common sense" at all, it's just an opinion. Maybe it's not popular to do it the way this dev does it, but it's not inherently wrong in any way. There is no objective reason at all why romance or harem couldn't mix with this kind of stuff in a story at all, there are a lot of games that do so.
You guys don't like it, maybe it's not popular here, and it's fine, but call it what it is. No need to be angry just because a genre isn't what you guys are looking for (I'm refering to Mr.LaLa Ji statement). The dev knows now.
 
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punisher2099

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It's not "common sense" at all, it's just an opinion. Maybe it's not popular to do it the way this dev do it, but it's not inherently wrong in any way. There is no objective reason at all why romance or harem couldn't mix with this kind of stuff in a story at all, there are a lot of games that do so.
You guys don't like it, maybe it's not popular, and it's fine, but call it what it is.
Twice the renders, double the script size, continuity errors, potentially less content for one side or the other......
 

linkinn

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It's not "common sense" at all, it's just an opinion. Maybe it's not popular to do it the way this dev do it, but it's not inherently wrong in any way. There is no objective reason at all why romance or harem couldn't mix with this kind of stuff in a story at all, there are a lot of games that do so.
You guys don't like it, maybe it's not popular, and it's fine, but call it what it is.
I would love to see one of those games, care to name one that has Harem/Romance/NTR? I didn't search but i'am curious now.

They are the opposite of eachother, you would need a talented writer and hell of a team to make a successful game with those tags.
 

fabulous007

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I would love to see one of those games, care to name one that has Harem/Romance/NTR? I didn't search but i'am curious now.

They are the opposite of eachother, you would need a talented writer and hell of a team to make a successful game with those tags.
I don't see why they'd be opposites, to be clear I just consider a harem game, a game in which you can pursue several females at the same time.
I'm not exactly a specialist, but I know Babysitter, A Family Venture, the Spellbook, Culture Shock, The Tyrant or Long Story Short that have a a considerable ntr part. Even Our Red String could be considered as having ntr, it's just that you have two point of views (male and female). I'll be honest, despite what it may appear here I'm not that much into ntr itself, I like when MC isn't the only dick in town but that's pretty much it. So I'd be better qualified if the list was about swinging for example.
 
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fabulous007

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Note I don't think any of those any might have crossed 300 patreon line
Even some are in development for almost 3 years
Well I know that T4bbo has more than 800 patrons. Won't mention Eva Kiss.
And even if it wasn't the case, what about it ? Are the very highly popular games the only good games around ? It'd be like saying Hollywood movies are the only movies worth watching.

My point wasn't about popularity, just that it's perfectly possible.

The all above game you mentioned they all have avoidable ntr
Not forced ntr
I admit it's true yes (if my memory is not wrong). That being said, my point was once again just that a harem story can have this type of content, that it's not incompatible.

And one more thing you should visit to those game thread there is daily fight between ntr and non ntr players
It's not exactly the games' fault. It's just because as already mentioned yesterday, a part of the community in F95 can be childish and entitled.
 
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caxhub

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Download android Ep.2Public APK
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HansDampf788

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I don't see why they'd be opposites, to be clear I just consider a harem game, a game in which you can pursue several females at the same time.
I'm not exactly a specialist, but I know Babysitter, A Family Venture, the Spellbook, Culture Shock, The Tyrant or Long Story Short that have a considerable ntr part. Even Our Red String could be considered as having ntr, it's just that you have two point of views (male and female). I'll be honest, despite what it may appear here I'm not that much into ntr itself, I like when MC isn't the only dick in town but that's pretty much it. So I'd be better qualified if the list was about swinging for example.
As someone who, with very few exceptions only plays harem games I didn't play any of the games you listed.
 

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This is the second version dude, I'm still introducing you to the world. As for the harem, in the second episode there is the option to have sex with any of the 3 girls at the party. If you're expecting a full-fledged harem in version 2. I have to disappoint you. Harem finales, will be in the finale. It's just logic.
Throughout the later episodes, there will be other fetishes and romantic lines. Throughout all versions, you'll be able to build yourself a harem by the finale. BUT NOT IN THE SECOND VERSION.
And you say everyone around you is engaged except the MC, for the current time with the MC - 4 sex scenes.

As for NTR. It will be in the game, but it will be implemented with the main involvement of the MC.

The MC "cheating" scene at the beginning of the game, is needed for the story. It just had to show that Christina is a whore.
I was surprised at all that who thought Christina was his girlfriend. He's just an errand boy for her. And for him the girl he likes. BUT NOT HIS GIRLFRIEND.

I will try to reveal the motivations of the characters in the next versions.
My G the problem isn't that we want harem right away at all. The problem is that the game has a unavoidable ntr setup which basically you already lost all audience of ntr haters and harem lovers. You basically mixed two thing that never works unless that said content is avoidable if not then we got this situation going.

You expect me to have that whore as a love interest later on i mean are you fucking serious? And that's still counts as ntr because mc is basically in love with her and thinking that she is his girlfriend. And not only that but we keep seeing other love interest's getting fucked by other dudes which is just to have more sex scenes i guess? So what we doing is making a harem with bunch of fucking whores later on? Who the fuck wants sloppy seconds girls as harem girls? They fucking EVERYBODY in the game and we seeing happening but "oh don't worry she is a harem member girl just wait your line they need to fuck other people first yeah then maybe after that you can take her as harem girl" WTF?

I mean if you are not new here you would probably now that you already lost all support you will potentially get by harem lovers. But hey you do you i guess as hobby. I'm sorry to say it but you should know that you will not be getting much support at all. But i wish you good luck.
 
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This is the second version dude, I'm still introducing you to the world. As for the harem, in the second episode there is the option to have sex with any of the 3 girls at the party. If you're expecting a full-fledged harem in version 2. I have to disappoint you. Harem finales, will be in the finale. It's just logic.
Throughout the later episodes, there will be other fetishes and romantic lines. Throughout all versions, you'll be able to build yourself a harem by the finale. BUT NOT IN THE SECOND VERSION.
And you say everyone around you is engaged except the MC, for the current time with the MC - 4 sex scenes.

As for NTR. It will be in the game, but it will be implemented with the main involvement of the MC.

The MC "cheating" scene at the beginning of the game, is needed for the story. It just had to show that Christina is a whore.
I was surprised at all that who thought Christina was his girlfriend. He's just an errand boy for her. And for him the girl he likes. BUT NOT HIS GIRLFRIEND.

I will try to reveal the motivations of the characters in the next versions.
No one expects a full fledged Harem on the second update, dude. You are missing the point everyone making. We get that the beginning scene where that whore is getting gang banged is necessary. But it's clear that you are trying to set her up as LI in the future.
And what about the second scene where MC'S uncle bangs the girl with glasses in his office. It's clear she is a potential LI. And you made us choose one of three girls while his moron friend bangs other two. They also seems as potential LI.
What we all trying to say is every potential LI is nothing but whores. They jumps at other guy's dick at the first chance they get. And the worst part is we have to watch them getting banged.
We don't expect every LI to be virgin. We also don't want to see LI getting banged by others. Do you really expect people to have interest in whores as LI? No wants whores as lover or even if some of them were whores we don't want to hear, see or know about their sexual conquests.
 

Atourq

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Really like the models and I noticed either the artist or the dev has a thing for ahegao.

And to chime in to this discussion, I'm not fond of NTR, but I don't understand all the hate the dev is getting for it. After playing the game, the ntr scene is pretty avoidable. The only drawback I see is that, there's just not enough spicy content with the MC to justify the scenes the player experiences. Especially since all, but one of the sex scenes, are not being experienced by the player as the MC.
 
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