zerozip0

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I see talks of both Engrish and unavoidable ntr in more than one significant instance.
Those reasons alone will keep me at bay.
But even though I might not be the target audience for this one I still want to wish the developer good luck with the project!
 

gr33nappleboy

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  1. Very crude to say the least with Russian tags and prompts still showing up everywhere. Script definitely needs a proofreader
  2. Kate and Kristina are pretty attractive renders. Anna isn't bad but looks like she's in her early 30s already
  3. Would've preferred an option for non-NTR, as others have mentioned. Let us develop a relationship first and then drop some choices here and there that may or may not lead to an NTR route
  4. Wouldn't hurt to up the size of the d*cks in the game. They're kinda comically small and MC needs all the help he can get. Lol
 

Trasher2018

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I am not a native English speaker. I will try to find a professional translator.
Thanks for the comments. I will fix it in the next version.

P.S. Google Translate
Maybe try this:

imho way better and it even helps to learn the language because it shows vocabulary and alternative translation. And you can change a word in the translation and the program restructures the whole sentence to fit the new word.
 

Claudio83

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I hope the NTR only serves as a device to move the plot, and is not a recurring thing. Incest and NTR never mix well, that's how you start a flame war and piss off most people.

Renders look decent, but the non-existent overview and the few number of previews don't paint a pretty picture.
Good Luck to the dev, will try this VN after a few months. Hopefully, if any future NTR is added, it's optional.
Instead NTR and incest can mix well between them, see the game "Spellbook" (https://f95zone.to/threads/the-spellbook-v0-13-0-0-naughtygames.21682/) for example… also if i prefer the classic wife/girlfriend sharing/cuckolding path rather than the mom/aunt/sister sharing/cuckolding path!
 

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English needs a lot, I mean a lot of work. Dialogues feels like robotic with no emotions and empty. I don't konw how Mc got with Cristina without any back bone. He catches his gf getting gang banged and says," They are too healthy" and runs away like a pussy. This is absolutely ridiculous.:LOL::ROFLMAO:
This game needs a lot of work overally.
 

Deleted member 2412505

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1) needs proofreading (Enrgish mode on)
2) there's avoidable NTR (it happens anyway but you can choose to go away)
3) choices seem a little bit sudden or random with no context, I suggest to keep it simple
4) renders are nice; quality is reasonable

Incest & MILF are my favourite tags so I'll keep an eye on this one. Good luck!
You don't know the difference between avoidable and skipabble
 

Sturbuck

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Good renders but dude you do really need to work on the dialogues..get help from somebody who knows English better..
 
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