How do I start ... This is a first for me, not just first post, first comment on a VN (ever) but this is the first story that has pulled me in so deeply I couldn't leave if I wanted to... Yet I feel you have only scratched the surface of what this story line and these characters can become in the future.
I have terrible insomnia, once the family is down for the night I have a lot of free time.
I've played/read so many VN's that have good story, okay character creation but they never seem to come together completely.
As I've said .. this is a first.
Your character creation is great, the renders are outstanding and the story ........ Bravo.
Here's hoping for many, many more updates.