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ImperialD

Devoted Member
Oct 24, 2019
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downloaded the 4 > 4.5 , got this eroor when opening the phone to stats
ok found a few more ...


hitting ignore got my by these each time ... just to let you know :)
 
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ookiisame

New Member
Jan 15, 2022
3
0
Lots of Renpy scripting bugs and realLy bad dialog. I presume this is supposed to read like a cheap porn movie. There is a lot of potential here but the horrible cliche after cliche and cheezy dialog really detracts from the story. The renders are generally well done. This can take a lot of time and effort, and I applaud that work.

Also, there needs to be a CLEAR sign that if you elect to 'prank?' Linda by having her abducted and threated to sell into slavery, that your MC is not actually engaging in business with people involved in human trafficking. Becuase currently the story so far makes it seem like Ming is actually involved in human tafficking, and that is fucked up! If it is all orchistrated and acted, I have yet to see that part of the story.
 
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v1900

Well-Known Member
Apr 21, 2020
1,076
2,617
Lots of Renpy scripting bugs and realLy bad dialog. I presume this is supposed to read like a cheap porn movie. There is a lot of potential here but the horrible cliche after cliche and cheezy dialog really detracts from the story. The renders are generally well done. This can take a lot of time and effort, and I applaud that work.

Also, there needs to be a CLEAR sign that if you elect to 'prank?' Linda by having her abducted and threated to sell into slavery, that your MC is not actually engaging in business with people involved in human trafficking. Becuase currently the story so far makes it seem like Ming is actually involved in human tafficking, and that is fucked up! If it is all orchistrated and acted, I have yet to see that part of the story.
I don't see how you thought that was a prank. Linda was going to be sold regardless of what the MC did. He just made a deal to guarantee she was sold to him and not some random person at auction.

Linda owed money to Ming who is an underground criminal boss with ties to human trafficking (and I think she might know what happened to MC's mom). When the MC blocks the money transfer Linda made to embezzle money, Linda defaults on her payment to Ming. Ming then intends to sell her to recover her money.

The MC is not an actual nice person as implied by himself and some details given during dialogue. He is a mercenary MOFO that happens to work for the government ("the good guys") from time to time doing some shady stuff. So him being the piece of shit that he is, in essence bought Linda in a presale. :KEK:
 

Freki

Well-Known Member
Game Developer
May 16, 2017
1,572
1,217
Lots of Renpy scripting bugs and realLy bad dialog. I presume this is supposed to read like a cheap porn movie. There is a lot of potential here but the horrible cliche after cliche and cheezy dialog really detracts from the story. The renders are generally well done. This can take a lot of time and effort, and I applaud that work.

Also, there needs to be a CLEAR sign that if you elect to 'prank?' Linda by having her abducted and threated to sell into slavery, that your MC is not actually engaging in business with people involved in human trafficking. Becuase currently the story so far makes it seem like Ming is actually involved in human tafficking, and that is fucked up! If it is all orchistrated and acted, I have yet to see that part of the story.
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Avaron1974

Resident Lesbian
Aug 22, 2018
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Ming is heavily involved in trafficking and a lot of other shady shit that goes down.

She didn't take Linda for the MC, she was going to do that anyway. The only thing she did fo the MC was give him a chance to buy her.

He messed up and didn't realise the kind of person he was dealing with and, which came as no surprise to anyone, the criminal double crossed him ... le gasp.

Linda owed Ming a lot of money. MC didn't show the proper respect Ming thought she was due.

Pretty sure, at least 80% sure, Ming was behind MC's mother disappearing.
 

DA22

Devoted Member
Jan 10, 2018
8,082
16,668
Ming is heavily involved in trafficking and a lot of other shady shit that goes down.

She didn't take Linda for the MC, she was going to do that anyway. The only thing she did fo the MC was give him a chance to buy her.

He messed up and didn't realise the kind of person he was dealing with and, which came as no surprise to anyone, the criminal double crossed him ... le gasp.

Linda owed Ming a lot of money. MC didn't show the proper respect Ming thought she was due.

Pretty sure, at least 80% sure, Ming was behind MC's mother disappearing.
Maybe not behind it, but involved with pretty likely. I also suspect the business his father was involved in might have been a big reason, we might find out later.
 

ptahn

Active Member
Jun 23, 2018
912
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There's this new technology called a notepad, you should look into it.
The way I do it is better. I click on "Your content", all my posts show up. The posts are short, so the whole message is there. I have a link to my comment which takes me right to the game's discussion thread. I can check for updates, I can go right to the developer's Patreon page. Much better than a notepad.
 

Freki

Well-Known Member
Game Developer
May 16, 2017
1,572
1,217
The way I do it is better. I click on "Your content", all my posts show up. The posts are short, so the whole message is there. I have a link to my comment which takes me right to the game's discussion thread. I can check for updates, I can go right to the developer's Patreon page. Much better than a notepad.
there is an even faster way. book mark the patreon page and use that, one click and you're there to see what is going on. lol but cool that you keep track of that. I mean what are you keeping track of it for? those numbers will mean different things to different people.
 

HHTG

Member
Jul 17, 2017
115
544
The way I do it is better. I click on "Your content", all my posts show up. The posts are short, so the whole message is there. I have a link to my comment which takes me right to the game's discussion thread. I can check for updates, I can go right to the developer's Patreon page. Much better than a notepad.
Do you want to know what is even faster? Your posts getting reported by being spam, and deleted, because you just want to take notes with a public post :KEK:
 

cxx

Message Maestro
Nov 14, 2017
66,657
33,606
so since this is around 18 gigs size i guess this has quite a much of content.
 
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