I see plenty of potential in this game . Girls and the graphics are quite well done. Characters are pretty unique .
Personally and I do mean well and try to take this as constructive criticism , the overall delivery and story telling needs improvements. From the playthrough I can see the major plot elements and how you are trying to make it an engaging story , mystery , passion , lust , and whatnot . However , the storytelling elements are how I would say not polished nor wholly engaging, it lacks a certain depth , being blunt with this , i can see you are adding multiple backstories and character traits from many elements (army , hacking? , espionage , etc) but other than the initial delivery of these elements there is an indication that there was not much research done regarding these subjects it makes the overall delivery during these scenes very fake and lacks realism and due to the manner some of these *skills* are introduced it basically functions as plot armor, backstories as well although they serve a general purpose fails to deliver an emotional depth to the characters . At certain points , the harem and love all seem a little rushed , and the MC's skills and abilities are never clearly mentioned causing him to appear skewed at times , there is not much actualization on his skillsets or his capabilities and from the current playthrough it does make me question and wonder as up until the end of the current version it really is not very clear if he is capable or not , he shows intelligence and cunning at certain junctions only to act like a horny teenager or naive individual at others . The integration of the storyline also isn't seamless , it's like there is definitely an intent to make everyone connected but at the same time it causes the storyline and characters to be convoluted.
To sum it up before it seems that i am ranting.
1) Character depth , backstory integration
2) To deliver the story seamlessly
3) Some research done on how to deliver elements on skillsets .
Other than to everyone and especially the developer , its just my two cents as i would love to see the full potential this title can grow to, i did enjoy the game and has my support!
Thank you !
Personally and I do mean well and try to take this as constructive criticism , the overall delivery and story telling needs improvements. From the playthrough I can see the major plot elements and how you are trying to make it an engaging story , mystery , passion , lust , and whatnot . However , the storytelling elements are how I would say not polished nor wholly engaging, it lacks a certain depth , being blunt with this , i can see you are adding multiple backstories and character traits from many elements (army , hacking? , espionage , etc) but other than the initial delivery of these elements there is an indication that there was not much research done regarding these subjects it makes the overall delivery during these scenes very fake and lacks realism and due to the manner some of these *skills* are introduced it basically functions as plot armor, backstories as well although they serve a general purpose fails to deliver an emotional depth to the characters . At certain points , the harem and love all seem a little rushed , and the MC's skills and abilities are never clearly mentioned causing him to appear skewed at times , there is not much actualization on his skillsets or his capabilities and from the current playthrough it does make me question and wonder as up until the end of the current version it really is not very clear if he is capable or not , he shows intelligence and cunning at certain junctions only to act like a horny teenager or naive individual at others . The integration of the storyline also isn't seamless , it's like there is definitely an intent to make everyone connected but at the same time it causes the storyline and characters to be convoluted.
To sum it up before it seems that i am ranting.
1) Character depth , backstory integration
2) To deliver the story seamlessly
3) Some research done on how to deliver elements on skillsets .
Other than to everyone and especially the developer , its just my two cents as i would love to see the full potential this title can grow to, i did enjoy the game and has my support!
Thank you !
