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As a fan fiction, I think you pulled it off.
If you liked making this, I say keep making more. The more you do, the better you will get. Everyone starts somewhere.
if you want to check out something that I'm actually trying on check out Journey. just click the signatures below my name and it will direct you to my forum. that is where you can download it. It's short right now because I'm still working on it and making sure I have more content coming to actually have it last more than 5 minutes. if you do check it out let me know. good or bad
 
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first, thank you for your kind word,s and thank you for the notes I will write them down and keep them in mind. also the reason why the game looks like it was thrown together is because it was, at the beginning I really didn't intend to release this for anyone. I just wanted to release some frustration out on dave's face because I hate how he treats Gail. the dude has had it coming to him for a long time. and I just beat damaged code to it that's all. the next one I'm probably going to do is one about Gail's useless boyfriend haven't thought it out yet. There are so many characters that want their face broken it's hard to pick which one to do next or maybe they will all be in the next game and I will actually take my time and do this one right and turn it into a story that someone will want to read.
hey also I since you are doing a review on my work why don't you check out something I'm actually trying its called Journey. just click the signatures below my name and it will direct you to my forum. that is where you can download it. It's short right now because I'm still working on it and making sure I have more content coming to actually have it last more than 5 minutes. if you do check it out let me know. good or bad. just do the same thing you did for this revenge
 

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Well that was a waste of 300 mb, a complet lack of respect for one self and for everybody out there in the bussiness looking to make an actually decent work... i shall only touch myself once with this.
 

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Damajedkoda did not ask the player's opinion whether the player wants to fuck with the boss or not. The same mistake was made by the author of this fan fiction. Where is the choice at all? I like the boss and I want to call the police so that they put this ugly, stupid jock who meddles IN HIS OWN AFFAIRS - an envious loser! But the developer does not give a choice. It feels like this is not a female protagonist at all. The main character there is this boring, ugly bumpkin.

Advice to the developer: stop playing women's games.
 

javikaston

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Damajedkoda did not ask the player's opinion whether the player wants to fuck with the boss or not. The same mistake was made by the author of this fan fiction. Where is the choice at all? I like the boss and I want to call the police so that they put this ugly, stupid jock who meddles IN HIS OWN AFFAIRS - an envious loser! But the developer does not give a choice. It feels like this is not a female protagonist at all. The main character there is this boring, ugly bumpkin.

Advice to the developer: stop playing women's games.
It's very funny that my Vn triggered you that badly. I just want to say thank you for your feedback. It's because of you and people like you. That I've decided to not only make another one. BUT! I'm going to make a series of this. Also thanks especially to your kind words I'm starting the sequel tonight Because I have so much more to say. So again thank you for your kind words. Also since you didn't like this one. You haven't seen anything yet. So keep coming back and leaving your lovely comments I need the inspiration to keep making more!

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Losersriot

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It's very funny that my Vn triggered you that badly. I just want to say thank you for your feedback. It's because of you and people like you. That I've decided to not only make another one. BUT! I'm going to make a series of this. Also thanks especially to your kind words I'm starting the sequel tonight Because I have so much more to say. So again thank you for your kind words. Also since you didn't like this one. You haven't seen anything yet. So keep coming back and leaving your lovely comments I need the inspiration to keep making more!

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Don't waste your time. A gay porn hero of the 80s with a mustache is even worse than Gayle's boss. The original game is beautiful because it has Hugo in it. Who Gail will marry.
 

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Don't waste your time. A gay porn hero of the 80s with a mustache is even worse than Gayle's boss. The original game is beautiful because it has Hugo in it. Who Gail will marry.
A gay superhero porn made in the 80's now there's an idea. Keep up the good work. Oh and thanks for the idea with Hugo. I didn't know which dude was going to be in the next one. Now I know. You are so good with your kind words.

Also I agree with you the office is an amazing game. I've already donated a lot of money to him and thank him for making the game on a normal basis.
 
1.50 star(s) 2 Votes