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Good renders. Everything else... Well, gameplay is non-existent at this point. Designs are not great but i guess for a patreon NSFW game they are decent. It's surely better than another "i wanna stick it in my sister" bore.
The real problem for me is the writing. Imo, there are two things that surely can ease writing in NSFW game.
First, keeping the tone light and self-aware. C'mon. It's a shitshow for wankers. I'm not saying include a thousand fourth wall jokes cause Akabur does it but look at "Monster prom", for example. Not a NSFW game but style of writing there is really spot on. It's not very good in a traditional way but it's like a great fanfic writing. Very trashy and absurd but also really fun and it suits the game overall. Also "MP" is centered around characters and boy-o-boy in a porn game character development is much more important than your "awesome" story about ancient magic book your character found in the basement.
Second, center your plot around sex. That's why most people are playing your game. Making it the main focus means you don't need conspiracy theories, global catastrophies or any other bullshit you have zero idea how to build properly. Look at "Four elements trainer".
If you are doing neither of those two you must be really sure about your writing skills. Because if you fuck it up you get "Dreams of Desire". Anybody really gives a shit about all it's magic nonsense? I'm skipping it since episode six or something. It's a bore to players and takes development time from creator.
The real problem for me is the writing. Imo, there are two things that surely can ease writing in NSFW game.
First, keeping the tone light and self-aware. C'mon. It's a shitshow for wankers. I'm not saying include a thousand fourth wall jokes cause Akabur does it but look at "Monster prom", for example. Not a NSFW game but style of writing there is really spot on. It's not very good in a traditional way but it's like a great fanfic writing. Very trashy and absurd but also really fun and it suits the game overall. Also "MP" is centered around characters and boy-o-boy in a porn game character development is much more important than your "awesome" story about ancient magic book your character found in the basement.
Second, center your plot around sex. That's why most people are playing your game. Making it the main focus means you don't need conspiracy theories, global catastrophies or any other bullshit you have zero idea how to build properly. Look at "Four elements trainer".
If you are doing neither of those two you must be really sure about your writing skills. Because if you fuck it up you get "Dreams of Desire". Anybody really gives a shit about all it's magic nonsense? I'm skipping it since episode six or something. It's a bore to players and takes development time from creator.
- Dec 17, 2016
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amazing renders, impressive intro to a very promising story line, i looking forward to more of this, i m glad i downloaded and played this demo. Keep up the good work and i m looking forward to episode 1.
Edit: please add save and load game option and secondly if possible make a walk-through when you release episode 1 because in this pretty much every choice seems to affect the gameplay in one way or the other along with dialogues and further choice the MC has, even in demo certain scenes and dialogues depends on the choices we make.
Edit: please add save and load game option and secondly if possible make a walk-through when you release episode 1 because in this pretty much every choice seems to affect the gameplay in one way or the other along with dialogues and further choice the MC has, even in demo certain scenes and dialogues depends on the choices we make.
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if you are talking about Cyberpunk 2077 then that has been in development since mid 2016
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I dunno about the BDSM part but
liking the color scheme the environment environment
oh whats that booty tag, yep yep sign me up
I'll post my thoughts
liking the color scheme the environment environment
oh whats that booty tag, yep yep sign me up
I'll post my thoughts