Hello everyone!,
I would like to thank each of you separately for your comments, positive feedback and constructive suggestions. And of course for the pledge.
My life has culminated to this point, where I can finally combine my loves of cyberpunk, a neon aesthetic, and jerking off.
Haha, you made my day !THX
Looks very promising, already tried it this evening
The visuals are really awesome and the story looks very promising
Can't wait for the next episode!
The only downsides so far would be a missing save system, and that the configuration doesn't get saved yet, meaning you have to configure the sound volume every time you start the game.
Another one would be that the intro and outro song don't care about the sound volume setting at all So they are pretty loud But as far as I know it's already being worked on
So good luck with this awesome game!
Thanks for testing, and good word about my story.
SaveSystem - I will add it in next episodes, need to do some test
Music(volume) - I'm woring on it, next time it will work much better
There was a time when guys played adult games solely for masturbation. Times have changed.
We've grown up?
I want to gave them/him/her the benefit of the doubt and wish good luck.. but why I have a bad feeling?
'him'
thx for benefit of good luck, no reason to have bad feelings
Good for me. I just hope, the story will be original enough to not bore me to death. Right now, it is a bit clicheed. But the setting and most of the writing are fine, so maybe it will overcome the clichees and be great. Maybe.
A porngame of the stupid kind is fine too, but that setting and the ominous foreshading make me interested in something more.
It is just short demo to show you my skills, to leave "my comfort zone" and show world my product. We have small talk with my copywriter how to expand story and make it more amazing, She will add some changes
Those renders are mind-blowingly awesome. Putting this on the watch list.
Thank you!
Very good Demo with just the right amount of sex and story, already like the MC. Well done creators.
Thank you!
Very promising start. Good luck to the dev already pledged.
Double big thanks, for positive word and of course for the pledge.
Can u make Android version
I will see what i can to do with that. I will let you know.
Cyberpunk 2077 demo is out now 0_0
Haha! I am very pleased that you say so.
Is this a novel? Animated? Nothing here or on the patreon suggest what the gameplay actually is.
I will add today some more info on my Patreon page(and here). Thanks for suggestion.
Good renders. Everything else... Well, gameplay is non-existent at this point. Designs are not great but i guess for a patreon NSFW game they are decent. It's surely better than another "i wanna stick it in my sister" bore.
The real problem for me is the writing. Imo, there are two things that surely can ease writing in NSFW game.
First, keeping the tone light and self-aware. C'mon. It's a shitshow for wankers. I'm not saying include a thousand fourth wall jokes cause Akabur does it but look at "Monster prom", for example. Not a NSFW game but style of writing there is really spot on. It's not very good in a traditional way but it's like a great fanfic writing. Very trashy and absurd but also really fun and it suits the game overall. Also "MP" is centered around characters and boy-o-boy in a porn game character development is much more important than your "awesome" story about ancient magic book your character found in the basement.
Second, center your plot around sex. That's why most people are playing your game. Making it the main focus means you don't need conspiracy theories, global catastrophies or any other bullshit you have zero idea how to build properly. Look at "Four elements trainer".
If you are doing neither of those two you must be really sure about your writing skills. Because if you fuck it up you get "Dreams of Desire". Anybody really gives a shit about all it's magic nonsense? I'm skipping it since episode six or something. It's a bore to players and takes development time from creator.
Thank You for your opinion. Together with my copywriter we exchanged several emails as we can build this story to make it more interesting. Balanced sex - story. She will add now few more text lines to episode 1, I hope you will like it more.
amazing renders, impressive intro to a very promising story line, i looking forward to more of this, i m glad i downloaded and played this demo. Keep up the good work and i m looking forward to episode 1.
Edit: please add save and load game option and secondly if possible make a walk-through when you release episode 1 because in this pretty much every choice seems to affect the gameplay in one way or the other along with dialogues and further choice the MC has, even in demo certain scenes and dialogues depends on the choices we make.
Thank for your feedback, yes - there will be SaveSystem
Walk-throuh - good idea, after ep1 I will do it
...They need laser/strobe effects for the club, soft and wispy for the VIP room, dust motes for the warehouse, etc....
The worst thing is the music though. It's all obnoxiously loud and the only scene where it's used appropriately is in the club... Everywhere else it's just horribly distracting and undermines the tone they're trying to set... Even in the club they use a completely different track for the VIP room, instead of muting down the track that's already playing in the main club. Again this is the kind of shit they should be thinking about if they're trying to tell a serious story with a meaningful atmosphere.
Thank you for your time for constructive long comment
- lasers, lights etc - good idea
- music - Sorry for that, there is a lot complain about it, but this is good, next time I will spend more time on it. Mutting club music in VIP room - very briliant and simple idea... THANKS!
fantastic!
only thing i disliked the Old Docks soundtrack, it feels too intense
i wish you coulda smashed Stardust, everything jus seemed to go by quickly
No doubt the animation was also superb, top notch
hope this reaches 1m soon
Thanks! Small spoiler - EP1 starts in Detective aparment.. you and Stardust...let's get this party started
I hope too!
Finally a game where the Dev put work in, which means that he will get like 100 patreons tops as is usually the case..
Reality of things aside, the renders are of superior quality and I like all the extra details.
Really nice little demo however, just needs a bit more work and less edgy dialogue and I'm sure that it will get that 100 patreons!
Thank you! Yes - I'm trying my best, still learning Daz, Octane, 3ds max, and others software to make it unique as it is possible.
Nice! cyberpunk & 18+ content my life is gonna be sweet
But hating myself for playing because now the waiting game starts haha
don't worry, episode 1 it's on his way. After my copywriter add some lines I will release first part of ep1 (Detective apartment)
Sadly the link provided for Mac is not working.
go to my discord - there is link also - maybe there will work. In other case let me know - I will send you PM with link.
who needs porn, i'll just masturbate to the aesthetics
Thanks for that comment
Now that I've played it here are my thoughts:
Visuals are fucking outstanding especially the sex scenes.
Some typos need cleaned up.
MC needs to have a less silly name than Starkiller.
Theres nothing wrong with using royalty-free stock music but most of it doesn't fit the game and reminds me, in a bad way, of LoP/S&G games (and I say that as someone who likes those games). Needs more synthwave
random example of royalty-free synthwave
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Nothing wrong with Unity but definitely needs a text-skip button and a way to go back or reread previous lines.
Needs a save option.
The text description of events often doesn't match what is happening in the render.
Most of these are probably just because its an early demo though.
Thank you for your suggestions and positive feedback.
- save - it will be
- skip button - ok, no problem.
- on my discord channel - is special place #music
you can put links there, thanks!
I'll join others to compliment the devs on trying something different. The visuals are awesome and story looks interesting.
I'll be watching this one and hopefully, it'll continue to grow into a great game.
Thank you, your words mean a lot for me.
It's a good start. Aesthetic wise, I think they nailed it. The renders are good quality too. The writing needs an editor. You misspell "League" on the very first screen with text. What we can't tell from the demo is what the game will play like. That's the last piece of the puzzle. Will it have paths, will it have choices with consequences, we don't know yet. Very promising.
Thank you, Yes - a lot of paths, choises, consequences.
Cyberpunk hype! I'm on the same traiN! Great start, keep up the good work!
Thank you!
OMG, so long post
sorry for that
Thank you again for all coments and feedback.
We are in touch!
Best,
NeoX
