If I may add my tuppence worth, and a suggestion or two. The 2nd edit (fucking scene) ... the vignette is maybe just a little too dark, as is the light on the subjects. I'd lighten it up a bit more. The original left arm position to me suggests she is fondling his balls, as some women do, and I love. The 3rd edit is a much better pose, but I'd maybe make the outlines a little bolder, to make it more consistent with other images.
I like the edits and think I'll prolly put them in. I do agree with wibbled that the 12.3 images are a little too dark.
Honestly, compared to a lot of the other cgs, I think that the outlines are about right.
Was just about to say that I made them that dark to match the lighting of the previous scenes, and give you the non-vignette versions anyway, but oh well. Less uploading for me. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
I didn't mean to sound hyper critical, or put you off contributing, and perhaps I'm wrong about the vignette, I didn't compare it to previous images. I'm also very blunt in the way I say things, partly due to where I grew up, and a certain degree of autism, which may come across as aggressive, but wasn't my intention. I accept it's just my opinion, hence prefacing with "my tuppence worth". Regarding the line thickness. It is something I have dealt with myself, and found it hard to get consistency with the feel of the VN, which is partly to blame on the VN's own inconsistencies. The new kiss image does look better now, and compares better to the line thickness generally used in this VN.
By an odd coincidence, I just rewatched the pump scene. I have no idea, but perhaps you could ask a squirrel?
I didn't mean to sound hyper critical of your hyper critical criticism that I didn't find hyper critical at all.
Yeah, I have more work for you (tippos and visual errors and requests) but I'm lazy right now I'll do that when I'm maybe less lazy within a few days or something.
That looks pretty darn good! A bit of strangeness going on with the blanket at the top of her head, and a bit of line clipping on the side of the penis next to her hand, but otherwise it looks great!I guess this one will go
'You make something nice and some hamfisted oaf try to animate it...and making a pisspoor job too!' ?
Anyway, still trying to learn opentoonz...even something as basic as this is a challange for me
hence the mess...
I thought the plastic tool would be easy to use for the blanket, maybe it is - I just can't figure it out...
I got frustrated with the plastic tool, so I cut the moving part of the blanket in 4 parts and rotated them...
thats one way to bust a nut
Will take a look at the edits and put them in.
Corrected the issue! I never play without twins on, so never noticed. It was a variable substitution problem, just changed it to "me" instead.
You don't need to use the rpa file. It's mostly there so people don't have to transfer 7000 image files, you can just leave it as a folder (and delete the rpa file), then the game will use the images folder.
For the make-out scene you have to wait on sex a bit. You can still have sex after the make out session. This was one of the first scenes I made alteration to, so that's why it's a little wonky with two paths through it instead of one. I've thought of taking the early sex option out, but it's minor.
Nope, just a typo on my end. Took me forever to actually spot the issue ("done" vs "down") even when you pointed it out
. But, corrected! Thanks for the correction!
