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RareRirorie

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Sheeshing rn tho fr fr no cap. So make combat easier - thus faster - once all the coombat scenes are in, there shouldnt be an issue for those wanting to juice em to prolong coombat anyhow. Add those bubbles above every scene avail. NPC so people dont get lost/overlook someone. Add random NPC with just few snippet lines to make the world feel a bit more alive. I will probs lay off of the minigames during the odd jobs and slowly start skipping them in new events just to get to the scene. Yet again, just exposition and straight to the scene - that should make things less annoying as well. No gameplay is probs better than bad gameplay, especially if I can substitute the gameplay with coompic, I guess.
 

Atl92

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Sheeshing rn tho fr fr no cap. So make combat easier - thus faster - once all the coombat scenes are in, there shouldnt be an issue for those wanting to juice em to prolong coombat anyhow. Add those bubbles above every scene avail. NPC so people dont get lost/overlook someone. Add random NPC with just few snippet lines to make the world feel a bit more alive. I will probs lay off of the minigames during the odd jobs and slowly start skipping them in new events just to get to the scene. Yet again, just exposition and straight to the scene - that should make things less annoying as well. No gameplay is probs better than bad gameplay, especially if I can substitute the gameplay with coompic, I guess.
Could keep the minigame for the first time you do it, then give an option to skip it everytime afterwards. Some ppl like doing small things like that.
 

d90art

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Sheeshing rn tho fr fr no cap. So make combat easier - thus faster - once all the coombat scenes are in, there shouldnt be an issue for those wanting to juice em to prolong coombat anyhow. Add those bubbles above every scene avail. NPC so people dont get lost/overlook someone. Add random NPC with just few snippet lines to make the world feel a bit more alive. I will probs lay off of the minigames during the odd jobs and slowly start skipping them in new events just to get to the scene. Yet again, just exposition and straight to the scene - that should make things less annoying as well. No gameplay is probs better than bad gameplay, especially if I can substitute the gameplay with coompic, I guess.

I'mma be 100% real with you. The writing and the scenes are what keep me coming back to your game. I think good gameplay is always a bonus, but isn't a requirement. If it ain't you it ain't you. Some AAA games also don't have much gameplay and get by on their art and story.

But the actual reason I keep coming back is to see Rina get Donke'd
 

takohama69

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Feb 18, 2021
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I just started posting time to time after years of silent lurking. I will just say that I very much like your game and where it's going, although I'm not a huge fan of super fantasy-like proportions, your art in general really hits my soft spots. I love the drawings and direction in general, it's a bit silly but that's exactly what I enjoy in porn games. I hope you keep going the same direction, and that you find the right pace not to overwork yourself. Cheers.
 

RareRirorie

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Any news on the update progress?
donk: 2/2
coombat_gobtit: 2/2 (gob and smol gob)
Ghund: 1/2
writing+scirpting: 0/fuckme
bitches: 0
money: -1
doodling on the side, unrelated to Rina: quite a lot / too much
planned release: 30th of June

edit: thats pics tho, not scenes. Ghund is one scene two pics. Donk is 2 scene 1 pic per and so on. Just so I make that clear.
 
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fydar69

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Jul 12, 2020
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Can i suggest, for the grand scope of the game: Break it down into acts.
Act1: Rina and the school. Use the cast of the school as the mc for the story, theyre learning magic and for Rina tease out her discovery of "lewd" acts gaining her magic abilities. Have Rina and Takana (or w/e hes called) have more "accidental" scenes like in the cuboard and have them threatened by the blue haired dude. Introduce other potential partners here maybe 1 or 2 lewd acts each. Blue haired dude and the teacher who gets handy? leave janitor for later acts

Act2: Act2 is when the actual plot starts, Rina's gained some powers through some accidental lewd scenes in act1 and is beginning to catch on about her powers work. Ghund is introduced and aids her in learning more magic as has already happened, same as before. Here is where choice and routes can come in to effect for the first time. Now that Rina understands where the magic is coming from, open world explore rpg style she now has multiple options of who to go to for magic abilities well only 3 so far, Ghund Takan, and blue haired dude. These 3 so far are the mc and then have some side stuff like the librarian and the janitor introduced later. Loss of V with the chosen follower would happen in this act and that would sort of enforce which route shes going down, ofc she can change her mind but it should reflect upon the world if she does

Act3: In this act we find out about the succubus and rateye is introduced to help hunt the succubus down as has already happened. You can draw this out a bit longer and to keep the earlier choices the players made valid have which ever companion she has the highest relation on or just let the player chose a companion to acompany Rina and rateeye on their travels. The rateye scenes can still happen just undercover from the companion and vice versa, even have rateye peep on them to give him the idea he wants some too. id also add a scene where rateye and Rina first do it in the cave rather than the random ambush from behind just makes ore sense imo.

Throughout all of the acts Rina's relationships with each "target?" or, cast member its available to, also needs to keep advancing and depending on her choices it should reflect on the world when speaking to other characters to show that her choices are shaping the world and having an impact, it doesnt need to have different game endings just different routes to get there. Pure route with takan, ugly dude the janitor, goblin rateye, ghund, blue haired dude.

So what we have at this point is Rina hunting the succubus. Rateye, Rina, and Rina's chosen follower working together. Itll take some fine tuning to balance the diaglogue and plot to sort of hide Rinas powers from the follower? heck depending on the follower like if the janitor was chosen then he wouldnt mind knowing full well whats going on, but for the glasses kid hed be best kept in the dark thinking his gf is all good

These fist 3 acts take us to where we are now and going forward idk what the dev has planned id just like to see the world fleshed out and characters made use of. Make this thing an actual game and add player choice and routes.

Id personally make all animal stuff togglable and wouldnt even consider adding it until late game acts.

Games got potential
 

Svidri

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Mar 20, 2022
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Can i suggest, for the grand scope of the game: Break it down into acts.
Act1: Rina and the school. Use the cast of the school as the mc for the story, theyre learning magic and for Rina tease out her discovery of "lewd" acts gaining her magic abilities. Have Rina and Takana (or w/e hes called) have more "accidental" scenes like in the cuboard and have them threatened by the blue haired dude. Introduce other potential partners here maybe 1 or 2 lewd acts each. Blue haired dude and the teacher who gets handy? leave janitor for later acts

Act2: Act2 is when the actual plot starts, Rina's gained some powers through some accidental lewd scenes in act1 and is beginning to catch on about her powers work. Ghund is introduced and aids her in learning more magic as has already happened, same as before. Here is where choice and routes can come in to effect for the first time. Now that Rina understands where the magic is coming from, open world explore rpg style she now has multiple options of who to go to for magic abilities well only 3 so far, Ghund Takan, and blue haired dude. These 3 so far are the mc and then have some side stuff like the librarian and the janitor introduced later. Loss of V with the chosen follower would happen in this act and that would sort of enforce which route shes going down, ofc she can change her mind but it should reflect upon the world if she does

Act3: In this act we find out about the succubus and rateye is introduced to help hunt the succubus down as has already happened. You can draw this out a bit longer and to keep the earlier choices the players made valid have which ever companion she has the highest relation on or just let the player chose a companion to acompany Rina and rateeye on their travels. The rateye scenes can still happen just undercover from the companion and vice versa, even have rateye peep on them to give him the idea he wants some too. id also add a scene where rateye and Rina first do it in the cave rather than the random ambush from behind just makes ore sense imo.

Throughout all of the acts Rina's relationships with each "target?" or, cast member its available to, also needs to keep advancing and depending on her choices it should reflect on the world when speaking to other characters to show that her choices are shaping the world and having an impact, it doesnt need to have different game endings just different routes to get there. Pure route with takan, ugly dude the janitor, goblin rateye, ghund, blue haired dude.

So what we have at this point is Rina hunting the succubus. Rateye, Rina, and Rina's chosen follower working together. Itll take some fine tuning to balance the diaglogue and plot to sort of hide Rinas powers from the follower? heck depending on the follower like if the janitor was chosen then he wouldnt mind knowing full well whats going on, but for the glasses kid hed be best kept in the dark thinking his gf is all good

These fist 3 acts take us to where we are now and going forward idk what the dev has planned id just like to see the world fleshed out and characters made use of. Make this thing an actual game and add player choice and routes.

Id personally make all animal stuff togglable and wouldnt even consider adding it until late game acts.

Games got potential
This is good but it's gonna take a lot of work, and the dev is lazy, so not gonna happen. You just need to hope that he doesn't abandon the game so soon.
 
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Can i suggest, for the grand scope of the game: Break it down into acts.
Act1: Rina and the school. Use the cast of the school as the mc for the story, theyre learning magic and for Rina tease out her discovery of "lewd" acts gaining her magic abilities. Have Rina and Takana (or w/e hes called) have more "accidental" scenes like in the cuboard and have them threatened by the blue haired dude. Introduce other potential partners here maybe 1 or 2 lewd acts each. Blue haired dude and the teacher who gets handy? leave janitor for later acts

Act2: Act2 is when the actual plot starts, Rina's gained some powers through some accidental lewd scenes in act1 and is beginning to catch on about her powers work. Ghund is introduced and aids her in learning more magic as has already happened, same as before. Here is where choice and routes can come in to effect for the first time. Now that Rina understands where the magic is coming from, open world explore rpg style she now has multiple options of who to go to for magic abilities well only 3 so far, Ghund Takan, and blue haired dude. These 3 so far are the mc and then have some side stuff like the librarian and the janitor introduced later. Loss of V with the chosen follower would happen in this act and that would sort of enforce which route shes going down, ofc she can change her mind but it should reflect upon the world if she does

Act3: In this act we find out about the succubus and rateye is introduced to help hunt the succubus down as has already happened. You can draw this out a bit longer and to keep the earlier choices the players made valid have which ever companion she has the highest relation on or just let the player chose a companion to acompany Rina and rateeye on their travels. The rateye scenes can still happen just undercover from the companion and vice versa, even have rateye peep on them to give him the idea he wants some too. id also add a scene where rateye and Rina first do it in the cave rather than the random ambush from behind just makes ore sense imo.

Throughout all of the acts Rina's relationships with each "target?" or, cast member its available to, also needs to keep advancing and depending on her choices it should reflect on the world when speaking to other characters to show that her choices are shaping the world and having an impact, it doesnt need to have different game endings just different routes to get there. Pure route with takan, ugly dude the janitor, goblin rateye, ghund, blue haired dude.

So what we have at this point is Rina hunting the succubus. Rateye, Rina, and Rina's chosen follower working together. Itll take some fine tuning to balance the diaglogue and plot to sort of hide Rinas powers from the follower? heck depending on the follower like if the janitor was chosen then he wouldnt mind knowing full well whats going on, but for the glasses kid hed be best kept in the dark thinking his gf is all good

These fist 3 acts take us to where we are now and going forward idk what the dev has planned id just like to see the world fleshed out and characters made use of. Make this thing an actual game and add player choice and routes.

Id personally make all animal stuff togglable and wouldnt even consider adding it until late game acts.

Games got potential
I’m rather alright with the current direction of the game, don’t care much for regular school ”romance” and drama. Only thing i’d change really is the rateye penetration scene. It feels a bit too soon considering where she is with other characters.
 

Svidri

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I’m rather alright with the current direction of the game, don’t care much for regular school ”romance” and drama. Only thing i’d change really is the rateye penetration scene. It feels a bit too soon considering where she is with other characters.
I thought i was the only one. Maybe starting with masturbation, fingers and grampa being the first one to fuck her, since she need the "training". But this is the last thing i would change in the game, the battle system may be the first one. This game has a lot of potential but also it needs a lot of work and time to develop. If only the dev could hire (or get help) a programmer, he could focus on drawing. It must be really demotivating to have a lot of drawings to do and still code all things. DarkCookie realised that and hired programmer, then another dude, and so on. Last time i saw his patreon page (longe time ago), he was making 34k dollars. This game could take the same path.
 

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I thought i was the only one. Maybe starting with masturbation, fingers and grampa being the first one to fuck her, since she need the "training". But this is the last thing i would change in the game, the battle system may be the first one. This game has a lot of potential but also it needs a lot of work and time to develop. If only the dev could hire (or get help) a programmer, he could focus on drawing. It must be really demotivating to have a lot of drawings to do and still code all things. DarkCookie realised that and hired programmer, then another dude, and so on. Last time i saw his patreon page (longe time ago), he was making 34k dollars. This game could take the same path.
Yeah but right now he's broke. He's gotta grind.
 
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I thought i was the only one. Maybe starting with masturbation, fingers and grampa being the first one to fuck her, since she need the "training". But this is the last thing i would change in the game, the battle system may be the first one. This game has a lot of potential but also it needs a lot of work and time to develop. If only the dev could hire (or get help) a programmer, he could focus on drawing. It must be really demotivating to have a lot of drawings to do and still code all things. DarkCookie realised that and hired programmer, then another dude, and so on. Last time i saw his patreon page (longe time ago), he was making 34k dollars. This game could take the same path.
Think dev mentioned before he felt the same way, but he was taking so long he just threw us a bone. With that said, there are so many corruption patreons that take sooo long to get into the nitty and gritty that I accepted that bone.
 
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