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This one really promising.
Can't wait for the next episode.
Can't wait for the next episode.
- Mar 16, 2018
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I'm trying to release it this month, but I'm not sure if I'm going to make it now. I got sick and had to take a little bit of time off. I had both covid shots and they kicked my ass and I also had an ESI in my neck and took some time off for all those things. I am now back working on it and have a lot done and it's turning out to be a great update so far. Almost 800 renders and 70 animations are already done. Hopefully not too much longer.
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Wow what a fucking ride this has been. Played it all in one playthrough.
While there are so many great references scattered throughout the game, my favorite was George Carlin's.
My second favorite reference that I was hoping to see ever since the time traveling got introduced, was the Stein's;Gate posters in Alyssa's room LOL.
10/10 experience so far, I can't wait to see where this story goes from here!
Until then..
El... Psy.. Kongroo.
While there are so many great references scattered throughout the game, my favorite was George Carlin's.
My second favorite reference that I was hoping to see ever since the time traveling got introduced, was the Stein's;Gate posters in Alyssa's room LOL.
10/10 experience so far, I can't wait to see where this story goes from here!
Until then..
El... Psy.. Kongroo.
Thanks, Pitrik! It's good to hear from you. We miss you in the discord. Your name is still 6th in the leaderboards.Take your time Jesty, perfection needs time
Now the shot is kicking my ass
But yeah, some people feel fine from the shot but I was not one. Both of them put me down, but the 2nd shot had me sick for close to a week.
Hope you feel better soon, bud! ❤
Take your time to finish the next release, I'm glad that you feeling well after those shots. Your own health always the most important after all, better a little bit delay than overwork while still not fineThanks, Pitrik! It's good to hear from you. We miss you in the discord. Your name is still 6th in the leaderboards.
But yeah, some people feel fine from the shot but I was not one. Both of them put me down, but the 2nd shot had me sick for close to a week.
Hope you feel better soon, bud! ❤
- Oct 9, 2017
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Overall I'm enjoying this quite a bit. There are just two things that are a little irksome to me and that's the MC's thought processes. If he is going to come to that inevitable response anyway whats the point of having to read why he did if he is just going to say it anyway? I guess I was just hoping for more options to role play, there hasn't been a lot of say so far aside from who you want to make a move on. Also the player is asked how they feel about something just to have to MC say how "he" feels. To be fair I'm only on episode one and just started today so this is just a first impression.
Secondly I'm not a fan of how chatty the lewd scenes are in this, its like they are just another discussion with nudity, I don't think it would hurt them to just chill out and enjoy the ride a bit.
Secondly I'm not a fan of how chatty the lewd scenes are in this, its like they are just another discussion with nudity, I don't think it would hurt them to just chill out and enjoy the ride a bit.
Yes, I agree with you on the MC's inner monologue. Especially in ep1, there's too much of it and not all of it needs to be there. I did tone it down in ep2 and ep3 because I noticed the same thing. I'm not the best writer but I am getting a little better so it's great to hear constructive criticism from players. I have plans to remaster the first episode's images/animation and compressed them better and I also want to clean up the writing a little bit, especially the inner thoughts of the MC, not all of it needs to be there.
As far as the talking during the h-scenes, I like it that way. I dislike games where it's like "Hey, I'm horny! Take off her pants and let's have sex!" And then it goes to two sex animations and the scene is done. I like teasing and build-up and the characters telling the MC out they feel or want they want. It's an adult game, so I want to make those scenes good. But I hope I'm not the only one that feels this way. I would like to hear from others. Maybe I do take the talking too far in those scenes, I don't know?
Anyways, I appreciate your thought on the game because it tells me areas I need to approve. I hope you enjoy the rest of your play-through. The game gets a lot better in ep2 and 3.
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porn game notwithstanding, sex scenes without characterisation (logically in the form of dialogue or inner monologue, being written stories) are pointless, unless the motive and outlet is something impossible like fucking tiny fairies. actual porn is plentiful and available; why anyone plays these things only for cartoon tits and ass is beyond me. seems the primary appeal of the medium is more in the way of plot than normal porn typically provides. can't please everyone all the time though, yadda yadda. this whole site could be divided in half with a line called storytelling.
I like verbalization/talking during sex scenes in stories. I don't want a description of what happens and then, in a visual novel, a few shots of it happening and then the end. I want the people who are fucking to be talking to each other, asking each other what they like, talking dirty, etc. I don't want it to be awkward, don't need a lot of "oh Sis!" "oh Bro!" because on average people don't talk like that. However, if/when the MC and his mom/stepmom happen I do hope for some "Fuck your mom!" type dialogue, it makes sense and is hot.
I agree with you 100% when it comes to storytelling and not understanding why people would play games for animated/rendered tits when there is so much free porn everywhere these days. Perhaps it's a generational thing? I'm just throwing this out there but I didn't grow up with hot anime characters to lust over during puberty and so the idea of playing a game to see cartoon tits and forgoing seeing real tits is a foreign concept to me.
Anyway, to me story is king and a good story is vital to maintaining my interest. Without that there is no reason to continue to play.
- Oct 9, 2017
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I do as well, if I didn't like reading I wouldn't bother with VNs
. I just personal think it's a bit over done is all.
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cant wait!! hope you're feeling better!I'm trying to release it this month, but I'm not sure if I'm going to make it now. I got sick and had to take a little bit of time off. I had both covid shots and they kicked my ass and I also had an ESI in my neck and took some time off for all those things. I am now back working on it and have a lot done and it's turning out to be a great update so far. Almost 800 renders and 70 animations are already done. Hopefully not too much longer.
hi just wondering if there's a patch that works with Qleafs in game mod. those patches on the main page over writes his mod cant get them both to work. Thanks