I don't like her, because she was letting herself influenced too much by her mom, rather than having her own personality, up until the point where the Macon thing happens, that's why I called her a drone. Honestly, I don't really care if she had a boyfriend before or not, unless she was a cumdumpster to dozens, I never cared about such thing. No one willing to take up with her and her mothers shit is another possibility by the way. I know I wouldn't, and if Fine and Robin is a package deal, then I'd rather not take the whole package.It still seems like you don't like Robin because of her mom. Technically, Robin never knew about her mom getting the money for the bed from you and the MC never told her. Yes, Ms. Fine was testing you. She's always testing you... As far as Robin's personality, she was raised by her mom. I'd like to think that the MC had something to do with changing it a bit. Personally, I would prefer a girl that I can mold and that is willing to do so opposed to one that's already perfect. Also, her demeanor explains why her fine ass has never had a boyfriend before you. Can you provide a possibly better reason?
He didn't jack off to prove he loved her, he did it because she was embarrassed about him just busting in her room and seeing her do it. Also, she said I love a man that does what he says. Not I love you, but he took it as that.
Everyone keeps saying I revamp it. With the exception of changing Robin's scene to make them more entertaining and only having his money taken and not his cell phone, I did not change the story. I only expanded upon it to make what happened prior to his first night at Jason's more clear. In previous versions, the narrator only described what happened in a few sentences. On the other hand, I can see my mistake of not telling the story clearly enough in previous versions as being a reason that everyone thinks I remade it. Even Lana seeing them kiss as a reason to get with Johnnie is in previous versions.
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It seemed so that by doing that he was proving to her that he really loves her, at least to me.
Well, you changed it retroactively compared to what it was originally, even if you have the same story but with different wording or renders or etc, that's a revamp, no need to take offense on that.