- Jun 14, 2018
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So I just started this game from the beginning. Downloaded because the renders looked nice. I'm about an 1.5 hours into it.
What am I reading? It feels like someone with ADHD having a fever dream. Can no one finish a thought or sentence? Why do conversations start at the end half the time? The reader needs to know things. The writer is responsible for telling things. Why is everything a secret from the readers? We need context. It's as bad as reading japanese stereo instructions that have been translated through 14 languages before they stopped on english. I'm sure it all makes sense to the writer cause they already know the details but give the audience some of them. Very little of the dialogue feels natural. So much is left unsaid between characters because the characters know what they are talking about but I have no fucking clue most of the time. Finding plot in this game is like looking for a needle in a haystack except the haystack is the size of Mt. Everest.
Imagine if this were a movie and how quickly the editor would be fired if he left frames of black in it. Don't do it.
Why would a friend threaten the person who can potentially save your friends business? Because they hung up on your friend twice. I thought it was a telemarketer at first. In the real world it would probably ended with, " Sorry. I was interested in helping but if I'm going to be threated like this I'll find something else to invest in."
What am I reading? It feels like someone with ADHD having a fever dream. Can no one finish a thought or sentence? Why do conversations start at the end half the time? The reader needs to know things. The writer is responsible for telling things. Why is everything a secret from the readers? We need context. It's as bad as reading japanese stereo instructions that have been translated through 14 languages before they stopped on english. I'm sure it all makes sense to the writer cause they already know the details but give the audience some of them. Very little of the dialogue feels natural. So much is left unsaid between characters because the characters know what they are talking about but I have no fucking clue most of the time. Finding plot in this game is like looking for a needle in a haystack except the haystack is the size of Mt. Everest.
Imagine if this were a movie and how quickly the editor would be fired if he left frames of black in it. Don't do it.
Why would a friend threaten the person who can potentially save your friends business? Because they hung up on your friend twice. I thought it was a telemarketer at first. In the real world it would probably ended with, " Sorry. I was interested in helping but if I'm going to be threated like this I'll find something else to invest in."