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could be his long lost evil brother!with that hairstyle the first thing I thought was SSJ (sorry I couldn't resist it
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nice edit though.
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Tried it. Can't stand MC's dialogues. Good luck with your game.
I'm more traumatised by those spelling mistakes in the first picture in the OP than the content
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outstanding right?
Thank you.
It's only natural to make mistake, Even you got one if you look carefully (no offence though).
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Well played trough this game
So far not much to see but we at least get to know the older cousin of the MC and have a bit of backstory with them both
Thank god nothing happend to her with that douchebag of a antagonist trying to force her but thank god that didnt happen
Seems the MC is getting some kind of strenght or power from his mother in heaven or something else ?
Also a corrupt police force who knew lol
Seems we some how have to find our way back to the city and help purge the corrupt people
and in the mean time build a harem lol
The mc dick look a bit weird the women themself are decent enough i gues
Thank god the older cousin treats the MC more like a young adult then a kid later on caus that was kinds of weird
Good luck to the dev
So far not much to see but we at least get to know the older cousin of the MC and have a bit of backstory with them both
Thank god nothing happend to her with that douchebag of a antagonist trying to force her but thank god that didnt happen
Seems the MC is getting some kind of strenght or power from his mother in heaven or something else ?
Also a corrupt police force who knew lol
Seems we some how have to find our way back to the city and help purge the corrupt people
and in the mean time build a harem lol
The mc dick look a bit weird
the women themself are decent enough i guesThank god the older cousin treats the MC more like a young adult then a kid later on caus that was kinds of weird
Good luck to the dev
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From F95 Tags definifions:
- Sleep Sex [Sex act with someone who is unconscious/sleeping.]
Definition of Sex act from Collins English Dictionary. Copyright © HarperCollins Publishers:
(sɛks ækt)
any act involving sexual stimulation
From Wikipedia.org:
Handjob
A handjob or hand job is a sex act, performed as either foreplay or as non-penetrative sex, that involves the manual stimulation of the penis or scrotum by another person to induce an erection for sexual pleasure, sexual arousal and sometimes resulting in orgasm and ejaculation.[1]
A handjob can be sexually arousing for both participants and may be an erotic and physically intimate act of its own. It is analogous to fingering (stimulation of the vagina). A person may give a male partner a handjob so as not to engage in penetrative sexual activity. Besides avoiding the risks associated with sexual penetration, such as sexually transmitted infections (STIs) or pregnancy from penile-vaginal sex, some people engage in non-penetrative sex to preserve virginity.[2]
Clearly, you need to add the Sleep Sex tag.
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You seems to be a tag specialist! should I add a rape tag too. because if that hj was sex; then by f95 definition - Rape [Forced or non-consensual sex.]. That handjob might took place when the mc was asleep but We both know that, this is not what people look for in that tag.. It is a popular tag, might just bring more player into the game! but I don't want the player feel being cheated or lured into the playing the game by abusing that tag.
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Ah! Thanks for pointing that out. appreciate it. we use an online spell check program ; maybe It didn't got caught while our team mate ran this line trough it.Hmmm...played it and found some sci-fi or maybe fantasy and some corrupt officials in the town...all very good storywise... But then! In the cafe towards the end we have a lady ordering an expresso??? I guess she's in a hurry to get out of town?
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I think you might want to drop the corruption subplot, as it is an OTT sort of grimdark that just comes off as goofy, and seems to just be a detour away from the main relationship of the MC and the friend he's trying to reconnect with and develop a romantic relationship with.
I'm not sure why so many generally light-hearted adult games have bully villains that even Stephen King would consider to be too much, and levels of corruption that make Game Of Thrones look like The Neighborhood of Make-Believe from Mister Roger's Neighborhood.
So many adult games seem to want to have some fearsome antagonist(s) instead of just focusing on the romantic/sexual relationships that I'm pretty sure are why people play VNs in the first place, and I suspect a large number of those VNs end up incomplete partially because they get hung up on that detour and lose sight of their VN's actual main appeal.
I'm not sure why so many generally light-hearted adult games have bully villains that even Stephen King would consider to be too much, and levels of corruption that make Game Of Thrones look like The Neighborhood of Make-Believe from Mister Roger's Neighborhood.
So many adult games seem to want to have some fearsome antagonist(s) instead of just focusing on the romantic/sexual relationships that I'm pretty sure are why people play VNs in the first place, and I suspect a large number of those VNs end up incomplete partially because they get hung up on that detour and lose sight of their VN's actual main appeal.
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the corruption path was made for fun and will end up with same result when the route ends (It has already ended in the latest version). Although the player either end up being just a friend or a lover at the end of the route and this is the only thing that slightly change the story.
I'm sorry but this isn't a light hearted game, This game will have violence, where war, politics will take place. I don't see any tag for these things other than graphic violence, otherwise I'd have added it into the genre section.
A sissy antagonist for a sissy protagonist, and we don't like sissy protagonist.. even the antagonist being the most powerful guy in town, Our mc literally kicked his ass, he doesn't fear him at all.. and he is going to kick his ass a lot more in future...
And about your thought of dropping the development.. I think you read some of the comments from the first few page and thought this. I think it's a normal thing to receive bad comments, And personally I don't mind people giving their opinion. sometimes negative comments gives positive ideas. and the people who like the game normally does't comment unless they have something important to discuss, Just like real life, when you do a favor to a person , most of them might just say thank you and walk away and forget about it after few days but when someone gets offended by you... They will never forget you! they will keep coming at you.
And I think that's what happened here, Some people had some misunderstanding and doubt about the content regarding the prior overview, but I believe we have a lot's of fans who aren't active in the comment section, And we will continue this series for them, there are 4 devs working on this, It's been less than two month since the game has released. And we have updated our game 3 times (One of them haven't been public yet.)! you can check the changelog from the OP to see how much content added each update.
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When I was referring to the corruption subplot, I was referring to the corruption of the police department, and how the evil characters seemed to be trying way too hard to show themselves as evil (I suspect this was on purpose), and I'm reminded of this scene from Batman-TAS:
And the police corruption subplot seemed to have moments like this:
Recording of corrupt police officer: "Hey, Mueller, it's Officer Eagerevil: I need another large bribe to help cover up another set of those murders you all have been doing and I have been covering up for in the Murderers' Forest. I'm adding it to the written list thoroughly detailing the crimes I've helped cover up, who for, and what specific crimes I myself could be charged with if anyone were to discover that list in the top left drawer of my desk that I keep unlocked when I am out purchasing illegal drugs at the gym at Innocence High School at 8:00 PM every Wednesday."
MC's friends and family: "Wow, can't we use this to get him?"
Policewoman: "We can't, the family has political ties to literally every political group, newsmedia company, and hot dog vendor in the world. There's nothing we can do."
I suspect it is supposed to be over-the-top, but there has been way too much over-the-top nihilism in TV shows and movies nowadays, so I recommend keeping a fun sense of humor about it. Overly pretentious and grimdark stories can be very cringy, and I'm sure you can think of numerous examples of where this was the case.
It seems there might be the beginnings of a good storyline here, so I'm just giving advice based on what I've seen.
And the police corruption subplot seemed to have moments like this:
Recording of corrupt police officer: "Hey, Mueller, it's Officer Eagerevil: I need another large bribe to help cover up another set of those murders you all have been doing and I have been covering up for in the Murderers' Forest. I'm adding it to the written list thoroughly detailing the crimes I've helped cover up, who for, and what specific crimes I myself could be charged with if anyone were to discover that list in the top left drawer of my desk that I keep unlocked when I am out purchasing illegal drugs at the gym at Innocence High School at 8:00 PM every Wednesday."
MC's friends and family: "Wow, can't we use this to get him?"
Policewoman: "We can't, the family has political ties to literally every political group, newsmedia company, and hot dog vendor in the world. There's nothing we can do."
I suspect it is supposed to be over-the-top, but there has been way too much over-the-top nihilism in TV shows and movies nowadays, so I recommend keeping a fun sense of humor about it. Overly pretentious and grimdark stories can be very cringy, and I'm sure you can think of numerous examples of where this was the case.
It seems there might be the beginnings of a good storyline here, so I'm just giving advice based on what I've seen.
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whoops! sorry I thought you were talking about the sexual corruption path haha..
And it was his father on the phone with the police officer, not the antagonist himself. Male members of their family has same first and last name, only their middle name is different. this is also a lore stuff , might as well put into story later.
If you are talking about the last few sentence that the police officer ranted after Katherine left the police station. most of them are monologues and some were needed to say out a bit louder to for Jamie to hear and record, so she could prove the bribe incident. and push the plot forward with her involvement with more meaningful and believable way. I hope everything will be clear with future updates. And thank you for your suggestion.