VN Ren'Py Abandoned Santirosa [v0.8 X-Mas] [Senillosa]

[User_286102]

Seni

When you click on character button screen pops up but when you click on character screen again the list disappears but not the character profile screen and you have to rollback to make it disappear.

Clicking on any character 2 times switches them from their profile to Keola's profile.

This scene one shows her with no backpack on but then the next shot she's wearing one.

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Thanks for the info on the backpack, no one had noticed it yet, neither had I!
I'm going to try to erase the bag, but I don't think I can do it.

to make the character appear you click on his name and to make it disappear you click a second time on the name
I don't know why it doesn't work for you.
I will try to fix this bug, but I don't understand at all how this can happen and this problem is an isolated problem apparently.

You're on linux?

 

[myuhinny]

Seni

It happens if you just click on the pink character box and then a name and then click the the pink character box to close it and only the list disappears but not the characters profile screen. When you click the pink character icon to close everything the open profile picture should close along with the character list.

2 lines need to be removed as they are out of place and also wrong. This is a repeat of the park scene lines and she slapped the fuck out of that turd burglar. After those 2 lines it goes to the one asking if they want to watch a movie.

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Also I don't think there should be glory hole options and other things dealing with male people on the lesbian path otherwise their not really a lesbian then if they are playing with a dick through a hole.

 

[User_286102]

It's called a joke, my guy. No need to get *TRIGGERED*. And I can understand not finding peoples' feedback helpful, but there's no need for your attitude to the first guy in that comment.

I answered your remark about grammar and punctuation, I try and I can't do it! i do my best and i can't succed!
My remark "sorry not to be English-speaking" is not an aggression!

your joke about the skin color of the characters is "inappropriate", I answered it in the mood of the moment
I would most certainly have ignored that remark in other circumstances
but now you're talking about my lack of interest in the players' comments, that's not true, I give a lot of intent to all the comments made by the players
but since the beginning of the game the remarks are mostly hypocritical, unfounded, stupid, aggressive and without any interest in the evolution of my game
The mood of the moment is the mood with which I reacted to your joke, this mood is "I'm sick of it"

the first user deserves the answer I gave him

 

[User_286102]

Seni

It happens if you just click on the pink character box and then a name and then click the the pink character box to close it and only the list disappears but not the characters profile screen. When you click the pink character icon to close everything the open profile picture should close along with the character list.

2 lines need to be removed as they are out of place and also wrong. This is a repeat of the park scene lines and she slapped the fuck out of that turd burglar. After those 2 lines it goes to the one asking if they want to watch a movie.

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Also I don't think there should be glory hole options and other things dealing with male people on the lesbian path otherwise their not really a lesbian then if they are playing with a dick through a hole.

unfortunately I didn't find the solution to delete the character frame at the same time as the character list
the two are on different buttons

it doesn't solve your problem and I don't understand where this bug comes from because it doesn't happen when I test them as you wrote the bug.

I'm asking the question again, which I think may be the source of the problem, are you on Linux?

for the two weird lines before seeing the movie is very ... weird, I don't know which route you went.
I'll look again.
thank you for finding this bug

 

[myuhinny]

Seni

I'm on the lesbian route and no I am not on a linux. On the lesbian route so far I have seen a glory hole with a option to do something and if you pick yes to play with the dick then she's not really a lesbian then as a true lesbian wouldn't want anything to do with any male characters. So when they stick their dick through the hole there should of been a slap that fucker hard option so that she could slap it.

The profile screen goes down if I click on it 2 times what I was reporting about was the profile page not going down when you clicked the pink character icon but you already stated why it doesn't go down.

 

[User_286102]

I want this realistic game, in reality lesbians are confronted with men's attempts to charm them, it's not marking on their foreheads that they are lesbians.
so I don't delete hetero routes in the game even if you have chosen lesbian. but you still have the choice to refuse guys;
be friends with guys without having sex or sometimes reject them permanently.

but I think you have been voluntarily toctoc, knowing full well that a dick was coming out and that you would like me to add an option to slap the dick.
and I love this idea so much that I'm going to do it right now.

 

[User_286102]

i answer to Pootin who just befor delete his message, LOL

this lesbian tag is justified, yes!

what I say in the message above explains the fact that even on the lesbian routes there are guys, but never on the lesbian routes elpidia will be forced to have sex with a guy

the walkthrough I did can help him help players choose the areas of the game that interest them


My game i's not a lesbian game, it's not a bi-sexual game, it's for all sexuality
other possibility comes soon, femdom, BDSM, Rape, blackmailing ....
the only ones who will never be in my game are "Incest" and "Bestial"

 

[pootin]

sorry did delete my comment because of too much beer.
just saying, a lesbian character which loves dick & dudes are bisexual in fact, like all so called "lesbians" in porn. such informations are pretty useless in that way.
but if there are "refuse and harshly refuse" choices to guys, it would become a pretty unique style.

good luck Seni

 

[User_286102]

Yes elpidia can love dicks and be bi-sexual but she can also love that girls and reject all dicks and therefore be a lesbian but I don't want to impose it at players, she can also love that dicks and reject all girls
it's always only the choice of the players but I don't force anything, someone who chooses lesbian and.. one day choose to become bi or hetero..
I want to give the players complete freedom

and yes there are areas of the game where lesbians who have chosen "delicate" routes will be subjected to blackmailing but once again under no circumstances will they be FORCED to have sex with the guy, an opion will be offered, but something loose...

and yes, that's what I've been looking for from the beginning, originality a "UNIQUE STYLE"

 

[myuhinny]

Seni

For me incest is in your game as I changed Elpidia's so called roommate to sister so she refers to her as a sister instead of a roommate whenever she is talking about her and I'm not the only one that does things like this.

Maybe one way to get past certain scenes like blackmailing turds on the lesbian route would be to have this as an option. Sure I'll suck your dick and then as soon as they drop their pants and underwear she latches on and bites down on their dick and starts shaking her head around like a rabid Tasmanian devil. This would make them think twice about trying to stick their meat stick into a hole with teeth ever again they would tell others not to do it as they'll tell them what happened and if there are other turds around it would give them nightmares to where they will not want to do that to a girl for fear of getting their dick bitten or bitten off.

pootin

Even on the bisexual route you can choose to avoid the dick from what I saw as I did a test.

 

[User_286102]

Seni

For me incest is in your game as I changed Elpidia's so called roommate to sister so she refers to her as a sister instead of a roommate whenever she is talking about her and I'm not the only one that does things like this.

it's great, I don't know how to do that but if you know the main thing is that you like it and kami sister of elpidia it's very salacious "existing" I love
in version 0.3 changes a lot of things with kami and elpi but it is still possible for sister

Seni
Maybe one way to get past certain scenes like blackmailing turds on the lesbian route would be to have this as an option. Sure I'll suck your dick and then as soon as they drop their pants and underwear she latches on and bites down on their dick and starts shaking her head around like a rabid Tasmanian devil. This would make them think twice about trying to stick their meat stick into a hole with teeth ever again they would tell others not to do it as they'll tell them what happened and if there are other turds around it would give them nightmares to where they will not want to do that to a girl for fear of getting their dick bitten or bitten off.

I'll try to put more stuff as you suggested with the glory hole scene "I've already prepared a scene for elpi to slap the dick in the glory hole

Even on the bisexual route you can choose to avoid the dick from what I saw as I did a test.

you can even play the whole game without any sex scenes.

 

[Blair225]

Yes elpidia can love dicks and be bi-sexual but she can also love that girls and reject all dicks and therefore be a lesbian but I don't want to impose it at players, she can also love that dicks and reject all girls
it's always only the choice of the players but I don't force anything, someone who chooses lesbian and.. one day choose to become bi or hetero..
I want to give the players complete freedom

and yes there are areas of the game where lesbians who have chosen "delicate" routes will be subjected to blackmailing but once again under no circumstances will they be FORCED to have sex with the guy, an opion will be offered, but something loose...

and yes, that's what I've been looking for from the beginning, originality a "UNIQUE STYLE"

I like the idea of being able to be on a lesbian or bi sexual path and still having the option to keep or refuse guys. Its very important that players feel like they have absolute choice regarding her sexuality and for me, it goes beyond just who will she have a sex scene with. What are her choices in normal situations or smaller sexual scenes are just as important as these smaller choices can shape the character much to be much more defined in the players head. From what it seems, as the developer its your job to give players the freedom (choices) and tools (characters, settings and events) in order to make Elpi a more personal character for the player, and a overall more interesting game. Best of luck with the eventual release of Update 3. As we will likely have a much better grasp of the true game.

 

[baneini]

The characters in my game are all over 18 years old
I understand that for a FAN of four elements trainer the age of the characters can be important "Irony"
but if you really don't like my game, you don't have to play it.
you can go back to playing with kids and your favorite anime

The dev doesn't respect other peoples intelligence at all by insisting their eyes don't work.
He goes trough comments to find some game he doesn't respect and use it as ammunition for something, who knows what.
Suggestions for an improved game = dont like it dont play it response.
"You like anime, anime is if for kids" insult because of a comment on a game thats a parody of an american cartoon.

Those are not correct responses to give.
Lashing out and extreme defensiveness should be curtailed in the future.
You probably don't need to read peoples comment history before responding to them.
People can critique a game and still like it overall and play it.

 

[User_286102]

So it's a bunch of 12y olds in kinda disconnected sex scenes.
Maybe it needs more elaboration in the discussions to flesh things out. Give characters motivations and lead into the sex scenes.
No need for 4th wall breaking, it's not fun.

your remark about the age of the characters is derogatory, disrespectful and stupid

The scenes of these two first versions are to be reviewed, they are not elaborated it is perfectly true, I gave myself a lot for the work of the interface and the implementation of the gameplay and I neglected the dialogues.
I do my best to improve the previous versions and to work on the scenario since version 0.3

the 4th wall:
In the description I say that Elpidia is a young woman who has difficulty getting out of adolescence and becoming an adult, the player must then take choices to help Elpidia build her future
the 4th wall messages are not funny "even if some are made to be funny I find them funny" but they must above all demonstrate immaturity of elpidia
the 4th wall will be less and less present in the game but the game will still be in the 4th wall.
I am a teasing person and in the game Elpidia will always tease and laugh with the player, in version 0.3 Elpidia plays with the player and on some dialogue she teases and gently mocks the player

 

[King Monkey Mon]

The dev doesn't respect other peoples intelligence at all by insisting their eyes don't work.
He goes trough comments to find some game he doesn't respect and use it as ammunition for something, who knows what.
Suggestions for an improved game = dont like it dont play it response.
"You like anime, anime is if for kids" insult because of a comment on a game thats a parody of an american cartoon.

Those are not correct responses to give.
Lashing out and extreme defensiveness should be curtailed in the future.
You probably don't need to read peoples comment history before responding to them.
People can critique a game and still like it overall and play it.

ThunderRob Avaron1974
yeah i was going to play the game due to me seeing a loli tag and lesbian tag in the game and the developer seemed like a cool person with replies he gave the first 2 pages of this thread

then when read the comments on this page (the 4th page) i was like wow i guess i was very wrong about this developer if hes going to get defensive over anything someone says negative about his game

theres a reason most developers dont respond to every comment or leave a like on every reply they receive but to leave comments like this only reminds me of another developer that Rythan25 and me know very well and is totally not the right thing to do as a business stand point

this why members trust other members over new developers on this site

 

[ThunderRob]

ThunderRob Avaron1974
yeah i was going to play the game due to me seeing a loli tag and lesbian tag in the game and the developer seemed like a cool person with replies he gave the first 2 pages of this thread

then when read the comments on this page (the 4th page) i was like wow i guess i was very wrong about this developer if hes going to get defensive over anything someone says negative about his game

theres a reason most developers dont respond to every comment or leave a like on every reply they receive but to leave comments like this only reminds me of another developer that Rythan25 and me know very well and is totally not the right thing to do as a business stand point

this why members trust other members over new developers on this site

it escalated quickly in the pages since i last visited..lol

 

[Blair225]

ThunderRob Avaron1974
yeah i was going to play the game due to me seeing a loli tag and lesbian tag in the game and the developer seemed like a cool person with replies he gave the first 2 pages of this thread

then when read the comments on this page (the 4th page) i was like wow i guess i was very wrong about this developer if hes going to get defensive over anything someone says negative about his game

theres a reason most developers dont respond to every comment or leave a like on every reply they receive but to leave comments like this only reminds me of another developer that Rythan25 and me know very well and is totally not the right thing to do as a business stand point

this why members trust other members over new developers on this site

Could be the stress of making their first game. I feel as a new developer seeing comments on your first game can be a great experience but also very annoying or painful depending on the comment. As time goes on, i feel developers usually know better how to respond to certain comments and not get as emotional in them. but it can be difficult. Feedback is extremely important for any game honestly, and so far i still feel like the developer has done a pretty good job listening to most of them.

 

[User_286102]

Or maybe it's because the devs we're getting tired of being dragged through the mud that they end up ignoring the players' opinions.
players have the right to respect the devs but devs also have the right to respect the players

ThunderRob

one day you said in response to all the aggressions I'm undergoing, "be careful not to scare away the devs"

is to miss, since the first days of the release of my game the majority of players have insulted me...

the dev to escape....

 

[ThunderRob]

thread got out of hand..instead of it being about the game and how to improve or help etc..it got into just people arguing...i like the game..its a very cute little distraction with a flat chested horny AF loli..it is in continuous evolution as you tinker and learn..i support you improving and making your game more presentable and coherent to all while keeping what you want to do with the story intact...but..this thread of chat escalated alot since i last visited..lol...

 

[User_286102]

we seem to be on steam here, or we only see players picking on poor devs who didn't do anything to them.

that's why steam defends the devs and not the players and they're right