- Jul 25, 2018
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The art is kinda of putting. Was playing the game and it looks like the girl has a beard but its just a shadow issue lol
- Jun 5, 2017
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The story is certainly nice enough, and I like that the heroine can be a full lesbian. Renders need some work, though I can certainly sympathize if the dev's rig and the daily usage of it cannot afford long render times. Dialogue needs some work, and the language needs more translation polishing, but I've seen worse around here.
When you have chosen one of the plants, you can click on close at the bottom right, as for the first math class if you have been there.
and if the plant files do not appear on the screen it is certainly because you are using a backup of version 0.3, I have to specify and explain that I have a lot of problems with my backups.
as long as I haven't finished the interface, I couldn't make the backups work properly.
I do a lot of work to improve the graphics, I stopped the image compression to reduce the weight of the game, from this version the images are less blurry and in version 5 they are almost not.
On the firsts versions I used a bad translator but I have been using DeepL for some time now, I hope you will see the improvement, I sometimes have problems for the dialog, due to my translation problems I am sometimes forced to simplify the dialog, but working with DeepL is more and more efficient because it keeps in memory many things, I hope that over time all its problems will improve.
I would certainly rework the dialogues at the beginning of the game and maybe the images too, but right now I have a lot of work to do to create the interface and create maps and characters.
- May 17, 2017
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- Feb 7, 2019
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The issue isn't just the final compression. There is a lot of distracting lighting-artifacts, and most of the models look like they have gone through multiple stages of file compression.
yes, thank you! and i work july and augusto for the 0.5 update.
I now have less work for the interface and map creation even if I still have to do, it allows me to work more on the playable content.
hidden object is finished, basketball and beach volleyball gameplay is finished and it requires a lot of work from me, I will now work faster and faster on the playable content.
I don't know where this can come from, because since version 3 I don't use less image blur and in version 5 I use almost more blur and I started version 6 without blurring.
I used to use for versions 2 and 3 Tiny PNG to compress my images but I don't do it anymore during version 4.
for the work on my images I use Gimp or photofilter and I compress to 90 out of 100, so I can do 100 now but otherwise I don't know what I can do.
but if you or other players know the reasons that make my work look bad, I look forward to hearing your advice.
please take as an example the images that are part of version 0.4 or 0.5.
- Apr 5, 2019
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So I just started playing the game and the grammar is pretty bad. I'm going to do some edits of the intro and upload it and then people can tell me if it is any better. Then Seni can use it if he wants.
Ok, I've given up on this game. The premise is OK, but the MC has sexual ADHD. She jumps from partner to partner so quick you will get whiplash, and most of the scenarios don't make a whole lot of sense. It's like the creator is trying to mash as many poor quality sex images into the game as they can, and doesn't really care if it works or not, because there's naked people having sex.
About the only thing I liked about the game was the lack of mega-tits.
About the only thing I liked about the game was the lack of mega-tits.
- Apr 5, 2019
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This just covers the first day. I changed a few words because I had to assume what the author really meant. For example changed sub Director to Deputy Dean. Just drop it in the game folder. Tell me if this translation improves the game for anybody. Also there is a line of Mona saying "Stay down mop". I have no clue what that is supposed to mean.
It's really very kind of you to help me like that.
Thank you very much.
I worked a lot on the creation of avatars and maps then on the implementation of the interface and gameplay, the first 3 updates were made as an introduction in which I tried to put content, the routes are starting to be more elaborate from version 4 and 5 because I have more time to work the story.
I hope you will give my game a chance later but in the real world I am libertine (anti-couples) or any other form of belonging or possession, Elpidia will always be libertine and will never belong to anyone.
- Apr 5, 2019
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You're welcome. I might do more later when I finish playing through the game. I might still have some errors of my own so I'll need to look over it myself.
It's really sweet, I love the work you've done.
You did more than just correct spelling and grammar,
You even changed the expressions. Like in the text with Mr. Valdepona.
Thank you very much.
- Dec 4, 2018
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My big issue is there is no build-up, no tension whatsoever when it comes to new partners for the MC. A girl touches her thigh in class, she goes to said girls house, and they immediately have sex. I get that you want her to be a free spirit that doesn't need relationships to tie her down, but give us something more than "Hi, I'm Elpidia, want me to eat your pussy?" as the way she behaves.
Sandbox games survive on high quality graphics and avatars. You need to improve your graphics quality. Images were sometimes blurry, and the lighting was poorly done to the point that there was nothing to see. They don't shoot porn using candlelight, and your sex scenes should have strong lighting to make it worth looking at. Most of the girls are cute as fuck, and have well done bodies, but everything is so small that even on a 27" HD monitor, I can't see many details. When Elpidia puts on her nightgown, which is fairly sheer and she has dusky skin, you can't see anything due to the lighting and small scale.
- Apr 5, 2019
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Spelling and grammar corrections for day 2. Just drop it in the game folder. Some words were changed. If there was a statement that made no sense, I just guessed what would have made sense and replaced it accordingly.