MrD812

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It would be wonderful for me to use AI to write my AVN. Unfortunately, it's not like that. To be honest, I tried, but the result is that there's so much work in revising and correcting the content that it's pointless to work on it. AIs continuously contradict themselves in what they write, forget what they wrote just a few lines before, and keep repeating the same things.

Regarding the numerous criticisms about the development of my story and the fact that it's degenerated, I remain incredulous. Sassy Girl has always been a crazy story. From the very first scene when the MC imagines having sex with his therapist. The very way in which all the scenes evolve falls into the realm of the absurd.
MC fucks Beatrice under a sink and Karen who is there less than a meter away doesn't notice.... Dorothy allows herself to be persuaded to host a TV show in her underwear.... MC pretends to sleepwalk and Adele gives him a blowjob to prove to Miriam that he is faking it.... Josephine gets raped and then thanks him.
There isn't a single "normal" scene, and I've been very careful to avoid that. I enjoy writing absurd stories, and if many of you don't appreciate them... so be it.
Thank You Kindly,

Appreciate when people are forthcoming.
You just gave me ammo in dealing with others wanting me to test this title.
Granted, some just don't like the word 'No'.

May You Fare Well, in Your endevours.
 

AMRFTY

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Ah, trying to "logically dissect" a story, which is by it's nature a feat of IMAGINATION and thus not have to follow logical rules, is a bit of a waste of time. This approach shows the inability of the reader or in this case the layer, to simply take the story as presented, within it's own rules and boundaries and gain the benefit of.

A writer or game dev doesn't owe anyone an explanation of their story, they simply present it as it is, and let the audience make their own conclusions. This doesn't mean the story is "wrong" just because it doesn't fit someone's perception, it means that person needs to adjust their mind-frame of reviewing the situation.

Anyone ever trying to dissect a story is basically the IRL version of this person... Trust us, you're not really proving how intelligent you are, but rather how anal re-tentative and ass-hatish you can be.
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Now if a story stops following it's own narrative, breaking it's own rules and that wasn't a deliberate thing by the writer then sure, point out where the story doesn't connect the dots. But someone saying "your story doesn't make sense!!" and they really mean "Your story doesn't go the way *I think* it should!" is plain idiotic.

So yeah, don't be "that guy" above...
I'll let your personal attack lie aside, but thank you for showing us that bit of your mind.
I'd like to respond in a constructive way:

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I think your points have merit and I am glad we could consider them. As per my promise, I reran the game with the new insight to figure out what the experience was like. I posted it two posts below for anyone interested. Also, I want to apologize to Ozygator. Even though I didn't write anything negative towards him, my previous closing statement wasn't anything uplifting. I well realize you are passionate about Sassy Girl and that's something I can only admire.
 
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AMRFTY

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Sassy Girl 0.4.17 - Updated thoughts
Warning: My thoughts have been considered as misleading over-interpretations by some users before, so I must urge you to read at your own risk.

Guess I am upping the review score on this game. First, I want to review what the dev Hematite said earlier:

Sassy Girl has always been a crazy story. (...) The very way in which all the scenes evolve falls into the realm of the absurd. (...) There isn't a single "normal" scene, and I've been very careful to avoid that. I enjoy writing absurd stories, and if many of you don't appreciate them... so be it.
Using this knowledge, I took a new dive into the game also remembering this was revealed:

The MC begins to think he has gone mad. If the player feeds his belief during his reflective monologues, one of the endings will see him in an asylum. On the contrary, everything will end in the best possible way...At this stage of the story, he is not crazy. But he may become one.
With that information, let's dive back in.

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While I consider myself someone who in the end will rank Sassy Girl positively, I hear the concerns that my earlier comments could harm player experience and perhaps even development experience. Knowing that, I think it's in good taste to acknowledge those feelings and adapt my posts so people won't feel hampered by it. I apologize if any harm hits the developer, that was never my intention. The posts have to my knowledge been updated. And so, I'll make sure to take a passive role going forward.

Please enjoy this game and form your own opinions.
 
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Overlord070

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Are some of the sex scenes forced?
Hmm let's see...there is a drunk woman that wants MC to fuck her then midway doesn't want it but immediately wants it again, she remembers everything the next day and is happy with the decision but some might see it as MC taking advantage.

MC also blackmails another to have have sex with him as a punishment since she wanted to hire people to sodomize the MC :KEK: in this end she loves the experience but it still starts out as a forced interaction.

I haven't played the last chapter yet, will probably do it tomorrow, gallery suggest there might be but...the women in this game are fucking crazy so it could very well be consensual as well lol.
 

Skep-tiker

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Are some of the sex scenes forced?
I don't think so (in terms of automatic sex scenes), but I don't really remember. But trust me joshy, the sex scenes in this game are the opposite of what you are searching. There is no snuggling or romantic chatter with few exceptions for Janine. Most of them are maledom.
 
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pango173

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looks bad for me with much girls and not much mens. no dominant scenes ? swinging ? gangbangs?
 

sunqian3000

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A clown who once attacked the developer is now performing an ugly and hypocritical performance.
That guy posing as a professional, running a review site to make dirty money.
Who once attacked the game now constantly misleads newcomers with various disguises.
I hope that every new player who wants to try this game will judge after playing it seriously.
Don't be influenced by those who attack game and attack developer of this game.
Not everyone so easy to deceived, not everyone chooses to turn a blind eye to silence.

The chaos that those people talk about is the real subtlety of this story.
Their accusations and wild speculations are just because they don't understand.
This game author has created a story that is not mediocre.
It's one of the few suspenseful stories in F95 worth watching even without the sex content.
 
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YaYa_UnTIN2

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Hi Dev,

This scene ending made me laugh out loud, the look on that poor guy's face, and the MC's chill' attitude, while still ploughing his new Catgirl plaything. :)

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Good luck with the game.

P.S. This is the only kind of NTR style I like, Netori "stealing an LI from someone".
 
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