Some feedback, if the Dev will be reading stuff here:
1. Transitions, text, and interactives need to be a bit faster. Not sure if it is potentially a limit of the engine choice, but the fades felt like they occured too often and were slow.
2. I imagine this is a limitation on the engine itself, but there needs to be an ability to adjust the screen size. Even setting it to "full screen" via F11 only makes the window border stretch, not the actual game.
3. Most common advice I give to most devs on this site: Have a gallery. You will gain a LOT of eyes just by having one. Not a BIG gripe since this is your first attempt, but definitely try to plan for one in the future.
On the plus side, the characters all have a unique look which is great (I hate when games have characters that almost look identical...). Your animations improve drastically after the initial titjob scene as well.