I'd actually forgotten I reviewed this but I have to change my rating and expand on my thoughts. I'm half tempted to go down to 2 Stars, but we'll see where I go with this. One of the reasons I forgot I made a review is it's boring. And not in an over-written, unnecessary details way, but an "all the relationships happen the same" type of way. Technically, Amber is different, but she was the demo version of the game, now it's all about how you have feelings for your NOTfamily. I have to say that because they try to avoid the censors with that and to illustrate that it bugs me that everyone seems to need incest content to enjoy anything...
The story is very simple, but interesting enough for me to actually be curious how it ends. (Even though we all know it's probably never going to end to milk patreon money) Anyway, when MC was a kid, his NOTFather, was kidnapped by an alternate universe. Naturally, MC doesn't accept that he's gone and grows up with the goal, to find out how to save his father. Eventually a secret government agency kidnaps him and tells him, not only is he a test tube baby not related to his family, but he has a "Supergene" that gives him and his sisters super powers. MC is of course able to use every power and is super strong and smart and the best person ever. Do you see how boring that is? Gary-Stu if I've ever heard it. Back to the story, after learning all of that, "The Company" from the other world contact him and try to recruit him right after. But MC isn't buying anything after learning about the lies.
The MC joined the police to investigate his father's disappearance and the whole time his partner was a spy sent to watch him. So he felt betrayed. But you see exactly two interactions with Allison as his partner before her character becomes a background character even until the end of this update(v0.10). So it's ineffective as a story point. After all of that, MC gets kidnapped AGAIN, only its the otherworld "Company" that does it to find out his power. I think. They don't get into it because he is immediately rescued. By Allison no less. Because she fell for the MC while spying on him. At the same time, MC's NOTSister, Daisy, is kidnapped and put under mind control to find out the MC's powers. She is ordered to try to seduce you as well not only because it might help MC's power but because the person that is still faceless liked to watch.
So Daisy is brainwashed for one chapter, because the only story beats that transfer version to version is that all the girls fall for MC right away. And she sort of learns that MC has mind control powers because of a blowjob. Then later that day, MC and her are out drinking and his mind powers mess with her head so she falls off the balcony and learns she can fly. Then MC can suddenly control his powers and erases the mind control on her. After that MC is transported to the other universe. And as to why, I'm not 100% sure. But he teleports there and meets the alternate version of Vanessa, Olivia, and Daisy. (NOTMom, and NOTSisters)
In the other world you learn that all men are either dead or captured for no discernable reason. The Company made an artificial continent to fight off the death of the planet. And everyone lives under extreme martial law. Other world Olivia is a rebel leader trying to fight the company, and Vanessa and Daisy are just farmers living day to day. Outside of that, you don't learn why or hown they're attacking MC's universe and the only other main story information you get is the MC training his ability in a machine with Vanessa, but nothing happens with that.
The rest of the game is MC having all the women fall for him. Amber, MC rescues as a cop and she loves him instantly. Daisy is the rebellious teen that falls for him after he saves her from mind control. Vanessa is lonely and likes the attention, she kisses him then pulls away but he kisses her back and she falls for him. Maeve, the maid that is in the story just to have a character wear a maids outfit. She has a scummy brother that he saves her from, she kisses her savior, pulls away, then he kisses her back. ARE WE SEEING A PATTERN? Currently, lastly, there's Olivia (in the main universe) she's shy and MC just says "i'll always be there for you" after abandoning the family for a decade and she falls for him. They go on a date, she kisses him, pulls back, and he kisses her back end of story. He also has feelings for the NOTFamily in the other universe but he leaves too early to get laid so he's trying to get back for that.
Like I said, the story is semi-interesting so I wanna know what happens. But every girl's love story is the same, and they even set up the new girl Ruri to have the same thing happen. Even though there's still a couple women in the story MC hasn't had fall for him yet, the scope creep is coming. And I wanna say in the beginning they used the emotion CG's and used the big pictures for important moments. I prefer that, not only because it saves on size, but it's easier on the creators. I don't need a giant uncompressed image to show one of the characters moving slightly. But whatever. And the biggest issue is the grammar issues. They get exponentially worse every update. I'm not even exaggerating. The first part is stiff but only minor issues and by this last update, Matthew and Ruri sound like robots using google translate. And the stiffness of the dialog gets worse as well. A contraction or two wouldn't hurt anyone. And the "I LOVE the Harry Potter(trademark)(copyright) Franchise" stuff is so ham-fisted in too. It's the only personable thing written into this. Everything else is either "you're beautiful" or "Don't mistreat others, that's mean." I just don't like the M'Lady dialog.
It's animated well, and the main story is interesting enough, but the size is padded with uncompressed images and stiff dialogue that makes it hard to read. On top of the good and evil meter that will mean they will have to split the paths and render out even more stuff for a good and evil ending. It's clearly written for patreon polls outside of an initial story direction, which means no one will ever know how the story ends. Knowing the majority on this site "PRETTY GIRLS ME 5 STAR" so if all you care about is attractive models you'll like this. If you're like me and need to romance your dick with an enticing story, it will suffice but it's not perfect.