KiichiYakuza

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Final chapter releases tomorrow btw...
hope we're not going to see the girls gang raped or something like that
cause before last chapter it was fun playing this one, loved the interactions between them, then the last chapter hits and bang, flashbacks of rape....and if I remember correctly .. not only 1 time, multiple times , nto sure if it was the same person or not.
 

Kukipett

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Oh my god those two are really totally fucked up in the head !o_O
The beginning of that update was good but i don't know, the more it goes the more it's getting really crazy and not in a good way.
I did not finished the scene with the knife because i really felt bad like i was watching two girls who had lost their mind.
That was not funny at all, just painfull to watch unfortunately, not for me!
That story in the beginning was really good but i always had some bad feeling in the background and well this time i realise i was right. Watching two girls completely fucked up in the head going crazy was a bit too much for me, sorry !
They should go see a psy as soon as possible.:confused:
 

Gaerax

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That was an ending worth both girls.
Overall an awesome story and i'm glad it ended all well. Didn't look like that several times.

Thanks for the great story and i'm hoping you start on a new one soon Gaerax
I'm glad you liked it! I knew the ending would be decisive, and that some people would not like it, but I'm glad to hear that some people did.
 

Avaron1974

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I think that was the perfect ending.

It needed to hit the extremes for her to realise how she felt.

I honestly don't think it could have gone any other way. Shi was damaged from what happened to her and Clem pushed her. She needed to see Clem hurt to understand what she was doing and her own feelings.

It's common knowledge on here i'm a bit of a soft bitch and love a bit of romance so i'm not ashamed to admit that last conversation made me blub a bit.

It was a really good story about 2 people that need each other.

I'm glad it ended how it did, I will admit I did think it was going to go a different way during that last sex scene but it had to happen for the ending to work.

Really well done.
 

Gaerax

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I think that was the perfect ending.

It needed to hit the extremes for her to realise how she felt.

I honestly don't think it could have gone any other way. Shi was damaged from what happened to her and Clem pushed her. She needed to see Clem hurt to understand what she was doing and her own feelings.

It's common knowledge on here i'm a bit of a soft bitch and love a bit of romance so i'm not ashamed to admit that last conversation made me blub a bit.

It was a really good story about 2 people that need each other.

I'm glad it ended how it did, I will admit I did think it was going to go a different way during that last sex scene but it had to happen for the ending to work.

Really well done.
Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it.
 

Havenless_

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Grand finale. It wasn't my favorite episode. I think the third one brought up a lot more emotions for me both good and bad, but I think all 4 episodes work very well. The last scene leaves me feeling pretty calm and satisfied.

I had said this before, but personally I would have liked to have had a fully romantic last scene, after seeing all the hardships they both have gone through. Maybe that leaves me a bit "unsatisfied". That and the scene between Vanessa and her boyfriend. With all due respect, that scene seemed totally unnecessary to me. :B

Buuuuut overall it was an amazing experience. A novel that delivers on the aspect of being for adults not only because of the porn, but because of the topics covered.

Congratulations for this great work.
 

Jonboy80

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Interesting aesthetic. Kinda makes me think of Toy Story.

Will give this a try. Definitely something different.
 

Flooper

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I just played this for the first time, and couldn't put it down at -all-... what an amazingly beautiful story <3 Thank you so much for making this *Beams*

I'm honestly having one of those pit moments, where I dunno what to do about myself... like I miss them <3 ... amazing job <3
 
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Gaerax

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I just played this for the first time, and couldn't put it down at -all-... what an amazingly beautiful story <3 Thank you so much for making this *Beams*

I'm honestly having one of those pit moments, where I dunno what to do about myself... like I miss them <3 ... amazing job <3
Thank you :love: I really appreciate your kind words. I'm glad you liked my story.
 

SilentMobius

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So, I loved the story and the resolution and, while I fully understand how much effort each scene takes, I can't help feel that it wrapped up a bit quick, maybe I'll change my mind when I go through the whole thing and have the earlier episodes pacing fresh in my mind, or maybe I just wanted to see more of them because I loved it so much

I'm kinda sad we dont get to see them post-resolution being a happy, kinky couple, but who knows maybe you'll be inspired to do a holiday special some time.

All that said I was worried where it was going when the knife came out but it all worked out in the end.
 

Gaerax

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So, I loved the story and the resolution and, while I fully understand how much effort each scene takes, I can't help feel that it wrapped up a bit quick, maybe I'll change my mind when I go through the whole thing and have the earlier episodes pacing fresh in my mind, or maybe I just wanted to see more of them because I loved it so much

I'm kinda sad we dont get to see them post-resolution being a happy, kinky couple, but who knows maybe you'll be inspired to do a holiday special some time.

All that said I was worried where it was going when the knife came out but it all worked out in the end.
Yeah, the ending is a more abrupt than I would have liked, but it is hard to make a satisfying end point. I am pretty happy with how it ended up though. I consider the story complete, but I will probably make a few little follow up scenes that I might just post on my Patreon as more like a comic or something. I also accept commissions there, I have made a few so far with the characters.
 
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