VN Ren'Py Abandoned Scandal [v0.02] [Stef Story]

[ijako3]

I forgot to mention - the conversation UI and font could get some work, at least the font to not so "default" i guess.

 

[XoXmmahmm]

Where are those scene or it not in this version?

 

[DrakoGhoul]

This looks interesting. I'll check it out. Nice to spice up the games i play every now and again.

 

[Try My Patience or Not]

Okay, played a bit and took some screenshots of some issues and stuff I just want to mention.


I think you meant to put "whispers" instead of "subheading" Also, I think the dialog box needs some work. If you look where it says "Q Save and Q Load" you can see weird icons there. The character's names are a bit big too. You should see how it looks when Marco and Sandra are singing together lol

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It says "her" when it should be "him" and "hug it" should be "hug him"

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Weird icons after "Valentina and Martina"

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It says "He" instead of "She"

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It doesn't say "full screen" "quit" or "disable" in English and if you look where it says "Auto Forward Time" there's a weird icon again.

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The text is too big here. Maybe you can put the character's names on top and not where you have it. I know you probably wanted to do something different but just saying.

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It says "He" instead of "She" This happens a couple times.

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It's showing the wrong person talking.

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Some text is still in another language, like this. Saying "Milan" Especially when the game starts.

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Should be "Give Her A Kiss" and "Better Not"

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Sorry for all these screenshots. I know there are a few more mistakes here and there but I didn't want to make a super long post with too many. I still haven't finished playing either lol. Hopefully these screenshots will help you out a bit though. There are also weird icons and such when you are on the save menu. Look at the bottom where the numbers are, and you'll see what I mean.

Personal pronouns (in English) could definitely use some corrections. He, him, are masculine and she, her, are feminine.

 

[nexer]

He changed all history, between Demo and 0.01

 

[Try My Patience or Not]

I'm just into the game a little bit, and I'm getting flashbacks of the guy with the books and a 2002 movie "Unfaithful", with Diane Lane and Richard Gere. Loved that movie! If the English could be fixed, this game has the potential to be one of the better ones out there. I like where it's going!

 

[Deleted member 3917737]

He changed all history, between Demo and 0.01

Indeed he did.

"v0.01 Offical
changed the game and restarted from scratch"

 

[tombombadinho]

I think that's not the correct pronouns (english is not my native language).

 

[Deleted member 3917737]

NTR?? Hard pass, unfortunately, then...

Seems people are replying to old posts and to the old version of the game. If you look at the tags and planned tags, there aren't any NTR tags. Try the game out and see for yourself.

I think that's not the correct pronouns (english is not my native language).

Yeah, I mentioned this in my other post. There are a lot of mistakes with the "He's and She's" I'm sure the Dev will fix them once he sees the posts mentioning it.

 

[Deleted member 3917737]

Where are those scene or it not in this version?

Maybe they are screenshots from the old version of the game. This is a newer version where he started over from scratch.

 

[tulfo]

Android port

 

[TomUK]

Like the game so far, just a few things that were a little annoying, first too many times the MC was referred as 'he, him and his' those are male terms, the MC as a female should be 'she and her', just stating this as I think English isn't the devs first language. Secondly, the end of the current version could have been explained more so people can save before the game just goes to title screen.

 

[nexer]

Like the game so far, just a few things that were a little annoying, first too many times the MC was referred as 'he, him and his' those are male terms, the MC as a female should be 'she and her', just stating this as I think English isn't the devs first language. Secondly, the end of the current version could have been explained more so people can save before the game just goes to title screen.

You are so un-progressive. Read more The Guardian

 

[zeus04]

 

[andrew david irving]

I liked the game so far, and I agree that the language problems don't really detract from the storyline and expect that they will be slowly sorted out later. The game seems to set up a broad range of potential relationships, and it will be interesting to see how things pan-out.

 

[sisso69]

I liked it a lot

 

[Jackpots]

Where is the son! It would have been even hotter with a son...

 

[KREEEEP]

Nice game. I really look forward for more

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

Where are those scene or it not in this version?
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I didn’t see those scenes in my playthrough either

 

[Lucrezia&Augusto]

First, I thank all of you for your interest.

Then I apologize for some grammatical errors. I had a problem with my translator who left me for family reasons.
So I am looking for a new collaborator.

I hope you enjoyed the story and let's continue with this adventure
Thanks to all
Hi
Stefano