This is why hand-holding is the most disgusting fetish out there. We've come full circle.
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Game is Sandbox
Title isnt a lie, probably bait but I doubt it will go into the hated NTR or korean fuckery.
Its clear where the game is going so chill guys.
To be honest, its not THAT bad, but the Sandbox really, really, REALLY is downgrading this game experience.
Unlike some people here I enjoy Sandbox, but here it really feels bogus.
Either because there is no follow up between the "main" scenes and what MC can do outside the "scenes", or that during this repeatable actions the story lose its momentum.
The other thing I didnt liked is HOW some scenes where very fast, or failed to potray what it wanted to say. Example is Kyedae.
Like what was her deal ?
I really want to know whats with these scenes of the girls getting killed or raped. Are they avoidable or nah ?
My honest opinnion. Scrap the Sandbox and focus on the VN part because this is where the game seems to shine.
Game is Sandbox
Title isnt a lie, probably bait but I doubt it will go into the hated NTR or korean fuckery.
Its clear where the game is going so chill guys.
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To be honest, its not THAT bad, but the Sandbox really, really, REALLY is downgrading this game experience.
Unlike some people here I enjoy Sandbox, but here it really feels bogus.
Either because there is no follow up between the "main" scenes and what MC can do outside the "scenes", or that during this repeatable actions the story lose its momentum.
The other thing I didnt liked is HOW some scenes where very fast, or failed to potray what it wanted to say. Example is Kyedae.
Like what was her deal ?
I really want to know whats with these scenes of the girls getting killed or raped. Are they avoidable or nah ?
My honest opinnion. Scrap the Sandbox and focus on the VN part because this is where the game seems to shine.
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about the sandbox thing.
i wanted to create more girls for you to explore sadly my game is too early and dont have enough time to create enough scene from koikatsu
i want to insert some mini game too
about the story i agree to all of you. it is unavoidable and fast
i guess its just my first time creating the game
and still learning how to code and animate in koikatsu studio
but i do know now what people want maybe i just need to remove some serious scene
thank you for all your feedback. im motivated to start redoing the story or fixing it .
thank you everyone
Just came here to please don´t water the game down dev!
It is of course OK to implement a soft/romance path for the people who like it but please let players have a choice!
We need more dark games for people like me who enjoy them!
It is of course OK to implement a soft/romance path for the people who like it but please let players have a choice!
We need more dark games for people like me who enjoy them!
Bro. Don't worry about the scene content pleasing people here at all, plenty of us like that brutal rapey stuff, we just don't tend to be loud about such refined tastes, just make something you actually LIKE yourself.
That'll keep you motivated long enough to get some practice in making this. Otherwise you'll get bored at making a sex game for other peoples kinks and not your own. (Just be aware that NTR stuff in particular is really a controversial topic here. Many love and many hate it.)
Then if you have your skills up enough from that and you wanna go all patreon compliant by all means make some souless lowest common denominator (crowd pleasing) generic vanilla crap that you don't truly care about, to get that patreon money going. But if you make your first sketchily made practice game with the aim of pleasing sensitive people whining on a pirate game forum, then ... seems to me you've already lost at whatever you wanted to do...
The people above *do* have a point about you initially not making it clear / misrepresenting what kind of game this was, which is why they reacted strongly to the scenes highlighted. If this was called "Crime boss time travel Brutal Rape Simulator 2k22 - Get Cucked" you wouldn't have had a problem at all in the comments...
My advice is to decided what *you want to make* , then communicate that to this audience clearly, then continue developing that. Clearly put a thing on your top post explaining what kind of scenes will be in the game, what is optional, who gets to fuck the women (you or some other person) etc.
That'll keep you motivated long enough to get some practice in making this. Otherwise you'll get bored at making a sex game for other peoples kinks and not your own. (Just be aware that NTR stuff in particular is really a controversial topic here. Many love and many hate it.)
Then if you have your skills up enough from that and you wanna go all patreon compliant by all means make some souless lowest common denominator (crowd pleasing) generic vanilla crap that you don't truly care about, to get that patreon money going. But if you make your first sketchily made practice game with the aim of pleasing sensitive people whining on a pirate game forum, then ... seems to me you've already lost at whatever you wanted to do...
The people above *do* have a point about you initially not making it clear / misrepresenting what kind of game this was, which is why they reacted strongly to the scenes highlighted. If this was called "Crime boss time travel Brutal Rape Simulator 2k22 - Get Cucked" you wouldn't have had a problem at all in the comments...
My advice is to decided what *you want to make* , then communicate that to this audience clearly, then continue developing that. Clearly put a thing on your top post explaining what kind of scenes will be in the game, what is optional, who gets to fuck the women (you or some other person) etc.
I prefer a more wholesome romance thing myself but I don't mind a darker one either. Maybe you could make it like lewd town adventures where there's a common route and at some point in the story you can choose to go down the darker rape/whore route or the wholesome route. Personally I'm just not a fan of rape in general to be honest so maybe this game isn't designed for me but at the end of the day it's up to you how you make this game.
On the sandbox thing I like sandbox games when they have other things to do like side stories and I like when they give you the choice of which character to pursue next until you have to converge back to the common path.
I somehow doubt that this level of unavoidable brutality has a large enough fanbase that'd support the game well but it does have a niche which dedicated fans might be willing to fund so I could be proven wrong. As I said it could go down the lewd town adventures route of a common route with a split path but it would end up presenting the issue of either having the routes be almost identical or the issue of you essentially making two different games at the same time
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It is simple. Wholesome ntr. Or wholesome ntred? Ntred wholesome? Some many options, ah. xD
P.S.
Just keep in mind that what we see first is what makes our opinion and expectations. And it is bad when it falls down...)
And yeah, as ppl say. Don't really listen to what we say here, better look for what ppl actually pay.
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I assume that femdom only goes with ntr? If y, sadge.
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At this point in my life I don't want overly graphic torture or NTR.
That said I can find dozens of good "Wholesome" games and I run across NTR often enough that I doubt anyone is getting blue balls (Unless that's the point of watching NTR. However, GOOD DARK games are on the rare side. Rare enough that while I won't play it if it has unavoidable NTR, I would still rather you make a GOOD DARK game with unavoidable NTR then another good "wholesome" game.
As others have said the better you express what you WON'T have and as well as WILL have in the game the less hate you will get as long as you stick to it.
That said I can find dozens of good "Wholesome" games and I run across NTR often enough that I doubt anyone is getting blue balls (Unless that's the point of watching NTR
. However, GOOD DARK games are on the rare side. Rare enough that while I won't play it if it has unavoidable NTR, I would still rather you make a GOOD DARK game with unavoidable NTR then another good "wholesome" game.As others have said the better you express what you WON'T have and as well as WILL have in the game the less hate you will get as long as you stick to it.
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so long as the story is good and there's some clue as to why the MC, at least i imagine it's the MC, is so dark and twisted fuck it go dark. Although i would suggest giving the option to go either a dark route or not just to see how far down the rabbit hole people are willing to go in a game, but thats up to you on how much work you want to put into this.
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Just do whatever story it is that you want to do, and don't worry about the bitching.
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The language in general needs work, and just a bit more to it. Also, run things through a spellchecker too it'd pick up stuff like "suprise". Abbreviating fuck to fck is just weird this isn't a text message on a phone. Punctuation would be nice... starting sentences with capitals, 'I' instead of 'i', ending with a full stop.
The sandbox is godawful, a million places to go, all empty... just ditch it it's entirely unnecessary (you can only ever do one thing anyway) and a detriment to most games that use one. You lose the shortcut button to enter the club room when it's afternoon. You can't go home unless it's night, if you check a room and it tells you no one is there it kicks you back out to the map and expects you to ride the bus home again.
The screens on the OP look great, there's so many boring vanilla games around, I'm always stoked for a new one that's actually a bit rough and spicey... but everything else is jank and I didn't even find that content ingame... also not sure why the MC is being all nice atm though, I'd want to be a dick and I thought that choice was the whole point.
The sandbox is godawful, a million places to go, all empty... just ditch it it's entirely unnecessary (you can only ever do one thing anyway) and a detriment to most games that use one. You lose the shortcut button to enter the club room when it's afternoon. You can't go home unless it's night, if you check a room and it tells you no one is there it kicks you back out to the map and expects you to ride the bus home again.
The screens on the OP look great, there's so many boring vanilla games around, I'm always stoked for a new one that's actually a bit rough and spicey... but everything else is jank and I didn't even find that content ingame... also not sure why the MC is being all nice atm though, I'd want to be a dick and I thought that choice was the whole point.
Just here to say maybe try to change the location icon so that it remains active rather than having it flashing quickly when mouse is moving around the location area(I believe you've made it so that it appears each time the mouse gets closer to the location name, maybe 1/2 pixels it flashes). I know, it's a first version. Just wanted to point out this little visual mechanic problem.
(If you try to please everyone, you'll please no one. I recommend you make a game with the content you want to see. There's plenty I'd like to see that I don't think you're going to provide, I think you're going for a narrative route that I'm unlikely to enjoy, but MY content desires should not be the decider for what YOU put in your game. There's an audience for everything after all.
What I DO think should perhaps be taken into account, aside from general improvements to grammar, story-structure, errors, and the like, is labelling. Even with your appropriate tags, the game's title 'School' and the description, are very basic, general, and vague. The pictures and labels help, however honestly, I would rethink your game title to something that reflects it's darker bend and the violence it intends to put girls though, shows and/or hints at that. In addition, I would outright state it in your description and in addition to just adding more detail, make it clear that you cover very dark themes in the game.
That's my advice given. I wish you the best with your endeavor.)
What I DO think should perhaps be taken into account, aside from general improvements to grammar, story-structure, errors, and the like, is labelling. Even with your appropriate tags, the game's title 'School' and the description, are very basic, general, and vague. The pictures and labels help, however honestly, I would rethink your game title to something that reflects it's darker bend and the violence it intends to put girls though, shows and/or hints at that. In addition, I would outright state it in your description and in addition to just adding more detail, make it clear that you cover very dark themes in the game.
That's my advice given. I wish you the best with your endeavor.)