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Valoryn

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Jul 13, 2018
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Are there endings that the MC ends up together with Chloe, Ashley, or both of them? I think this game needs a thorough walkthrough to find the route to all its endings.
 
Feb 29, 2020
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Ok seriously! Do any devs even try to keep consistency and logical sense in there games? I probably couldn't name 4 if I played every game on this site.

I read the description of this game and was ok seems decent enough I'll give it a try.
So I did. And where as I realize that this game does have the mentally ill tag (you know the one).
Even still according to the description I should be able play through where I am not related to anybody unless I feel like patching that in.
Which leads me to my first issue. How is it that Nicole in the description is my former role model but later in the game she goes from being my role model to my caregiver to my mom? Sometimes 2 or 3 of each within the same sentence?
I mean seriously if she's meant to be my mom make her my mom, if she's meant to be my old 6th grade teacher make her so, if she's meant to be my dads old boss from the convenience store make her that and stick with it. Don't keep switching what her relationship to me is every few scenes.
My next issue of inconsistency is in playing 2 different walk throughs. One where I forgave Nicole at the begining and one where I didnt forgive her.
And during my did not forgive walkthrough I choose every choice that gives me negative points with her. But regardless at the end of the day there my MC is being a total lustball wanting to tongue fuck Nicole's fart box just the same as he wants to do making every choice that gives him positive points.
If I make every choice to show that I don't like Nicole why do I always end up with the same end result as the choices where I simp to her on my possitive route?

Random scene during a meal playing forgave route: Wow I sure missed Nicole, She sure is sexy
Exact same scene on other route: Wow I sure missed Nicole she sure is sexy.
How the second route should go: Why do I have to be here? Why is this bitch looking at me like that? You know what I'm just gonna go to my room and eat a granola bar.

Is it really that hard? But no at the end of the day no matter how much you try to have nothing to do with Nicole who I will remind you is your mom, your role model, an old friend of your mom and dad your paper delivery gal and the weather lady all rolled into one. ( yes I was slightly exagerating there).

I'm afraid to go any farther in the game because I'm pretty sure I'll come to find out that Derek is also my brother
Or that I'm actually also Jesica.
 

DA22

Devoted Member
Jan 10, 2018
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Well I do not know what you did wrong or just did not progress far enough in your game, but going negative with Nicole does give a totally different end of the game. :p Just if you go negative she will for a time pursue you more aggresively.

Considering the incest thing, well I think the direction of the game and its intention was clear enough from the start,the fact devs or an insidious uploader :p needed unfortunately to use a workaround to make the game they wanted due to unwarranted censorship of a company does not take away from that. I get you are not a fan of the genre but that is your problem, not of the game, it delivers what it says on the package. Only fault is that the cleaned up version may not be cleaned up well enough as they intended to stay out of trouble. :p

*Yes, unwarranted censorship of a company. That content is not illegal by law, it is just the desires of some people in the corporate board of a company that more or less makes illegal what is not illegal and as such overrules the will of lawmakers around the world that at least have some democratic legitimacy.
 

MaksB

Member
Game Developer
May 1, 2017
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1. Why did you decide that our conversation can be published for everyone?
2. I then and now do not understand what you want?
 

Lamoucheronn

Well-Known Member
Apr 28, 2017
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Anyone want to spoil me the ending with negative points with the mother please? Also is there an Ashley route available?
 

DrakteisckyG

Newbie
Dec 8, 2018
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I don't fully understand the criticisms, I prefer a "completed" story with some faults over most of the mindless sandboxs and uncompleted projects you can find around here.
I think the Nicole route was horrible, I couldn't stand her but the relation with Jess and Carol was charming. I wish we had more but I don't see why bitching about the amount of content.
For me, nice job and thank you.
 

WICKEDp4th

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Donor
Sep 6, 2017
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1. Why did you decide that our conversation can be published for everyone?
2. I then and now do not understand what you want?
He uses a lot of words to tell you, that your writer has lacking writing and english skills. I guess he want to help you write a better story next time.
:unsure:
 
Feb 29, 2020
478
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Ok seriously! Do any devs even try to keep consistency and logical sense in there games? I probably couldn't name 4 if I played every game on this site.

I read the description of this game and was ok seems decent enough I'll give it a try.
So I did. And where as I realize that this game does have the mentally ill tag (you know the one).
Even still according to the description I should be able play through where I am not related to anybody unless I feel like patching that in.
Which leads me to my first issue. How is it that Nicole in the description is my former role model but later in the game she goes from being my role model to my caregiver to my mom? Sometimes 2 or 3 of each within the same sentence?
I mean seriously if she's meant to be my mom make her my mom, if she's meant to be my old 6th grade teacher make her so, if she's meant to be my dads old boss from the convenience store make her that and stick with it. Don't keep switching what her relationship to me is every few scenes.
My next issue of inconsistency is in playing 2 different walk throughs. One where I forgave Nicole at the begining and one where I didnt forgive her.
And during my did not forgive walkthrough I choose every choice that gives me negative points with her. But regardless at the end of the day there my MC is being a total lustball wanting to tongue fuck Nicole's fart box just the same as he wants to do making every choice that gives him positive points.
If I make every choice to show that I don't like Nicole why do I always end up with the same end result as the choices where I simp to her on my possitive route?

Random scene during a meal playing forgave route: Wow I sure missed Nicole, She sure is sexy
Exact same scene on other route: Wow I sure missed Nicole she sure is sexy.
How the second route should go: Why do I have to be here? Why is this bitch looking at me like that? You know what I'm just gonna go to my room and eat a granola bar.

Is it really that hard? But no at the end of the day no matter how much you try to have nothing to do with Nicole who I will remind you is your mom, your role model, an old friend of your mom and dad your paper delivery gal and the weather lady all rolled into one. ( yes I was slightly exagerating there).

I'm afraid to go any farther in the game because I'm pretty sure I'll come to find out that Derek is also my brother
Or that I'm actually also Jesica.
Allow me to provide a more detailed illustration.

Overview:
In order to attend college, A young man must move in with a former *role model* that abandoned him. Will he be able to forgive, or will he not be able to make up for lost time.

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Above spoilers MC and Nicole are clearly not related.

Lower spoilers suddenly they are related..

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So seriously what exactly is Nicole to the MC? Is she just an old friend of his dads that caused his parents to get divorced because she cheated on his dad?
Or is she some sort of magical wizard who is not only not the MC's mother because it is said that the MC's mother didn't like Nicole because MC's dad cheated on his mom with Nicole. But at the same time she is also MC's mother who hates herself because the MCs dad cheated on her with herself.
 

RedPyrate

Member
Oct 11, 2017
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Very good game. Beautiful models, loved them all. Yup, script was not perfect.
I don't care, If you want great reading read John Steinbeck. Maks did a great job, All you critics should go write your own games. He has every right to be very proud of what he produced here. Hope he does something else we will also be privileged to experience.
I'm sorry it had to end, but he actually finished the game and tied up the loose ends.
I enjoyed it all . . . .
R3D
 
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