DrakoGhoul

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Ok i played through the update now. To start im not going lie I'm on the non forgiven route just for jessica and for a realistic reaction from MC toward the mom.

Now with that said some of the dialogue between MC and the Mom is questionable, i got her at -28 which is the highest possible i think yet the Mc is being overly nice to her. Might have to go back on what i said about the game last update if he's forced to forgive her too easily.

I still enjoyed this update though it was short i can't wait to see how this thing play out next update. It has me interested because the MC is so jaded by his situation. The Mom dialogue this update was kind of out there and Ashley is definitely a B, she's taking some of this too far( i have a feeling she snitched on that part at the end).
 

bonghits420

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on the dont forgive mom have MC team up with Ashley to get back at her isnt that was he said at the start of the game? find a way to make her pay for leaving him?
MC is living in Derek's house as a guest,so the MC is in a precarious situation. If Nicole goes down in flames,then MC goes down as well.
She is straight fire.

Damn, was really looking forward to this update, was a short one. But nice to see the story progress a very small bit.
As I was writing the dialogues I assumed the update would be bigger, but I was incorrect. I take full responsibility for that. That will be fixed with next update. Thank you for the feedback.
 

Eerie Entity

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Ok i played through the update now. To start im not going lie I'm on the non forgiven route just for jessica and for a realistic reaction from MC toward the mom.

Now with that said some of the dialogue between MC and the Mom is questionable, i got her at -28 which is the highest possible i think yet the Mc is being overly nice to her. Might have to go back on what i said about the game last update if he's forced to forgive her too easily.

I still enjoyed this update though it was short i can't wait to see how this thing play out next update. It has me interested because the MC is so jaded by his situation. The Mom dialogue this update was kind of out there and Ashley is definitely a B, she's taking some of this too far( i have a feeling she snitched on that part at the end).
Was a quite nice update, definitely disliking Ashley more and more, acting like the world revolves around her, especially on the Forgive Mom- path, but even on the Don't Forgive Mom- path Ashley is being intolerable, so far she has no redeeming qualities, especially after not finishing that BJ she started, and what's with this "slave" talk? She better start treating me better than this or I'll let Jessica smash her face in and won't move a muscle to stop her xD

I definitely would've been happy without that sex scene with mom and Derek. It's not unusual that married couples start having less and less sex, but in this case she could've and should've just said no, especially since it's only her son she wants now, so emotionally she already betrays her son by having sex with Derek, she didn't even want to, so why do it?
I don't think anyone would've been upset if she just denied Derek and carried on thinking/sleeping :p
 

Skylaroo

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The game's premise is good, but the execution is still very lacking. Despite the clear choices of forgive/not to Mom, the interaction is not done anywhere near well enough. It feels like the game is completely written for the forgiving path, and then not enough changes were made for the non-forgiving path (e.g.: Ashley is still a bitch to MC regardless, no option to decline hugging Mom at the park, etc).
 

ArmoredCascade

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The game's premise is good, but the execution is still very lacking. Despite the clear choices of forgive/not to Mom, the interaction is not done anywhere near well enough. It feels like the game is completely written for the forgiving path, and then not enough changes were made for the non-forgiving path (e.g.: Ashley is still a bitch to MC regardless, no option to decline hugging Mom at the park, etc).
thats why i said whats the point of two paths they play out the same no matter what you pick
 

kanekidom

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Just started playing the game and it seems interesting, but i gotta ask what year is this where someone gets arrested for an eighth of weed?? LOL thats funny
 

MaksB

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Just started playing the game and it seems interesting, but i gotta ask what year is this where someone gets arrested for an eighth of weed?? LOL thats funny
in my country, you can go to prison for 10 years just for possession or use of drugs.
but I do not write the text. I'm just an artist and coder
 

kanekidom

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in my country, you can go to prison for 10 years just for possession or use of drugs.
but I do not write the text. I'm just an artist and coder
Damn i forget not everyone is from America on here especially where i live where weed is legal. Thats crazy
 

DrakoGhoul

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Damn i forget not everyone is from America on here especially where i live where weed is legal. Thats crazy
Weed isn't even legal in my state yet and i never went to jail for it. They just take it from you unless you have a large amount( like somewhere around $100 worth).
 

Eerie Entity

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At least that's not as bad as going to prison for misgendering people on Twitter.:sneaky:
Damn i forget not everyone is from America on here especially where i live where weed is legal. Thats crazy
Well, if it's true what I've been told, by Philly_Games no less, in Canada you can get up to like 30 years of jail time just for having 3D loli material on your computer, if that's true, then I rather go to jail for having weed on me, better that than going jail and people there finding out that I'm in there for having loli content, haha xD
 

DrakoGhoul

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Well, if it's true what I've been told, by Philly_Games no less, in Canada you can get up to like 30 years of jail time just for having 3D loli material on your computer, if that's true, then I rather go to jail for having weed on me, better that than going jail and people there finding out that I'm in there for having loli content, haha xD
Might end up as someones Prison Loli :ROFLMAO:.
 
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ThunderRob

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Well, if it's true what I've been told, by Philly_Games no less, in Canada you can get up to like 30 years of jail time just for having 3D loli material on your computer, if that's true, then I rather go to jail for having weed on me, better that than going jail and people there finding out that I'm in there for having loli content, haha xD
LOL..no..considering max jailtime for just murder in here in Canada is 25 years per..30 for 3D loli dosnt exist :p he may have mistyped or misthought..starts at i believe 3 years if convicted of having **********..anyone under 16..and can go up to life(25 years if there are other factors such as contact with underage rape etc)but 25 years is our max for a single crime(one murder one rape etc etc)
 
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MC is living in Derek's house as a guest,so the MC is in a precarious situation. If Nicole goes down in flames,then MC goes down as well.

She is straight fire.


As I was writing the dialogues I assumed the update would be bigger, but I was incorrect. I take full responsibility for that. That will be fixed with next update. Thank you for the feedback.
Don't get me wrong, mate. I loved the past updates, and this one too. It being short was my only critique.

I could never forget a writing assignment I had once in uni, having to write a speech and deliver it to my class (horror), what I thought would be 10 minutes, turned out to be about 2 or 3 minutes, the whole thing was a nightmare lol.

Can't wait to see more :)
 

RoadWulf

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Seriously, is Chloe actually going to ever do anything? The one sister who actually likes him and you don't let her do anything. I haven't seen a conversation they've had since the first one that lasted more than 2 frames. It seems like a total waste honestly. He could at least be hanging out with her every so often, even if you don't intend for her to be a romantic character.
 
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