VN Ren'Py Completed Second Chance [v1.0] [Maks]

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El Tanque

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Ennoch said:
With its over the top downright parodistic reactions? The serious imbalance between character on-screen time? Hardly. Its not as generic aand maybe not even as laughably toonish but not a gem either.
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Just to be clear, that P.S. Didn't correspond to my game... But to Second Chance game, I deleted my comment, because it left the subject. :)

And second Chance is not that bad, if the developer takes into account, some of the good advice or constructive criticism that some of the players have made, "COULD" be very good.
 
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Is there by the way a possibility to have the threesome with Jessica and Carol while you are on the Forgiving path?
 
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MaksB Will the writing feels off (especially about character relations) without incest patch? I'm okay with incest but its not my preference. I don't like to read something like "but she's my landlady, it's wrong" or for this game, "but she's my parents friend, it's wrong" I mean who cares if she is, especially when she ruined your childhood.
 
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introvtx said:
@MaksB Will the writing feels off (especially about character relations) without incest patch? I'm okay with incest but its not my preference. I don't like to read something like "but she's my landlady, it's wrong" or for this game, "but she's my parents friend, it's wrong" I mean who cares if she is, especially when she ruined your childhood.
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Story makes no sense whatsoever if she isn't the mom. Its about she abandoning her son and now tries to make amends.
 
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For all it's shortcomings, I still like the game. It's got an interesting premise and the characters stir emotions in the player, be it positive or negative ones. It's certainly got potential.

And I can't believe I'm saying this, especially because I'm on the forgiving path, but I genuinely feel bad for Derek. So far he took us into his home and has been nothing but nice to us (and I'm assuming he will be the one to get us out of trouble, seeing as he's a lawyer). And what does he get for it? His wife turns into a cold fish in bed and wants to cheat on him.
Plus, even IF he were a huge prick, he's already punished enough by having fucking Ashley as a daughter. :ROFLMAO:

During their sex scene I actually rooted for him, that was a first. Let the poor guy at least get some poon for christ's sake. Maybe we can double team her? :D
 
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oidex said:
During their sex scene I actually rooted for him, that was a first. Let the poor guy at least get some poon for christ's sake. Maybe we can double team her? :D
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NOOOO would prefer that he keep it, than share.
325146 and don't see that shit...:sick: HAHAHA
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Aside from stupid plot porn aside, I don't think it would get to that point. She seems like a capable enough woman to be able to live on her own without needing to degrade herself into doing that. At that point, she would probably take her son, her "doormat daughter" and move on with their lives.
 
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Loving the game so far, I agree some of the writing is a bit off, had two times Jess or Chloe said their name instead of the other girls. Also the different paths have ALOT of overlap and the reusing of some dialog make the previous scenes not make sense, like they happened in a bubble.

Over all, I love the premise, the story so far, and the paths between forgiving, not forgiving (ashley), and the middle path (Jess/Chloe). I liked it so much i went back and played all 3 routes. Overall I think i will end up doing a middle path as ya, mom needs to earn MC's forgiveness (and his cock).

Also, having any scenes younger sibling needs to not happen unless you recon her age to being 18. Dont need to go to jail for loli content. That being said, i'm all for aging her up to the threshold, she seems like a sweetheart.
 
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Is anyone else having a problem with how the scenes are built? To me it feels like, some of them, instead of being a scene that naturally progresses into a different room, they are just a couple of renders with unnecessary skips between them. That's why the park scene was so good, because it felt natural.
 
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The pacing is really inappropriate for the characters' personalities. That is, their personality aspects don't indicate the speed at which the interactions with the MC are progressing as being "realistic." If you're going to jump right into things you need to have the characters' personalities reflect that or else you have to do more gradual character progression.
Also, why the hell does the OP still have the incest REMOVAL patch labeled as the incest patch?
 
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KnightoftheWhiteSun said:
Also, having any scenes younger sibling needs to not happen unless you recon her age to being 18. Dont need to go to jail for loli content. That being said, i'm all for aging her up to the threshold, she seems like a sweetheart.
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"Happy birthday sis, how old are you now?" That could fix it.
 
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