VN Ren'Py Completed Second Chance [v1.0] [Maks]

[Deleted member 15555]

well you forgot that derek fucked MC's mom even tho she had a husband and a kid so he's a little bit a bad guy?

well he is not going to fuck her anymore , he only fucks her in the game 1 time and she is already tired of him in both routes (is actually the point of that scene, she is falling for the mc in rthe blue oute and in the other she wanted him)
I think at this point the red route will be even better since we can fuck a lot of the girls

I'm looking for Chloe content. Does this content exist at all?

I actually want that, lets hope they add a goal in patreon for Cloe since i think it will be something to attract more support for the game.

 

[laflare82]

well he is not going to fuck her anymore , he only fucks her in the game 1 time and she is already tired of him in both routes (is actually the point of that scene, she is falling for the mc in rthe blue oute and in the other she wanted him)
I think at this point the red route will be even better since we can fuck a lot of the girls


I actually want that, lets hope they add a goal in patreon for Cloe since i think it will be something to attract more support for the game.

To all the Eugene's Chloe is bookmarked as 14 or 15 I can't recall but you'll never see content with her if that's what your hoping for

 

[Deleted member 15555]

To all the Eugene's Chloe is bookmarked as 14 or 15 I can't recall but you'll never see content with her if that's what your hoping for

there is no mention in the game of Chloe age so i dont know where you are getting she is 14 / 15

 

[Master of Puppets]

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[Jonny Skull]

The heck is a "step-aunt"? Is that a regional thing? Isn't Reedley Derek's niece? Whoever he's married to would be Reedley's aunt, right?

 

[karlpilkert]

The heck is a "step-aunt"? Is that a regional thing? Isn't Reedley Derek's niece? Whoever he's married to would be Reedley's aunt, right?

Everything is a step-something to avoid getting nuked by Patreon. Soon there'll be step-friends, and step-roommates.

 

[Watcher X]

Just finished the bad mom route. This is easily the worst update of the whole story.

Firstly, Nicole's new look is dreadful. She went from a hot bitchy mother to what looks like a crack whore. For the love of god why????

Secondly, it has more plot holes and ridiculous dialogue than a cheap 70s porn flick. Don't get me started on Diana and the hero 'reward'...that was just cringe.

I've seen better and more consistent character development on a Saturday morning cartoon show, especially with Nicole and Ashley. That was Batwoman levels of bad writing.

Pity, the whole bad mother scenario was fun and interesting while it lasted, but I think I'm done with his game.

 

[MrDL]

TBH I kind of fell off on this when Nicole, from out of no where flipped into a psycho on my main route. From the post above it doesn't sound like it's rebounded.

 

[Erecticman007]

Im dissapointed in the Unforgiven route. I save you. Yeah i forgive you so start changing okay mom? Really? Just a moments ago you tryin to throw me out of the house and calling me a pussy. And the one with Ashley jesus. One moment she's a fucking unbearable and the second she's obedient.
I want them to become my whores not this lovey dovey crap in unforgiven route. That's why it's called "Unforgiven" am i right?

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Officers Puerco and Le Porc — not like we didn't already get Uncle Bob's view on the police previously.

 

[TNT3]

thank you for this

 

[Morpheus668]

Ima just point this out really quick...

one frame has this

followed by this


even if the truck has a tonneau cover you dont call it a trunk! Jesus Bob youre suck a fucktard!

ETA: and I see the dumb mother fucker keeps calling it a trunk...

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Ima just point this out really quick...

one frame has this
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followed by this
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even if the truck has a tonneau cover you dont call it a trunk! Jesus Bob youre suck a fucktard!

ETA: and I see the dumb mother fucker keeps calling it a trunk...

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Not sure if you've noticed, but Maks' first language isn't English. This type of mistake shouldn't be surprising for a non-native English speaker when reading the definition in the dictionary. Sure, the definition mentions a car specifically, but if you're looking up the definition of a word in another language, it's easy to missing a small word like that, regardless of how important it may be.



I agree that this error needs to be corrected, but honestly, there are far worse mistakes out there.

 

[Morpheus668]

stuff

A) Im aware. And my post was mostly in jest (as such, my comments were directed at fucktard bob, not the dev)

B) A pick up truck is not an "enclosed compartment" [I mean hell, I dont even think their legs were tied! They could have just jumped out at any time! ]. Unless, as I pointed out, you have a tonneau cover. But even if you do have one, nobody, and I mean NOBODY, ever calls it a trunk! well, maybe there is that one person out there who was repeatedly dropped on their head as a small child that might... lol

 

[The ArcKnight]

How many different paths are there in this game? is it just Good/bad relationship w/nicole or do other things matter?

 

[DrakoGhoul]

Some of you guys man... Lol i stan hard for the Unforgiven route myself personally but some of the stuff you guys are saying is just ridiculous now. You're mom almost got raped and killed. You guys really think it's out of character for The MC or even Nicole to finally let that stuff go on the unforgiven route? No amount of hate\abandonment\"Mommy" issues would make someone want their mom to be raped and killed. At that the point you have to look at what's more important, your ego and pride or the life of the woman who gave birth to you.

I've always seen the Unforgiven route for Nicole as more of the mc slowly Dominating her, if not making her submissive to him. Whether it's sexually or not only time will. As i look at each update I'm not sure which way it'll go.

Now moving on, i finally finished the "good" son route and I'll say it was alright but i still preferred the unforgiven route more. I'll be honest, i view the unforgiven route as the Main route and forgiven as the What if ? Route. Anyway I got 37 love(?) points so i guess that's the max amount unless i messed up somewhere earlier since i just used my save from last update.

The story on the "good" route this update seems a bit too cliche and safe in my opinion. Don't get me wrong this isn't a jab at the Dev or anything but the story seems like I've played it already at times. Really i can't even blame that on the dev as it's not their fault that I've played way too many porn games lol.

As for the playing safe part i mean't the kidnapping on the forgiven. It didn't have as big of an impact because the one character that actually mattered to the MC didn't get kidnap.

The MCs effort doesn't really seem that meaningful in that scenario. Imo, she should've been the one to get kidnap and the MC goes to rescue her himself, disregarding all the warning and everything showing how important she really is to him, to the point that he'd put his own life on the line just for her because of how much he loves her. That would've made more sense than the other character who he's iffy about. Isn't that more cliche? Yeah, but it would've fit in better.

So I'll say the forgiven route side of the update was okay but it wasn't nothing too exciting for me personally. For the update in its entirety, i'd say it was great.

 

[Qwert99]

Some of you guys man... Lol i stan hard for the Unforgiven route myself personally but some of the stuff you guys are saying is just ridiculous now. You're mom almost got raped and killed. You guys really think it's out of character for The MC or even Nicole to finally let that stuff go on the unforgiven route? No amount of hate\abandonment\"Mommy" issues would make someone want their mom to be raped and killed

You seem to have completely missed the point. Obviously he's gonna save them, but five minutes earlier the mother was nonstop berating him and has been a bitch to him her whole life. There's a difference between not letting your family members get killed and instantly forgiving everything they've done, because... what?? There's no reason to do so. The correct response to the situation would be saving them and then telling the women pulling some Tartuffe level shit to piss off.

 

[Master of Puppets]

TBH I kind of fell off on this when Nicole, from out of no where flipped into a psycho on my main route. From the post above it doesn't sound like it's rebounded.

No, the unforgiven route has her and Ashley doing a complete 180 this update, they stop being bitches altogether. Where it goes from there is anybodies guess.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Blah, blah, blah

1) Bob's dialogue is written by the developer, ergo, you made fun of the developer.

2) Almost completely ignoring what I said doesn't suddenly negate my point. I specifically said it would have to be a misreading of the definition. Also, "NOBODY" is obviously not true, or you would never have brought up the point in the first place.

Anyway, I'm over this topic.

 

[DrakoGhoul]

You seem to have completely missed the point. Obviously he's gonna save them, but five minutes earlier the mother was nonstop berating him and has been a bitch to him her whole life. There's a difference between not letting your family members get killed and instantly forgiving everything they've done, because... what?? There's no reason to do so. The correct response to the situation would be saving them and then telling the women pulling some Tartuffe level shit to piss off.

You're being way too irrational about this...

Like i said i main the Unforgiven route myself so i know full well how Nicole is. Hell you can check through this thread and see what I've said about her for updates now. She wasn't a bitch to him his whole life as she wasn't in his life for half of it. She didn't turn bitchy until after she was rejected repeatedly.

Some of you guys take this unforgiven thing a little too far. I did as well too but some of you are a whole another level. You're mother almost died... If your not mature enough to understand the weight of that and look at how regrettable hating her forever would've been then i don't know what to tell you.

You act like he was all of a sudden hugging and kissing her and telling her he loves her. None of that happened at all and he even still kept her at a certain distance. Him being willing to compromise with her is for the better of his character and the story after a event like that. If you feel like him being an irrational asshole is better after that then we just have different views.

I mean imagine the dialogue in your scenario for a second. Hey mom i saved you now get out of my face bitch, i still don't forgive you and hey, stay out of my life mkay? Hmph! Does that dialogue even remotely sound realistic in that scenario? Sounds like something a immature child would say.

Hell, we don't even know how this all is going to play out next update. For all we know, Nicole could F this up with her usual shenanigans. I'd tell you to wait until next update but at this point you're entitled to your opinions and views so I'll just keep it moving.