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What i said was "The Engrish is stronk within this one" which doesn't mean "the worst written" let's agree its not as bad as I originally remembered but it could still use a proof reading, there's Always room for improvement >;Dyou said it was one of the worst writed Engrish..... and that is not true, he may make some mistakes but his english is good.
Also for those of you who think it feels like an end? I don't know what the dev has planned BUT there are multiple issues still unresolved at this point within the story: are MC & Nicole going to hide forever ? How will they deal with each of the family finding out if/when they do? Here are some imaginary scenarios: How's Derek going to react (I feel he *Could* go all 'you saved my baby girl & Nicole doesn't like me anymore anyway, so they stay together in an open relationship & he's cool with mc banging Nicole while he does whoever he wants) is Ashely gonna be cool with MC / Nicole? We Know she knows the truth, again I can see her getting ok with it, maybe even join in at some point after further bonding/forgiveness by mc/N. Chloe ? She's always felt pretty chill about most stuff so even if it takes some convincing she could be cool with it eventually, which COULD ( depending on devs plans for chloe) lead into her saying something like "oh u mess with Mom AND Ashely AND Reedley who are all family so what is so bad about me that you wouldn't consider messing around with Me? Besides brother who better for me to trust that won't abuse or use me to introduce me to sexual expirences ?
How is each of the other girls going to react to mc & nicole humping, sure Jess would pry just say 'Jessica always knew you were a kinky little mother fucker but dam, thats Hawt' lol
Is Brad 100% put in his place? No chance of him attempting to get revenge? he could cause some trouble from inside prison if he rubbed his 2 brain cells together very vigorously =P
What about Wendy, if all the girls knew she could find out, she'd love to prove herself right about mc being nothing but a little perv, that in turn could lead to mc needing to seduce her to get her to go along with the incestuous harem >;D
Still TONS of story IF the dev has the drive to keep it going
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