VN Ren'Py Completed Secret Summer [v1.0 Epilogue] [SuperWriter]

[Scrichta]

aren't those "exactly" the same girls as in that other game? The one on the beach, what's it called?

I don't remember, Holliday Island or something, kid jumps into a plane to an island full of girls, where doctors monitor their needs and they play poker etc etc.

I'm pretty sure it's "exactly" the same models?

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

aren't those "exactly" the same girls as in that other game? The one on the beach, what's it called?

I don't remember, Holliday Island or something, kid jumps into a plane to an island full of girls, where doctors monitor their needs and they play poker etc etc.

I'm pretty sure it's "exactly" the same models?

I've never heard of the other game you're talking about, but I can promise you they're not the same. It took me hours and hours to get these models how I envisioned in my head. I worked hard as hell on them.

 

[botc76]

Okay, here's my two cents.

Crisp writing, good enough humour. Renders are okay, but something about the faces irritates me a bit. Is it the lighting or shadows? Could be.

I think the twins concept was more original, but then again it is harder to get into the game when there are several protagonists.
Just imagine if Mass Effect Andromeda had you switch between the Ryder twins instead of choosing one, that would be weird.

The story is of course nothing special any longer without the twins concept, but if your writing continues to stay on this level it is already better than about 75% of the other incest games.

I'm looking forward to how this one and your other game continues, you are for now a real win for this forum and the western visual novel porn scene.

Of course you need to prove yourself by providing regular updates of an acceptable size, but if you manage that, I'm sure it will pay out for you.

 

[botc76]

aren't those "exactly" the same girls as in that other game? The one on the beach, what's it called?

I don't remember, Holliday Island or something, kid jumps into a plane to an island full of girls, where doctors monitor their needs and they play poker etc etc.

I'm pretty sure it's "exactly" the same models?

Nope they aren't. not at all, besides Holiday Island has like two dozen girls.

 

[the66]

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[gigan]

SuperWriter i have a question.Did you forget the releationship question for Autumn? i could swear that this was in the first version where the twins was.Maybe i´m to tired and i embarrass me now .Btw a good start.I keep an eye of your game.My highlight was the mortal kombat choice text

 

[botc76]

So all this is is a kissing game nothing else?

what smary mean you must play tic tac toe too.

I notice a tendency in your posts, my illiterate friend. Could it be that you are nothing but a troll?

 

[Klaigh]

Girl has alien eyelids underneath. Trippy as hell.

 

[SolarGuy]

Dude, now we're talking with this update!

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Okay, here's my two cents.

Crisp writing, good enough humour. Renders are okay, but something about the faces irritates me a bit. Is it the lighting or shadows? Could be.

I think the twins concept was more original, but then again it is harder to get into the game when there are several protagonists.
Just imagine if Mass Effect Andromeda had you switch between the Ryder twins instead of choosing one, that would be weird.

The story is of course nothing special any longer without the twins concept, but if your writing continues to stay on this level it is already better than about 75% of the other incest games.

I'm looking forward to how this one and your other game continues, you are for now a real win for this forum and the western visual novel porn scene.

Of course you need to prove yourself by providing regular updates of an acceptable size, but if you manage that, I'm sure it will pay out for you.

Thanks a lot for the encouragement! Will not disappoint.

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Thank you! Will update soon.

SuperWriter i have a question.Did you forget the releationship question for Autumn? i could swear that this was in the first version where the twins was.Maybe i´m to tired and i embarrass me now .Btw a good start.I keep an eye of your game.My highlight was the mortal kombat choice text

There was no need to ask what your relationship to Autumn is because it will be the same as the other girls. And i'm glad you enjoyed the Mortal Kombat line, haha.

Dude, now we're talking with this update!

Glad you enjoyed! Much more to come

 

[Scrichta]

I've never heard of the other game you're talking about, but I can promise you they're not the same. It took me hours and hours to get these models how I envisioned in my head. I worked hard as hell on them.

ok, I believe you.

I used to tell my little brothers when we were kids and something really unlikely happened : "the chances of something unlikely happening at one point or another a very likely"



oh, and here's the two banners so you get a quick view :

 

[Madbadbutajoytoknow]

I think this could have work with two MCs. Switching between the two or one update we follow one twin and the next the other. Shame I liked the idea. I might have to steal it (joking btw)

 

[nobrumski]

Since you were receptive to some of my past suggestions, I figured I would throw some out there with regards to the revamped Secret Summer.

One issue I ran across is the game assumes the two younger females are the same relationship, but it doesn't tell you that when entering the relationships. The younger one asks relationship and the older asks your relationship. If you put them as two different things, the older sister at breakfast calls you the relationship you entered, but "You're welcome." Just having your older BLANK look at you with loving eyes... The blank is whatever you entered for the younger girl. In my case I did two separate things so the term was wrong. I would either tweak the wording at the relationship entry point or see if there is away to pull in the correct term based off what you enter for what your relationship is with the oldest.

There are a few things I would tweak story wise. I know you wanted to reuse what you could, but some of it doesn't seem to work now. For example, I didn't have the sense the relationship with the girls would be like you have been in close contact with them. You mention you are with Norah, but at the age and depending on when the split happen it would make sense if you drifted apart from the two younger girls. It might be worth adding some info about the girls in the conversation with Norah to make it feel like you talk to them all the time. Also it feels like the morning is the first day you are there and surprising them, but you also mention seeing them fight 5 times since you got there. It makes the pacing feel a bit rushed. The same goes for crushing on the older of the younger girls. It just feels like it went from 0 to 100 with no time for us to enjoy and get to know the characters. Even the conversation in the woods feels out of place since it doesn't feel like you are close coming into this.

If anything this almost feels like a second act which I didn't find in the first version. The first act would have been introducing us to them over the phone and video chat while dealing with the oldest male and the company. Then the second act would be going to see them once you are familiar. Then the third act of course is how it all plays out. With the twins it made sense why you were dumped in the deep end.

I will say honestly this new story doesn't hook me nearly as much as the freaky Friday/twinswap. It was fun and different. I get it people were somehow confused by it, but this feels very similar to what else is out there. It will be interesting to see how others feel who felt confused by the first version. Some seem to like this one better already so maybe it is just me. I do hope someone takes the freaky Friday idea and runs with it.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Since you were receptive to some of my past suggestions, I figured I would throw some out there with regards to the revamped Secret Summer.

One issue I ran across is the game assumes the two younger females are the same relationship, but it doesn't tell you that when entering the relationships. The younger one asks relationship and the older asks your relationship. If you put them as two different things, the older sister at breakfast calls you the relationship you entered, but "You're welcome." Just having your older BLANK look at you with loving eyes... The blank is whatever you entered for the younger girl. In my case I did two separate things so the term was wrong. I would either tweak the wording at the relationship entry point or see if there is away to pull in the correct term based off what you enter for what your relationship is with the oldest.

You're supposed to put sister for the younger girl and BROTHER for the older gitl.

The MC is her ??? BROTHER.

She is the MC's ??? SISTER.

But I'll think of a clearer way to help people out in the future. Thanks again for your suggestions

 

[nobrumski]

You're supposed to put sister for the younger girl and BROTHER for the older gitl.

The MC is her ??? BROTHER.

She is the MC's ??? SISTER.

But I'll think of a clearer way to help people out in the future. Thanks again for your suggestions

I accidentally hit enter as I was originally writing that post so I edited and finished my post after your quote.

I realize that was your intention, but for fun I tried something different since it didn't mention the two girls were related.

I did uncle for eldest male, cousin for youngest, sister for the 23 year old so MC is her brother, and aunt as Norah. Bimbo was bimbo. The MC is the son of the twin that went missing, , and was raised by the aunt and uncle before they split. The sister blamed the uncle as written so went with the aunt. The MC stayed with the uncle to run the business. Still works story wise, but it referred to everyone as cousin.

 

[Johnny6]

SuperWriter
Hey can you change Nora's age little bit. She's 36 and oldest daughter is 23 so she got her at age 13 and that most likely means she got pregnant at age 12. What made me think was the “landlord” also a child or a pedophile. If he was a kid back then, then I find it hard to believe that now he run a successful company. When the youngest daughter is 19 that means they got 4 children before they turn 18. In that case I think he has to drop out school to work mcdonalds or something to support his family, there is no time to study and build a company. And if he was not a minor then, he should be in jail.
So if you could make Norah 42 or something that would be much better, unless you have a story behind that she is 36.

 

[Deleted member 1268799]

While I enjoy the premise of the game it would be way better game without the second dipstick...

 

[bstr2k2]

2 of the download links are dead and Mega has over quota gain (FUCKTHISSHIT!!!)

 

[Deleted member 1304718]

One MC, well nice.
Very shortly to changes nice work
And also I like twins system but ok some people not accepted,
No matter twins or one mc, they/he were going to have intercourse with all girls.
Looking forward nxt update.

 

[Pragathi]

Android version please...