VN Ren'Py Completed Secret Summer [v1.0 Epilogue] [SuperWriter]

[ArturiousDesign]

Can you try the new version and tell me what you think after?

Fine, but the twin aspect is why I liked your game. when was the last time there was a "Parent Trap" style game? I really liked that there were twin protags. You had a sense of keeping your secret and identity hidden, and a fear of getting caught. The whole swap plan depended on it and welp, that's gone. I also liked how both boys had their own set of girls and had a previous relationship with their side, while the other twin had to conform to this.

 

[leon02457]

Thank you to everyone who gave this game a try. I have now updated the story so that there is only ONE MC and have altered the initial gameplay, adding 30 new renders, and I believe the story is even stronger now! Please give the new version a try and tell me what you think.

I want and only think your great creation milfs please add much more scenes of them

 

[X0R]

Well the twins premises was somewhat unique, but this change isnt that bad.
Hope there will be some unique surprises in the coming updates

Cheers

 

[Riitesh]

The twin thing was unique for sure. But i personally didn't liked that idea cause even if they look alike they had different personalities it felt like my step-mom's son is living with my mom.
This game is still unique though cause i don't think i have seen any game with both mom and step-mom together
Will be nice to see some mom - stepmom rivalry

Only thing that bothered me was Step-mom's boob. It kinda look ugly

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Fine, but the twin aspect is why I liked your game. when was the last time there was a "Parent Trap" style game? I really liked that there were twin protags. You had a sense of keeping your secret and identity hidden, and a fear of getting caught. The whole swap plan depended on it and welp, that's gone. I also liked how both boys had their own set of girls and had a previous relationship with their side, while the other twin had to conform to this.

I understand, but too many people felt disconnected from the story. There are still unique aspects to this game and a lot of secretnss, so hopefully that'll be enough to keep you interested

 

[Sera Zios]

1.a -- Have removed there being twins, so there is only one MC, and changed dialogue to reflect that.

Too bad. I actually liked the idea of an adult parent trap (sister trap) VN. The only complaint I had was that you had to choose which to play.

 

[L3z1l3]

You had a sense of keeping your secret and identity hidden, and a fear of getting caught.

Well, while that might have brought some funny situations but it's not really such a terrible secret you have to keep, so it wouldn't be a source of a lot of suspense for me.
On the other hand, I wouldn't mind a game where you (MC) would know that the women are your family members but they wouldn't. MC would want to keep it secret from them to be able to find out something about the past. Therefore he would slowly befriend the family members, without letting them know. And they might fall for him since they don't know he is their relative, which is more believable than the usual.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

So all this is is a kissing game nothing else?

 

[voodeuxthatyoudo]

So all this is is a kissing game nothing else?

Obviously not and being smary doesn't do yourself any favors. If you're unsure what the developmental phase of any project entails I'd suggest just having a wee bit of patience and getting ready for a long ride.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Avery: "Actually, I'm doing the opposite of plotting."
Zoe: "Which is?"
Avery: "Um, not plotting?"

When your brain short-circuits in front of a lovely lady.

 

[sinisterfapfap]

SuperWriter

Add some friends characters will put the MC on having a bad situation causing there switch almost found out.

or

Situation one of the MC has a Problem from a Bully Friend and notice the MC is different and the bully will use to f*ck one of his Sisters or He can say No but the Bully will ask you more bad situation decision after choosing the No Opt.

or

Other MC will go other place to live, communication has fcked up when it happens..

Me:
Just Thinking that atm hehehe...

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Avery: "Actually, I'm doing the opposite of plotting."
Zoe: "Which is?"
Avery: "Um, not plotting?"

When your brain short circuits in front of a lovely lady.

Hahaha, exactly

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Obviously not and being smary doesn't do yourself any favors. If you're unsure what the developmental phase of any project entails I'd suggest just having a wee bit of patience and getting ready for a long ride.

There will be plenty of boning, guys! But obviously not right out of the gate :]

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Obviously not and being smary doesn't do yourself any favors. If you're unsure what the developmental phase of any project entails I'd suggest just having a wee bit of patience and getting ready for a long ride.

what smary mean you must play tic tac toe too.

 

[BobJenkins]

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[SkinnGames]

I played one of the protag's so far and very much enjoyed the concept you were developing. But from the developers point of view I can certainly see what a possible mindfuck this would have caused you trying to keep both sides straight. Seems like you will have to do a total rewrite to restart this! I will be watching this with great interest! Thank you so much!

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

I played one of the protag's so far and very much enjoyed the concept you were developing. But from the developers point of view I can certainly see what a possible mindfuck this would have caused you trying to keep both sides straight. Seems like you will have to do a total rewrite to restart this! I will be watching this with great interest! Thank you so much!

I've already updated the game with the rewrite. Please play again !

 

[rKnight]

SuperWriter those erotic e-novels you wrote look interesting, I hope you don't get stuck at this project and at some point you can turn some of those novels into VNs, you should take advantage of an already-made consistent plot.

I'm thinking of turning these into complete short story VNs.

Yep! better than a long-term game, start a short erotic stories best-seller collection.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

SuperWriter those erotic e-novels you wrote look interesting, I hope you don't stop at this project and at some point you can turn some of those novels into VN, you shoud take the advantage of an already-made consistent plot, perhaps, depending on its success they can be taken to the big screen, and this forum is plenty of almost-free porn actors to help this go along.

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That's so funny you actually said that. I'm thinking of turning these into complete short story VNs? Like this post if you guys want to see that

 

[Seburu]

I've already updated the game with the rewrite. Please play again !

I have to say that i am most certainly interested, but are you gong to keep the twin scenario or keep them as rivals?