VN Ren'Py Seducing the Devil [v0.12b] [DeafPerv]

[DeafPerv]

This game is all over the place...
It needs a writer, and some focus... because even if there is potential in the game, you can't follow shit.

The flashforward was badly done, you never establish a status quo or give us some info...
Just hang on there and keep going forward... but that just lead us to more confussion.
Suddenly your Mom leaves, even when we DON'T KNOW HER, don't know anything about her relationship with her husband, her son, her sister...
And then, outta nowhere... the female best friend is in YOUR bathroom, in YOUR house... freaking out because you were showering.
WTF?

If that wasn't enough... another family friend, but this time with incest...
I don't know any of you, fellas... but if I see a friend fucking my mother, I would fucking destroy him.
But here is like "yeah, let's get this orgy started!"...

Again, good renders, the dialogue isn't awful... but the story makes no sense, at all.

The game itself is meant to be confusing initially.
If I wanted to give all the answers right away then there was no need of me to make the Current time scene.
I could have simply introduced everyone and then carry on from there.

Yes we don't know anyone but we will know them. Is it that difficult to understand?
Selina didn't freak out because he was taking a shower. She freaked out because she saw the mc naked. Like anybody would duh!

Where did you find an orgy scene?
Instead of saying "yeah, let's get this orgy started!" you should be asking how come Riley/Kylie gave up so easily to their own brother/son. All that happened in those scenes were forced into the characters. Shouldn't you be asking why they were forced and why there were no resistance? Why Jason didn't even mind seeing his sister/mother get fucked by his friend?
Can't we try to think outside the box?

I'm the one writing the whole script and building up the story. I know what I'm doing.
So saying I can't follow shit is just rude and sheer showcase of ignorance.

If you don't like it then there are so many vanilla games ready for you on this site

 

[Viatovic]

The game itself is meant to be confusing initially.
If I wanted to give all the answers right away then there was no need of me to make the Current time scene.
I could have simply introduced everyone and then carry on from there.

Yes we don't know anyone but we will know them. Is it that difficult to understand?
Selina didn't freak out because he was taking a shower. She freaked out because she saw the mc naked. Like anybody would duh!

Where did you find an orgy scene?
Instead of saying "yeah, let's get this orgy started!" you should be asking how come Riley/Kiley gave up so easily to their own brother/son. All that happened in those scenes were forced into the characters. Shouldn't you be asking why they were forced and why there were no resistance? Why Jason didn't even mind seeing his sister/mother get fucked by his friend?
Can't we try to think outside the box?

I'm the one writing the whole script and building up the story. I know what I'm doing.
So saying I can't follow shit is just rude and sheer showcase of ignorance.

If you don't like it then there are so many vanilla games ready for you on this site

Dude, you are not Damon Lindelof or Jonathan Nolan, so gimme a break with this confusing non-sense.
You don't have any idea of how to lay out a mystery.

You need to give us something concrete before asking questions...
Putting it simple, you have done two versions of this game and I don't give a fuck about any of the characters.
We don't know ANYTHING.
There is a lot of gratuitous sex... none of it seems to be earned.
There is zero development in any of the relationships, but let's get real quick to the sex, because that seems to be the only thing in this game that matters.

Now... let's get specific.
You are telling me that YOU go into other people houses unannunced, go into their bathrooms without knocking... and then freak out/chew them out because they had the audacity of using the shower?

The whole Mom's friend scene is just pure hot garbage.
We know nothing about any of them, their relationships, the status quo in their lifes...
We lack so much info that I can't say if they are acting coerced or manipulated by whatever supernatural bullshit you are trying to sell us.
And if I have to wait until you clear out those details after the release, that means that your script sucks hard.

But the worst thing in your whole message is your hubris.
There is zero chance that you are wrong, there is not a single point that could be validated...
You are the Godard of porn games and it's all my fault because I'm not intelligent enough to follow your brilliant ideas.

There is no need, I know where the door is...
I just pity you and the people that decides to waste their hard earned money in this abomination.

 

[Bagger288]

Yes we don't know anyone but we will know them. Is it that difficult to understand?

Yes, it's. There is some exposition in the Dad/Veronica scene, but other than that, we constantly have to make choices before finding out who the people involved are, and then what we do learn is shrouded in implausibility.
I understand that you're trying to keep the main character in the dark, but the player must first grasp the normal before they can wonder about the abnormal.

Having said that, I don't think you should be adapting your game to my specifications. There are some things I like about it, but more things that I don't - so instead listen to the people who like most of it. That way you can at least establish consistency.

 

[Catwashere]

I'm gonna be fair and as nice as i can be about the game.
The game so far is okay but i can see what some people are saying about the game and i also get what the creator is saying and doing.
All i can really say though is people need to chill out and wait for maybe two more updates before you start bitching about the game it is hard to judge something that has just been started. I understand that the story is lacking right now some details but it may be on purpose and the characters may have a plot going on like maybe the mom is in on some plot for the MC.
If you want to leave feedback you don't come on here acting like an asshole to the creator and you should understand not all games are written the same way and they should not be that would get boring so again give the creator time to create the game now if it still has some issues after another 2 or 3 updates than i'll say the same thing the story is wack but for now i'm still interested in what is going on.
This goes for others on this site that leave reviews after only one update saying the game sucks sometimes they do really suck but other times i have seen it was not justified.

 

[User_10739]

Chill out, since when has cohesiveness been a prerequisite in porn?
Me, I'm quite happy that they peel like bananas...

@supermanz95 I actually saw that in the theatre... (Yeah, I'm fucking old...)

 

[DeafPerv]

I'm all up for fair and constructive criticism.
I have admitted that this game is still very confusing and I have given my reasons behind it.

I have made the initial release so that people can at least expect that there will be instances when things will be overly sexualized or manipulative.
Nobody said a thing when Veronica got turned on by mc's boner poking her back or him touching her breasts. Even then those scenes were so unrealistic. And then the devil appeared. That should have made things clear that the devil can manipulate you and the people around you.

But in 0.2 the Riley/Kylie scenes seemed to have gone completely over the head. Whereas they are totally similar with the veronica scenes. Only difference being you don't see the devil this time.

And I'll explain why there was no devil or how did they get manipulated in the next update.

Why do you want me to give away everything in 0.2?
Everyone will be properly intorduced when the time comes.
Let me do my thing in my own way. Call me out when I fail to deliver things I've promised.


Instead here's this guy calling me names, saying I'm not this, I'm not that. I don't have any idea on how to lay out a mystery. Calling my game garbage and then suggesting that my patrons are wasting their money on abomination.

How pathetic one has to be to abuse a dev who you know nothing about and then go on a rant despite being a pirate?
I'm not going to change my story regardless of you like it or not. No one's forcing you to play this game.
My patrons and the people here are supporting me because they believe in me. That's more than enough.
I'm not one to go by your book and let things play out in your way.
You aren't the one spending money and time on this.

Either give feedbacks in a proper manner or don't even bother with your shit talks

 

[DeafPerv]

I'm gonna be fair and as nice as i can be about the game.
The game so far is okay but i can see what some people are saying about the game and i also get what the creator is saying and doing.
All i can really say though is people need to chill out and wait for maybe two more updates before you start bitching about the game it is hard to judge something that has just been started. I understand that the story is lacking right now some details but it may be on purpose and the characters may have a plot going on like maybe the mom is in on some plot for the MC.
If you want to leave feedback you don't come on here acting like an asshole to the creator and you should understand not all games are written the same way and they should not be that would get boring so again give the creator time to create the game now if it still has some issues after another 2 or 3 updates than i'll say the same thing the story is wack but for now i'm still interested in what is going on.
This goes for others on this site that leave reviews after only one update saying the game sucks sometimes they do really suck but other times i have seen it was not justified.

Absolutely spot on.
Thank you so much for watching my back.
Much love

 

[UncleVT]

@DeafPerv just ignore the narrow minds who don't know how to express themselves properly when something don't like and need to attack the dev. Please continue with your ideas. People like that are unfortunately very common, they're not able to do something constructive even something as simple as a criticism.

Keep your good work.

 

[Carcalla]

@DeafPerv just ignore the narrow minds who don't know how to express themselves properly when something don't like and need to attack the dev. Please continue with your ideas. People like that are unfortunately very common, they're not able to do something constructive even something as simple as a criticism.

Keep your good work.

Brother!.. you are right... Better said can't be....

 

[DeafPerv]

Milf look be damned, mom can be 20 for all i care and mc being adopted while she was just a toddler, bring those titties closer, mom!

Is this close enough? :coldsweat:

 

[DeafPerv]

@DeafPerv just ignore the narrow minds who don't know how to express themselves properly when something don't like and need to attack the dev. Please continue with your ideas. People like that are unfortunately very common, they're not able to do something constructive even something as simple as a criticism.

Keep your good work.

Brother!.. you are right... Better said can't be....

Thank you guys

 

[supermanz95]

@DeafPerv Hey, just curious, could you have made the intro of the story work with out the flash-forward ? Not that it really matters now, just think it would have eased the audience into the plot more smoothly. Also how much plot content will there be in the upcoming update regarding mom, devil and mysteries of the universe?

 

[Laughing_Maniacally]

Is there a apk?

 

[Ennoch]

Is this close enough? :coldsweat:

My dear Dark Gods!:coldsweat: I always knew i was weak but she is just unfair!:closedtongue: Those aren't titties there! They are strategic weapons! Unleashed! Upon the unsuspecting boobie lovers like me x'D

 

[DeafPerv]

@DeafPerv Hey, just curious, could you have made the intro of the story work with out the flash-forward ? Not that it really matters now, just think it would have eased the audience into the plot more smoothly. Also how much plot content will there be in the upcoming update regarding mom, devil and mysteries of the universe?

Yes I definitely could have if I wanted. But then this release would have been different than what it is now. The flash-forward scene has 4 different endings. And it's basically deciding the path you are going to take.
The flashback is just there to give you context on what happened, why it happened things like that.
After few updates we will be back on one of the paths you have chosen on the flash-forward stage to move on with the story. So you can expect multiple jumps in time because there is a gap of 6 months.
The plot isn't about what happened in the past. It's what's going to happen with you and your girlfriend.

The next update will be mostly about mom and devil. Also one of the characters will get more attention. My patrons will decide the character.

I can't yet tell how big of an update it's going to be. It depends on how much time I get.
Last month I didn't get to work as much as I wanted. I had to cut the update short.

 

[DeafPerv]

Is there a apk?

Sorry there's none

 

[DeafPerv]

My dear Dark Gods!:coldsweat: I always knew i was weak but she is just unfair!:closedtongue: Those aren't titties there! They are strategic weapons! Unleashed! Upon the unsuspecting boobie lovers like me x'D

You can finally die in peace x'D

 

[jaydem]

@DeafPerv
I just have a quick question for you Brother. Will we get to decide, if we go on trip to the GF? or stay with family?
Or is it set that you will have to go?
I hope that Mom and Sis will convince you to stay (wink, wink). Will the devil, in the present kill your best friend, to expand your harem? Nothing says comfort sex, like mourning a lost relative.
Will we be able to, at some point, knock the devil up?? Might as well use all your tools at your disposal now, even though she does bad things, it's good thing to have her basically on your side...….Lol!!

I'm loving this game so far, even if at this point, it's little confusing to follow. I am however getting a basic jist, which has me wanting more....Lol!!
Keep up the good work Brother.....and hurry up with the next update...Lol!!...just kidding, take your time and enjoy what you do..…………………...Peace!!

 

[Catwashere]

@DeafPerv
I just have a quick question for you Brother. Will we get to decide, if we go on trip to the GF? or stay with family?
Or is it set that you will have to go?
I hope that Mom and Sis will convince you to stay (wink, wink). Will the devil, in the present kill your best friend, to expand your harem? Nothing says comfort sex, like mourning a lost relative.
Will we be able to, at some point, knock the devil up?? Might as well use all your tools at your disposal now, even though she does bad things, it's good thing to have her basically on your side...….Lol!!

I'm loving this game so far, even if at this point, it's little confusing to follow. I am however getting a basic jist, which has me wanting more....Lol!!
Keep up the good work Brother.....and hurry up with the next update...Lol!!...just kidding, take your time and enjoy what you do..…………………...Peace!!

The best Friend needs to be forced out like you said we need the harem for ourselves.

 

[jaydem]

The best Friend needs to be forced out like you said we need the harem for ourselves.

I agree, I also think if we are forced to leave, then have an ultimate fuck fest. Just the MC and the four women.
With enough help from the devil, to completely enrapture them to you. After you leave, they can't stand it, and all move to where you are.
Leaving your best friend to fend for himself there. Where one day, while he's experimenting with gay sex, he doesn't notice a gas leak and the blows to hell. This in turn powers the devil up more, and turn her more favorable to you.

Fuck! That's pretty evil....Lol!!………...I like it.
I'm just going by the tag saying harem, and like to help the scenario along....Lol!!…………….Peace!!