VN Ren'Py Abandoned Sensei [v0.0.4.1] [GelonG]

[IntonerZero]

I AM THE STORM THAT IS APPROACHING

 

[harsha_26]

android version?

 

[Hornyowl]

What do you mean "...she traditionally began to introduce herself..."?

Pleeeease learn English properly. I could download free porn videos if I want to see people fucking. Some of them even have scripts and a story. But why should I play a game that says it's in English but can't even get simple grammar correct. And even more, why should I go to Patreon and support you if you can't get that right. I can walk out of my house and give charity if I want.

Sorry if this seems harsh, F95 has been flooded with games with a lot of potential but horrible writing...and developers hiding behind "English is not my native language."

 

[Boba Fett]

What do you mean "...she traditionally began to introduce herself..."?

Pleeeease learn English properly. I could download free porn videos if I want to see people fucking. Some of them even have scripts and a story. But why should I play a game that says it's in English but can't even get simple grammar correct. And even more, why should I go to Patreon and support you if you can't get that right. I can walk out of my house and give charity if I want.

Sorry if this seems harsh, F95 has been flooded with games with a lot of potential but horrible writing...and developers hiding behind "English is not my native language."

I sometimes watch Graham Norton. When the British and the Americans are visiting him, they sometimes do not understand each other. Do they know bad English? I do not think so. With the fall of the Tower of Babel, people began to speak in different languages. English-speaking people are as lucky as anyone. The whole world speaks English. But does everyone have to speak it perfectly? No.
Make screenshots and write to the author if you want to help him with this. Or do not write, but go out and serve the homeless man who will drink this money. Does someone make you?

 

[Strbrvsky]

I sometimes watch Graham Norton. When the British and the Americans are visiting him, they sometimes do not understand each other. Do they know bad English? I do not think so. With the fall of the Tower of Babel, people began to speak in different languages. English-speaking people are as lucky as anyone. The whole world speaks English. But does everyone have to speak it perfectly? No.
Make screenshots and write to the author if you want to help him with this. Or do not write, but go out and serve the homeless man who will drink this money. Does someone make you?

why you being so defensive about this game? he did made a point about "learn proper english" since the whole point of making the "story" based game are about the way story are being told, if it was grammatically error or simply too shallow then the immersion will not be there. of course if it was only for sex then brazzer action film might be a good reference.
anyway, in my opinion if the dev ask for donor or patreon then why wouldn't also hire proofreader or editor with that money!?

as much as I like about this game, it has it flaw and deserve some criticism.

 

[Dyson2020]

Well I'll say it was a lot better than I thought it would be. This is definitely a fantasy type game so I just sat back without nit picking it to bad. I like it so far keep up the good work.

 

[Ghostload]

Spoiler: post nut vergil be like

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[gtz-god]

Spoiler: who i think the red dude is

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[mecha_froggy]

Sorry if this seems harsh, F95 has been flooded with games with a lot of potential but horrible writing...and developers hiding behind "English is not my native language."

Amen, brother.

Or do not write, but go out and serve the homeless man who will drink this money. Does someone make you?

... and here's another perfect example of that.



I swear, sometimes I feel like offering editorial services to F95, but I know that the devs here would sooner give up their own hands than sacrifice one penny of that sweet, sweet American cash.

 

[KryzstofGryc]

is this another form of P O W E R?

 

[alfakynvinr]

promising!

 

[caxhub]

Download android v0.0.1 APK

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P/s: Request Link Android Game at my

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[Avaron1974]

Make screenshots and write to the author if you want to help him with this. Or do not write, but go out and serve the homeless man who will drink this money. Does someone make you?

I hope that made sense in your head because it made none in text.

 

[share_or_fail]

Reading the uber-must-have-tons-of-machismo plot design, I'd say: Jeezaaaz, why don't you just get your dick out and measure... but it's a porn game. So yeah, that's already going to happen.

 

[KenneX]

Walls of text with bad English and the writing is even worse. Pass.

 

[Paapi]

Good start.
I hope lesbianism .... is avoidable

 

[ultra543]

it would be nice if we can change the name

 

[Haaraka]

So you play as Vergil conceiving Nero?

 

[Pixscells]

Well ... first time seeing Virgil in a porn game

 

[GelonG]

Amen, brother.




... and here's another perfect example of that.



I swear, sometimes I feel like offering editorial services to F95, but I know that the devs here would sooner give up their own hands than sacrifice one penny of that sweet, sweet American cash.

That's the trouble. How do I know how much text correction is correct?) I am currently being helped with text adjustments, so I hope that the next update will be at a good level of the language.
And about a penny, a cent, or something else... I'm not greedy. If more people want to support me, then I'll be happy paying for the adjustment, but now, alas, this is not possible.