- Jul 24, 2017
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Glad to see I wasn't the only one who thought the game was going to be about the Anime.
With the transitions that he already said he would be fixing and cleaning up the grammar this could be a really solid game.
- May 27, 2017
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This looks stunning, the UI, the renders and all that. There is clearly a lot of work going into this so I will give my honest opinion, unfiltered.
There is too much dialog and it feels excruciating during some of the conversations. Particularly Noora & Alia, MC and Lisa, then MC and Karina. Some of it is obviously translation issues, which has been stated to being fixed.
The MC is very strange. He first talks about how clearly depressed he is and the problems he has interacting with people. He then helps Lisa (at least with my choice) and starts white knighting so hard it was cringy (which at that point makes a certain sense). Then at the cafe he's at least befriending if not just picking up on Karina then banging Lexi in the back room. It doesn't make much sense to me. Granted some of this may come out in another update, but this is based on what I have seen.
I wish the game the best of luck and look forward to checking it out during further updates. Cheers!
There is too much dialog and it feels excruciating during some of the conversations. Particularly Noora & Alia, MC and Lisa, then MC and Karina. Some of it is obviously translation issues, which has been stated to being fixed.
The MC is very strange. He first talks about how clearly depressed he is and the problems he has interacting with people. He then helps Lisa (at least with my choice) and starts white knighting so hard it was cringy (which at that point makes a certain sense). Then at the cafe he's at least befriending if not just picking up on Karina then banging Lexi in the back room. It doesn't make much sense to me. Granted some of this may come out in another update, but this is based on what I have seen.
I wish the game the best of luck and look forward to checking it out during further updates. Cheers!
- Sep 6, 2019
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Sounds Cool! I am Willing to Try it!
BUT,... IF I HAVE to Wait FOREVER For New Updates,... I Will Abandon it.
I am just saying...
(sick & tired of getting Interested in a Game; then the Dev's take 4-6 mos. or longer for a Update)
Let's Face it,... There Are NOT That Many GOOD Games Out here to keep Our Interests Peaked!
- Aug 5, 2017
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- May 29, 2018
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Tbh that is pretty suspect. Hope it's not another darthsmut situation lol
I'm just happy it's not based off that shitty softcore hentai anime. All those thick demons but light bars and smoke covering half the screen.
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- Aug 24, 2016
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haven't tried it yet, gonna download it tomorrow but, am i the only one who thinks this looks like 2 models cut at the waist and stitched together in a really weird angle?
not criticizing the game per se, but that pose looks really inhuman, her torso is too straight and at a very different angle than her lower body, and im only saying this because the other sample images look great, its like this one doesnt match.
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not criticizing the game per se, but that pose looks really inhuman, her torso is too straight and at a very different angle than her lower body, and im only saying this because the other sample images look great, its like this one doesnt match.
- Oct 8, 2018
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Do you think there will be a chubby gluttony hoe? I would prefer that if there is, she isnt super obese
- Jun 24, 2019
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Damn! Another game where you can't change the Mc's name, I don't know why but that really annoys me.
- Jun 24, 2019
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Hey RedWhite, This bugs the shit out of me lol. At the coffee shop when speaking to male customer's, You call them SIR. When speaking to a Female customer's you call them MAM lol So its like this Male/MC = Sir Female/U. Woman/Lexi = Mam just sayin Everyone else pretty much pointed out what needed fixed so good job on your first release.
Everyone else pretty much pointed out what needed fixed so good job on your first release.
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- Aug 10, 2019
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- Jan 13, 2018
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A nice start for the game, could need a bit of proofreading but other than that, cant wait for next update
- May 11, 2017
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This game has some very excellent qualities, but unfortunately, it also has some glaringly awful qualities.
The good: The initial presentation is great. The renders are better than many games. The little things like the characters blinking really added to the ambiance. I also enjoyed how each character got their own little introduction with their name flashed on the screen when we first see them. As of yet, the code seems to have no bug in it. So it's a game presented very nicely, with good graphics, and it's properly coded. What could possibly be bad about it with all of these good things I have to say about it?
The bad: The writing... The Engrish is very strong in this game. I can forgive a bit of Engrish if it's otherwise written well. Is it otherwise written well? No... not at all. The main protagonist character is far too much of a white knight putting the pussy up on a pedestal... At the same time right out of the gates he is whiny and putting other guys down. Not only is he this level of cringe but he is inconsistent in his character completely. He completely objectifies women at every moment and treats other guys like they are all "bad guys". For instance, he has a crush on a girl. He has been in her class for FOUR YEARS... FOUR LONG YEARS HE HAS HAD A CRUSH ON THIS GIRL. Yet he never walked up and started a conversation with her... Not once in four years. When he talks to her it's like she doesn't even know his name and barely recognizes him. Well, this girl just so happens to be dating another guy for four years at the same time. So maybe he respected that, but whatever. Anyways this girl he has been crushing on for four years that has been dating this other guy for FOUR YEARS... It's the last day of high school. She dumps this guy she was dating from the start of high school on the last day of high school... Her reason for dumping him? "You got a small dick. You are rude sometimes, your father has money, and I want a real man, besides you never hold my hand so fuck off I hate you now." Wow... that is fucking harsh... fucking brutal a terrible way of dumping someone right in the middle of a crowded hallway in front of everyone... So the guy she just dumped is like ."You know what. You are a bitch." Oh shit here it comes... oh shit... oh no... Here comes our protagonist... Our protagonist responds in a way as if this guy was attempted to rape her... Our character is now like WHAT!? did he just call her a bitch how dare he! He should be down on the floor licking her boots! He grabs the guy by the shirt while he is minding his own damn business talking to his girlfriend... So after getting grabbed by the shirt and pushed by our protagonist this guy with tears in his eyes after having his heart just ripped out... He is like fuck it why not and takes a single swing on our protagonist... And our protagonist proceeds to dodge the punch and beat his ass... And now the girl is in love with our protagonist... Also he still don't man up and ask her out... Fucker waits for her to ask him out like a little bitch. So our protagonist is done with that shit and wanders around... Comes across another chick proceeds to talk shit about the dude who he beat up and gets her to ask him out too! what the fuck guy? then goes to some coffee shop or whatever and finds a lottery ticket... Guess what it's not in the game yet, but I can tell you with 100% certainty it's going to be a winning lottery ticket or else why put a lottery ticket in the story like that... Anyways at the coffee shop we run into some blue-haired chick and she drag the protagonist into the back room and pulls his pants down... TLDR the writing sucks
The good: The initial presentation is great. The renders are better than many games. The little things like the characters blinking really added to the ambiance. I also enjoyed how each character got their own little introduction with their name flashed on the screen when we first see them. As of yet, the code seems to have no bug in it. So it's a game presented very nicely, with good graphics, and it's properly coded. What could possibly be bad about it with all of these good things I have to say about it?
The bad: The writing... The Engrish is very strong in this game. I can forgive a bit of Engrish if it's otherwise written well. Is it otherwise written well? No... not at all. The main protagonist character is far too much of a white knight putting the pussy up on a pedestal... At the same time right out of the gates he is whiny and putting other guys down. Not only is he this level of cringe but he is inconsistent in his character completely. He completely objectifies women at every moment and treats other guys like they are all "bad guys". For instance, he has a crush on a girl. He has been in her class for FOUR YEARS... FOUR LONG YEARS HE HAS HAD A CRUSH ON THIS GIRL. Yet he never walked up and started a conversation with her... Not once in four years. When he talks to her it's like she doesn't even know his name and barely recognizes him. Well, this girl just so happens to be dating another guy for four years at the same time. So maybe he respected that, but whatever. Anyways this girl he has been crushing on for four years that has been dating this other guy for FOUR YEARS... It's the last day of high school. She dumps this guy she was dating from the start of high school on the last day of high school... Her reason for dumping him? "You got a small dick. You are rude sometimes, your father has money, and I want a real man, besides you never hold my hand so fuck off I hate you now." Wow... that is fucking harsh... fucking brutal a terrible way of dumping someone right in the middle of a crowded hallway in front of everyone... So the guy she just dumped is like ."You know what. You are a bitch." Oh shit here it comes... oh shit... oh no... Here comes our protagonist... Our protagonist responds in a way as if this guy was attempted to rape her... Our character is now like WHAT!? did he just call her a bitch how dare he! He should be down on the floor licking her boots! He grabs the guy by the shirt while he is minding his own damn business talking to his girlfriend... So after getting grabbed by the shirt and pushed by our protagonist this guy with tears in his eyes after having his heart just ripped out... He is like fuck it why not and takes a single swing on our protagonist... And our protagonist proceeds to dodge the punch and beat his ass... And now the girl is in love with our protagonist... Also he still don't man up and ask her out... Fucker waits for her to ask him out like a little bitch. So our protagonist is done with that shit and wanders around... Comes across another chick proceeds to talk shit about the dude who he beat up and gets her to ask him out too! what the fuck guy? then goes to some coffee shop or whatever and finds a lottery ticket... Guess what it's not in the game yet, but I can tell you with 100% certainty it's going to be a winning lottery ticket or else why put a lottery ticket in the story like that... Anyways at the coffee shop we run into some blue-haired chick and she drag the protagonist into the back room and pulls his pants down... TLDR the writing sucks
- Aug 5, 2018
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A really beautiful game so far, I wish that I could support you and The Seven Deadly Sins.
But I have to take a rain check on this one, because of one sin in your game, NTR, and i really hate NTR
Wish you the best of luck, dev
But I have to take a rain check on this one, because of one sin in your game, NTR, and i really hate NTR
Wish you the best of luck, dev
- May 8, 2018
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game looks really good, but for now that's all...
english is not that good and the writing is not great either, sorry...
english is not that good and the writing is not great either, sorry...