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The pluperfect "had danced" would make sense if the rest of the narration was in a past tense (as it denotes something an action occurring before something else in the past), but here the main clause is in the present tense. But it's a very minor quibble, so do what you feel best.
Alright, you two convinced me. It's not like it's a hill I wanted to die on or something."Had danced" refers to dancing in the past that is no longer true. "I had intended to confess, but decided not to." "I had many happy memories of her before..." Past tense of dance is danced.
As you say, minor quibble, but why not get it right?
Thank you for the well wishes all. I'm still working on the game but progress is slower than I wish it was.
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