HTML Shadows Over Solomon Falls [v0.4] [Wendythered]

[WendyTheRed]

The pluperfect "had danced" would make sense if the rest of the narration was in a past tense (as it denotes something an action occurring before something else in the past), but here the main clause is in the present tense. But it's a very minor quibble, so do what you feel best.

"Had danced" refers to dancing in the past that is no longer true. "I had intended to confess, but decided not to." "I had many happy memories of her before..." Past tense of dance is danced.

As you say, minor quibble, but why not get it right?

Alright, you two convinced me. It's not like it's a hill I wanted to die on or something.

Thank you for the well wishes all. I'm still working on the game but progress is slower than I wish it was.

Spoiler: Details about my parents

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[Joe Steel]

My sincerest condolences, WtR. I cannot imagine what that must have been like to go through.

 

[damnedfrog]

Alright, you two convinced me. It's not like it's a hill I wanted to die on or something.

Thank you for the well wishes all. I'm still working on the game but progress is slower than I wish it was.

Spoiler: Details about my parents

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I can't even imagine what you had to go through. And the heartbreaking decision you had to take for your father.
I hope you will found some peace of mind soon.

 

[makeitso]

this game no longer being updated?

Your question is answered just a few posts up. Better to read back a bit before asking.