VN Ren'Py Shadows [v0.5] [Vicxlose]

[Vicxlose]

Not going to leave a review just yet, but dev you need to get an English speaker or someone more familiar with the language to go over your dialogue/script.

Thanks to Saint Blackmoor, the script has been fixed, as has the Overview, but I haven't shared the fixed version yet.

 

[PunpunRen]

will we get mouth gag scenes?

 

[Vicxlose]

will we get mouth gag scenes?

Ha, how did you guess?! I'm writing the script for Chapter 2, so judging by the end of that chapter... you'll find the answer in Chapter 3.

 

[sergerserj]

Visual is good. Rare genre. Plot for beginning decent. Waiting for updates.

 

[Giacomo-Bedardet]

A fun game, although the story's a bit weak. The graphics are really good, looking forward to the next episode!

 

[Kay_Kay]

Thank you! Have you seen the future tags? You can't put in a patch if the game is made this way. Just one report and the Patreon page is done. So I created a subscribestar.adult account, it's under review, all the information has been sent, and I'm waiting for the results.

I have seen them, and I must say, if the game has even half of what I saw there, you are bound to see me in your subscribestar account sooner rather than later.

 

[TM | Twisted Games]

The renders, the concept, and the location are all top notch. This VN is just missing a writer/editor to assist you with the script...which at times feels narratively disjointed, or like text is just flat out missing. If you are going more porn focused it doesn't need to be Shakespeare...but I still think it would be the easiest area to improve. Also, nothing wrong with easy ladies, but can be hotter if the MC takes some control at points, otherwise waters down what I believe is intended to be mdom.

Congrats on a strong first release, and good luck moving forward!

 

[harsha_26]

All is okay but still had doubts about beastality and sharing fetish.

 

[Vicxlose]

The renders, the concept, and the location are all top notch. This VN is just missing a writer/editor to assist you with the script...which at times feels narratively disjointed, or like text is just flat out missing. If you are going more porn focused it doesn't need to be Shakespeare...but I still think it would be the easiest area to improve. Also, nothing wrong with easy ladies, but can be hotter if the MC takes some control at points, otherwise waters down what I believe is intended to be mdom.

Congrats on a strong first release, and good luck moving forward!

Thank you! I'm very glad I did it not for nothing. As for the script, I'll update the links with a corrected version (no more Engrish). I understand why the text feels empty, I tried to make Silent Hill style dialogues, but it doesn't seem to work without voices, I mean long pauses in dialogues to give them some kind of mystery.

 

[Vicxlose]

All is okay but still had doubts about beastality and sharing fetish.

Sharing is optional, beastality for the story reason (flashback, personal story).

 

[harsha_26]

Sharing is optional, beastality for the story reason (flashback, personal story).

Sharing means with males or females or both?

And beastality is for the MC or for the main Li's?

 

[Vicxlose]

Sharing means with males or females or both?

And beastality is for the MC or for the main Li's?

Sharing with a male (Trap), as for females - group sex (MC F F) is sharing?
Beastality is only for one of the main Li.

 

[Lysergic]

I'm not generally much of a fan of domination stories but good god this fantastic so far. Definitely looking forward to seeing more Cora

 

[CrazyRosie]

Good start.

 

[BaronSamedi]

Solid Start.
Will be keeping an eye on this one.
I forsee bondage?

 

[xizaaR]

Really hope this doesn't become abandoned like so many good games with a solid start.

 

[sucelust]

Really hope this doesn't become abandoned like so many good games with a solid start.

yeah i avoided most of the new releases with good art because they end up only on 0.1

 

[BangB420]

Yassss

 

[stevenr0019]

 

[JohnSoprano]

Future tag: transformation? Will this be mc transforming into a woman or something different?
looks promising