Hongfire Survivor

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My plan/idea is that later, once you have a few girls under your control, you might "build" some sort of base where you live with them, sort of have your harem there.
You might also run/manage some kind of onlyfans site for your girls to generate income (for you).
Sounds like a good idea for a post-game release (like dev in a way that allows you to add it whenever you want, if you want to)

If it doesn't come to fruition, still have a solid sandbox.
 

hubvan

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Jun 23, 2018
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This could be the game I was waiting for all the time. I never understood why there is never an incest game in which you can properly corrupt your family. Usually they get abandanoned when it starts getting interesting or turn into a vanilla shitshow (e.g. "shut up and dance") which has nothing to do with the original premise. We will see if dev stays true to his intentions or will budge as his supporter number increases (which apparently most devs take as a sign to "play it safe" and go vanilla.)

Following chages would help if not already mentioned elsewhere:

- quick navigation in house and school, preferably with character portraits indicating the location. Those places are quite the rabbit holes
- Task tracker should show if "end of task for this version" is reached. Gallery also helps with knowing if all scenes have already been covered

Really wish the dev best of luck with this game!
 
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BlasKyau

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Jun 26, 2018
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Yes, something like that is planned.
When you have corrupted someone almost completely, you can rewrite/reprogramm their personality by using your power.
Slave, mindless fucktoy or even loving girlfriend are a few of the possibilities.
I'm only interested in romance. Can any of that be in the game?
 

desmosome

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Sep 5, 2018
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A pet peeve of mine is College/Unis that are actually high schools.

That building and how it functions is definitely a high school. Sarah's story also doesn't really make sense if they are college aged. She is an adult. She doesn't have to tag along just because her dad moved for a job. If we are generous and consider that school a community college, it really doesn't make sense for her to move with her parents just to end up at a shitty community college. There are government assistance programs like FAFSA that helps with tuition and expenses if financing her education was an issue. People go out of state all the time for higher education anyways, so why does she have to follow her dad during this period of her life? And if we say that it's a community college, MC's family is really aiming for the low hanging fruit in education if they are both voluntarily going to the same community college. That conflicts with the sis's backstory of being a super nerd who cares about her grades and studies 24/7.

I get it. Patreon is a thing. 18+ is a thing. Assets for the environment are thing. But that's the kind of thing that should be written around. MC and sis can be fraternal twins in their senior year of high school for example. Or you could write the script as if it was actually set in a community college. Or find better assets to portray a more typical university experience.

Anyways... things like this does really cut down on the immersion factor for me. The 4th wall breaking was very aggressive as well. I could live with it for tutorials and maybe even internal monologues, but when it seeps into actual spoken dialogue between characters, that's pushing it.

At some point, I got into the mindset that this will be strictly a gotta catch em all power fantasy. Well, obviously, that description is the main point of this game by design, and things are looking quite good in that front, but I guess I hoped the setting was crafted with more attention to detail. The plans for the mind control corruption aspect and the eventual "reprogramming" is looking real promising, though.

I think the gameplay systems in place are quite good. It's barebones right now, but that's basically all sandbox games in their infancy. It's just a matter of filling out the world. Admittedly, most sandbox games never manage to fill out the sandbox they created, but there are some shining examples of success too. High Rise Climb and A Spell for All to name a couple.
 

BlasKyau

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Jun 26, 2018
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If you mean romance instead of mind control while winning a girl over, then I'm afraid I'll have to disappoint you.
Using mind control to turn them into perfect girlfriends isn't what appeals to me the most, but if you have to corrupt them first... Personally I'd only be interested in the final state, and I'd rather ignore the process to get it (as long as the MC doesn't behave like a jerk, if he behaves in such a way, I may not even interested in that final state)
 

DramaCoach69

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Good looking game and it looks like there will be all sorts of opportunites for corruption. Unfortunately, while the mind control mechanics are clearly explained, some others aren't. Like, how do yougive the "study materials" (porn) to Chloe? Looking for mor of the Mom content and I reaaly want to mind control Bill before he get the MC killed.
 

BurnerGuy

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Aug 27, 2018
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Great game so far!

One suggestion though. The only time people use the term "college" in conversation is when they're saying something like "I'm in college" or "I go to such and such college". I never hear anyone say "this is my college", "I'm late for college", "let's go to our college". They just say "school", at least where I'm from. Plus, just using the word "school" makes it more ambiguous, so if you want to assume that it's some sort of weird college for the socially immature, then you can. Or if you want to assume that they're high school students, that works too.
 
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