Ren'Py Shattered Minds [v0.12] [eXtasy Games]

[harem.king]

If Ava was never apart of mc the medieval part in mc's mind made no sense and is a massive plot hole.

The reason given when mc was drug and can't use his powers, but Ava can made absolutely no sense. The only way it would make sense is if Ava taking over magically turns mc's body into hers, but it didn't. Others still see mc's body as mc mind controlled or not. And if Ava was that powerful she would never need mc to begin with. Why would she tell mc he is never getting his body back just to give it back instantly.

The reasons and explainations given by Ava does not make sense given her actions. If you had the key to you cell the entire time, why would you stay in that cell. Ava could of done everyting that mc did but better with less time and effort. We've know she was very powerful on the first day. It just bad writing.

Ava did not "give" the MC his body back, she lost control against her will. she said he is never getting it back because she believed he is never getting it back. but she was wrong.
Ava's cell is the MC. not whatever cell the MC found himself in. she just uses others to pressure the MC into "giving" her control.

I do agree that the fact Ava is immune to the power suppression drug does not make sense.

 

[thokai]

I do agree that the fact Ava is immune to the power suppression drug does not make sense.

In that case the author could get away with "the drug clouds the MC's mind and prevents him from focusing on his powers", that might give the option for Ava to not be effected since she is more or less part of the MC's subconsciousness.

 

[Fulminato]

I do agree that the fact Ava is immune to the power suppression drug does not make sense.

In that case the author could get away with "the drug clouds the MC's mind and prevents him from focusing on his powers", that might give the option for Ava to not be effected since she is more or less part of the MC's subconsciousness.

when ava take control the body seem be "morphed" in hers. it's a strange details, but it's imply when ava take control the body change to a degree. making her body immune.

i think ava a parassite of some sort. so a entity totally indipendent from the MC forced inabith his brain. and because it's a totally different entity the drug blocking MC power may don't works with her.

 

[false999]

Luna's awesome, can't believe that she's a character that I'll like over Scarlett... and she's close second to Sarah

 

[Chrathrard]

My hopes were rising that this game was going somewhere, but then I hit the, "Uh-oh! Belly too big, no more touch! " lazy content ending, and then their pregnancies suddenly disappeared with a wave of the magical, Disney princess wand, and my MC's love children were literally deleted from existence.

 

[harem.king]

My hopes were rising that this game was going somewhere, but then I hit the, "Uh-oh! Belly too big, no more touch! " lazy content ending, and then their pregnancies suddenly disappeared with a wave of the magical, Disney princess wand, and my MC's love children were literally deleted from existence.

this is a fake pregnancy where they are "impregnated" with magic power. and then they give birth to more magic power for you.
according to lore you can choose to include a real baby alongside the magic power incubation, but at the moment MC automatically chooses to never do so.

 

[Bronzescorpion]

My hopes were rising that this game was going somewhere, but then I hit the, "Uh-oh! Belly too big, no more touch! " lazy content ending, and then their pregnancies suddenly disappeared with a wave of the magical, Disney princess wand, and my MC's love children were literally deleted from existence.

Kind of ironic calling someone else lazy when you don't bother reading what is clearly explained and laid out before you. You can disagree with the execution, but it shouldn't have come as a surprise at all.

 

[TheorPhys]

Hyped to at last see Alice's massive jugs

 

[troll822]

Is the rate of this about 2 months per update (0.10 to 0.11 was about such) or it gets slower as updates get bigger?

Also: I am early in this. Does the MC remain a complete braindead idiot that has to rely on Ava (his imaginary friend) for everything ? Did the power somehow sent the working parts of his brain to a new personality called Ava he sees when hallucinating and the stupid part remained as the core personality?

 

[harem.king]

This will be achieved with modern medicine. Hormone preparations and surgery.
MC's power is mind control and that will not change. As already indicated, his power will be enhanced over the course of the game (mind transfer, for example) but his basic power will always revolve around the mind.

wait, MC can swap minds?

I just had an idea...
just make a female clone and swap the mind over to said body.
cloning is already a tech that exists today, replacing the clone's Y chromosome with his mother's X chromosome is also doable.
only thing we really lack today is an exo-womb (partially due to legal restrictions) and accelerated maturation for a clone (that one is actually decently difficult).
Accelerated maturation might be doable in the game due to them having more advanced tech, or via a power (time compression).

 

[ラMr Shadow悪]

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[proskillzpebot]

just wow, this game is amazing so far.
i cant wait to see what the future updates wil bring, this was one of the best games i played in a long time

 

[molerat21]

Can someone remind me, who's Cara? I went through all the contacts on my latest save file and I don't see anyone by that name.

 

[lipe2410]

Can someone remind me, who's Cara? I went through all the contacts on my latest save file and I don't see anyone by that name.

Sophie's friend. The black woman.

 

[troll822]

While I do like the game...
Man, the MC is a hypocritical PoS. I have played my share of games and yes, some MCs are worse. But at least, they have the SENSE they are worse. There were other ways to get into some girls' pants that would be less cringey.

I guess power corrupts.

I am rarely annoyed by the MC, but this one is a special case of asshole. Again, not the worst abuser or backstabber you can find. Just... I don't know. He's so, so, fake.

The way he betrays his ... "friend" Sarah is downright evil.
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[Gagagoug]

Will in change anything in the long run if I don't turn Bill into a woman? Never been much for sissification

 

[Bronzescorpion]

Will in change anything in the long run if I don't turn Bill into a woman? Never been much for sissification

Most likely you will only miss out on Bill stuff.

 

[Gelatonade]

I'm pretty excited with what's gonna happen to Bill. It will be very interesting and probably one of the only games to do this as far as I know. Can't wait for the update.

 

[Kreeto]

Shopia's scene is not good. Looks like dev has very hasty to finish her story as soon as possible. Her solo Incounter with mc was only fingering. And after that she fucked him with chloe not a date or anything. I mean she was one of the main character so she needed some long progression in her story.

 

[comacchio]

If you straight up have to lie, I say it would fall into the category of being unreasonable.

Let's look at the updates:

0.11 included the entire Luna questlines and the second main quest
0.10 Added two Scarlett quests, each having multiple scenes
0.09 Scarlett quest, Sofia and Chloe quest with many interactions with them in different scenarios
0.08 Chloe quest and 2 Sarah quests
0.07 First main, Bill and Sofia quests

Where exactly did you pull out that "more often than not"

To be clear, I don't have a problem with people waiting, downloading and playing multiple updates in one go, instead of playing them as they come out. But there is no way you can say that the updates takes too long or are too short. Their size compared to their frequency is some of the best you will find on this site. You implying the opposite is something I take issue with.

I first noticed, and downloaded the game around towards the end of march (65.1) and have to say that, taking my time and starting from the beginning, it took a good couple of days to reach the end of that version which I thoroughly enjoyed. Let me be quite clear to you on this, I have never said anything detrimental about the game, in fact I seriously complimented the art-work. I have since downloaded 67.0, but was disappointed with the limited progression in the story, which is why I said I would be waiting for 6 months, to a year before downloading again. I may even wait until the game is completed but that is not a reflection on the maker it doesn't mean I do not like the game, it just means that I prefer playing for longer periods at one time. Now please get off your high horse and try to understand that I was doing anything but insulting you!