VN Ren'Py Silent Corruption [Ep.1 P1 v0.1] [Mr.Kin]

[SCANTU]

I can't believe it, finally a game that breaks the mold. A beautiful story that feels like you're watching a gripping and engaging movie, along with top-notch animation. The game is meticulously crafted, both in its narrative and animation.
We're fed up with these formulaic games where a boy screws the entire family (including dogs and cats) or a "sick" father screwing his almost-underage daughters. Enough with the sneaking into showers, sexual assaults in store dressing rooms, late-night masturbation without the knowledge of those sleeping, and gigantic cocks that look like steel poles.
Congratulations, Mr. KIN! You've created a masterpiece, and if you live up to the initial promises of this game, it will surely become one of the best ever released on F95, if not the best.
And if I'm not mistaken, Mr. KIN is Italian like me, so I'm doubly proud.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

There is one specific route planned where you will have two girls as love interests at the same time. Beyond that specific storyline, however, it's not something I have planned for the rest of the game.

But as for discussing it further, yes, we absolutely can.

Two girls doesn't constitute a harem.

I was going to ask about various fetishes (including the possibility of a harem), but I guess that's no longer necessary.

In the development thread, you mentioned that some characters can die depending on the player's choices. I hope it doesn't look like this: 8 updates ago you made one bad decision and now a serial killer is killing your favorite LI.

I only like this type of choice if there's a clear sign indicating which option you should choose to avoid a negative outcome. Otherwise, I don't like it.

 

[Crosaith.]

Happy the dev decided not to go with cuck stuff. Shit pretty much always bleeds over. It kills the game when you know the girls ain't loyal and enjoy fucking all the other guys more than the MC.

 

[Mr.Kin]

Hey everyone,

Thank you all so much for the feedback and comments so far! I've read through everything, and I wanted to address a few of the points and questions that have come up.

Personally, I only play harems. For several reason, one of which is that nearly all games (especially with lots of girls) almost always play as harems until suddenly they aren't at some arbitrary point and for often forced reasons. I'll avoid going on a rant though, I'm prone to do that,

So thanks for being clear about it.

We can chat still if you ever want to, best of luck.

Only one throuple??? hmmm? A bit worried. I really hope its the two I have been lobbying for from the start, but fear it won't be Emily and Vicky and will possibly be that Asian and other girl in a photo, but I hope it is my dream one. I assume you won't reveal yet.

That's a great question about the scope of the relationships. As per the current story plan, there is one specific route planned where you will have two girls as love interests at the same time. However, as you all know, things can change over the course of development. A strong request from a supporter or a new idea could always lead me to make some slight adjustments to the story down the line. I'm always open to hearing what the community is interested in.

As for the harem question specifically, while I have five episodes already written, nothing would prevent me from adapting a part of the story in the future if there are enough suggestions or requests for it. But I can't make any guarantees on that right now. Thank you for the good wishes!

1) Very annoying to have text not instant. Especially odd considering it's an option by default.

2) With the protagonist being male, John Doe would be a better default name than Jane Doe, but you really only need a first name. It's weird later in text when someone calls him by the first and last name together. So, recommendation for default name: John.

3) Keith is not a woman's name, normally. It's a man's name. I've never heard of a woman named Keith before. English may not be your first language, but you can still use the internet for good name suggestions. Some female names starting with K off the top of my head: Kate, Katie, Kim, Kimberly, Kylie, Kari, Kristen, Kelly, Karen.

4) I'm not a fan of constant animation just for the sake of animation, but maybe I'm in the minority. It gave me more of a feeling of motion sickness rather than its intended purpose of making everything feel more alive.

In the update coming next week, I will implement the following changes:

• Instant text speed option will be added.
• I will change the default name from "Jane" to "John".
• I will take the name change for "Keith" into consideration.

Regarding the animations, I apologize for any issues they may cause, but there isn't much I can do about that aspect. The entire game was planned from the ground up to have at least light animations in every scene, as it's a core part of the intended experience.

Hey dev, you mentioned later in this post I decided it was best to remove it. So is that final, or is it still something you’re considering?

We players kind of know how this usually goes, sometimes a supporter requests a certain theme and it makes its way into the game. I’m not going into details, but I just want to ask straight: will this be added or not?

For people like me who don’t enjoy that stuff, it’s easy enough to just ignore and move on, but it’d be nice to know clearly.

When I mentioned that certain content might be available as a "request for a supporter," I was thinking of it as bonus content, completely separate from the main game. I was considering two ways to do this: I could program a short side story (like a mini-DLC) that wouldn't be part of the official game, or I could simply create a self-contained, rendered video of the scene. Either way, to be clear, that content will no longer be in the official game's release.

 

[Mr.Kin]

I know you might be disappointed by this, and I understand.

The content was only removed because, as I mentioned, it was always planned to be a few minor scenes with very little story content. It wasn't something that changed the main plot. Because of that, and because I got confused and mislabeled the game with a tag that caused a lot of concern, the best solution was to remove it.

But I hope you'll give the game a chance in the future, maybe with the next updates.

Thank you for your comment.

In the development thread, you mentioned that some characters can die depending on the player's choices. I hope it doesn't look like this: 8 updates ago you made one bad decision and now a serial killer is killing your favorite LI.

Yes, characters can die in this story. Unfortunately, it won't take long. Some routes will lead to it, but it won't be every character, otherwise, the story would become too grim. Let's just let the game happen. I know this might please some and not others, but that's part of the experience of telling a story.

I can't believe it, finally a game that breaks the mold. A beautiful story that feels like you're watching a gripping and engaging movie, along with top-notch animation. The game is meticulously crafted, both in its narrative and animation.
We're fed up with these formulaic games where a boy screws the entire family (including dogs and cats) or a "sick" father screwing his almost-underage daughters. Enough with the sneaking into showers, sexual assaults in store dressing rooms, late-night masturbation without the knowledge of those sleeping, and gigantic cocks that look like steel poles.
Congratulations, Mr. KIN! You've created a masterpiece, and if you live up to the initial promises of this game, it will surely become one of the best ever released on F95, if not the best.
And if I'm not mistaken, Mr. KIN is Italian like me, so I'm doubly proud.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I'm so glad you were able to pick up on what I was trying to do with the game. My goal was to bring something different to the table, and I know that this approach might not please everyone, but the game's foundation is built on being something different. Regarding your comment about Italy: I am not Italian myself, but I am of Italian descent! I love Italy, so I hope you will continue to be proud of me.

Got MILF?

Right now, we don't have anything planned for that specific theme. Sorry.

 

[Mr Anonymous Or Not]

Who's Edith, and why are you bringing her into this?

is the goddess of editing

 

[Mr.Kin]

I want to post a general message to the community. I know I've caused a lot of confusion lately, and I sincerely apologize for that. As part of this process, I have now discovered just how controversial and sensitive that particular theme is.

I want to thank you all for your feedback. More importantly, I also think we could all have a better and more positive community experience here. I hope you won't fight too much over this theme.

Regardless of your position on the matter, I want to wish every single one of you a great day.

I am available to answer any new questions or doubts you may have.

 

[SCANTU]

Mr. KIN, a tribute to your great work.
Your game reviewed on Italian Free Translator, the number one thread for Italian translations.
And yes, even though I'm of Italian origins, I'm still proud.

Sorry my english

https://f95zone.to/threads/italian-free-translators.116378/post-18245759

 

[Crosaith.]

I want to post a general message to the community. I know I've caused a lot of confusion lately, and I sincerely apologize for that. As part of this process, I have now discovered just how controversial and sensitive that particular theme is.

I want to thank you all for your feedback. More importantly, I also think we could all have a better and more positive community experience here. I hope you won't fight too much over this theme.

Regardless of your position on the matter, I want to wish every single one of you a great day.

I am available to answer any new questions or doubts you may have.

My bad dude. We're a passionate bunch that have seen a bunch of high potential games get ruined and then abandoned because of that tag and... sandbox. If your stories good we'll prob be talking about the girls and theorizing who the murderer is.

Anyway, hope this game ends up great and have a good day dude!

 

[Acsuka]

Mr.Kin
Is the girl with the long red hair in the main picture Sarah, the university professor? If so, please don't kill her, I'm really looking forward to going on a date with her.

 

[Assassin_Prime]

When I mentioned that certain content might be available as a "request for a supporter," I was thinking of it as bonus content, completely separate from the main game. I was considering two ways to do this: I could program a short side story (like a mini-DLC) that wouldn't be part of the official game, or I could simply create a self-contained, rendered video of the scene. Either way, to be clear, that content will no longer be in the official game's release.

Got it, thanks for clearing that up. As long as it’s not part of the main game, that’s fine by me.

 

[Assassin_Prime]

Some personal opinion.

I’ve seen some comments saying stuff like we’re brainwashing new devs or trying to force them to make games how we want. Honestly, I don’t see it that way.

Devs make games for their fans, and if a theme isn’t to a player’s taste, they’ll just move on. Nobody’s brainwashing or confusing the dev, it’s their game, their choice.

What we can do here is share reviews, criticism, and suggestions, not tell them how to run their project. Nobody’s forcing the dev, and we shouldn’t mess with their vision.

 

[Crosaith.]

Mr.Kin
Is the girl with the long red hair in the main picture Sarah, the university professor? If so, please don't kill her, I'm really looking forward to going on a date with her.

I'd be very surprised if any of the main girls had forced deaths. Death reqs are prob not being on her route and/or making poor decisions.

That being said... it'd be very interesting if the murderer was one main girls instead of some creepy dude.

 

[Acsuka]

That being said... it'd be very interesting if the murderer was one main girls instead of some creepy dude.

I thought about that too, and rewatched the scene where the killer shoots one of his victims.
It doesn't look like he has a female body, though I could be wrong...

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[SCANTU]

Guys, let him work in peace.
I think he's doing a great job.
And then, excuse me, I believe every "creator" should nurture his "work" by following his own way of being without necessarily being influenced by others.
Those who appreciate it are on his side, and those who don't appreciate it can simply move on, without the need for further and useless discussions.
Are we mature people or not?

 

[Mr Anonymous Or Not]

Guys, let him work in peace.
I think he's doing a great job.
And then, excuse me, I believe every "creator" should nurture his "work" by following his own way of being without necessarily being influenced by others.
Those who appreciate it are on his side, and those who don't appreciate it can simply move on, without the need for further and useless discussions.
Are we mature people or not?

You're right, we're on page 6 of a debate that's going nowhere.

 

[Mr.Kin]

Mr. KIN, a tribute to your great work.
Your game reviewed on Italian Free Translator, the number one thread for Italian translations.
And yes, even though I'm of Italian origins, I'm still proud.

Sorry my english

https://f95zone.to/threads/italian-free-translators.116378/post-18245759

I would love to see an Italian version, that's a great idea. Whatever I can do to help with the translation, just let me know. I can send the script to make the translation easier, or whatever is necessary for us to be able to publish a version in Italian.

And no need to apologize for your English, it's perfectly fine!

Mr.Kin
Is the girl with the long red hair in the main picture Sarah, the university professor? If so, please don't kill her, I'm really looking forward to going on a date with her.

Yes, the character with the long, red hair is indeed Sarah!

You can see how different a character looks when they let their hair down, right? It changes them quite a bit, but yes, that's her.

I'd be very surprised if any of the main girls had forced deaths. Death reqs are prob not being on her route and/or making poor decisions.

That being said... it'd be very interesting if the murderer was one main girls instead of some creepy dude.

Not all characters will die, as I've mentioned before on the forum. That would be too predictable, not to mention too grim.

However, I can confirm that unfortunately, on some routes, a main character will die.

For example, let's say you're following Route 1. A character who doesn't appear much in Route 1, but is very present in Route 2, might be the one who dies in your playthrough. Conversely, if you're on a route where a certain character is heavily featured, it's probable that this character will not die on that specific path.

When it comes to the deaths, I really like to work with the concepts of the Butterfly Effect or Chaos Theory. A single different decision can change the future in significant ways. The deaths in the game are designed to feel like a consequence of those choices, not a predestined event.

It's more about that kind of narrative impact. I know this might please some and not others, but it's part of the experience of telling this kind of story.

I thought about that too, and rewatched the scene where the killer shoots one of his victims.
It doesn't look like he has a female body, though I could be wrong...

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Ooh, you're definitely catching the right feeling for the game!

I won't confirm or deny the possibility of the killer being a man or a woman, but I can tell you this: I deliberately tried to leave spoilers and hints about how the story will unfold in certain scenes.

For example, since you've already played through it, you know about the red ribbon. In that particular scene, if you observe closely, you can get some insights. The same goes for the victim board. If you look at the board with all the killer's previous victims, you might notice a few clues about what happens during the story of Part 1, including some hints about Madison's friend, Lily Larson.

 

[Crosaith.]

I thought about that too, and rewatched the scene where the killer shoots one of his victims.
It doesn't look like he has a female body, though I could be wrong...

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Don't think that's enough to confirm. Banner girls character models have similar necks and shoulders to that pic, especially the one in the red.

 

[goulet1995]

Mr.Kin is the lesbian stuff going to be avoidable my personal view on it is any form of girl on girl is equal to sharing the LI with another man which i am very much against in any playthrough i do.

 

[Acsuka]

I would love to see an Italian version, that's a great idea. Whatever I can do to help with the translation, just let me know. I can send the script to make the translation easier, or whatever is necessary for us to be able to publish a version in Italian.

And no need to apologize for your English, it's perfectly fine!


Yes, the character with the long, red hair is indeed Sarah!

You can see how different a character looks when they let their hair down, right? It changes them quite a bit, but yes, that's her.


Not all characters will die, as I've mentioned before on the forum. That would be too predictable, not to mention too grim.

However, I can confirm that unfortunately, on some routes, a main character will die.

For example, let's say you're following Route 1. A character who doesn't appear much in Route 1, but is very present in Route 2, might be the one who dies in your playthrough. Conversely, if you're on a route where a certain character is heavily featured, it's probable that this character will not die on that specific path.

When it comes to the deaths, I really like to work with the concepts of the Butterfly Effect or Chaos Theory. A single different decision can change the future in significant ways. The deaths in the game are designed to feel like a consequence of those choices, not a predestined event.

It's more about that kind of narrative impact. I know this might please some and not others, but it's part of the experience of telling this kind of story.

Ooh, you're definitely catching the right feeling for the game!

I won't confirm or deny the possibility of the killer being a man or a woman, but I can tell you this: I deliberately tried to leave spoilers and hints about how the story will unfold in certain scenes.

For example, since you've already played through it, you know about the red ribbon. In that particular scene, if you observe closely, you can get some insights. The same goes for the victim board. If you look at the board with all the killer's previous victims, you might notice a few clues about what happens during the story of Part 1, including some hints about Madison's friend, Lily Larson.

Thank you for confirming my question Sarah, I really like redheads, so I would be most happy if I could date her soon in the story. Of course, there are still many girls to meet, but it would be nice to see her at school in the meantime...
In the first episode, there are two girls' routes, so can we already be afraid of a possible tragedy for one of the girls later?
Of course, only you know the correct answer about the killer, but right now what I see in the picture I posted is a male killer. I saw the "victim board" and wrote down the names for myself, maybe we will meet one of them in the story, and then there will be no surprise about the girl's fate. However, I find it a little strange that there is a photo of the car on the sign, even the license plate is slightly visible. And the last two letters match the car in the murder video. So how come they haven't identified the car until now?