Sarkasmus

Member
May 4, 2020
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Well... I played the game when it came out, and I absolutely hated everything about it.
Now I played the "rewritten" game, and I still hated it. Please tell me that supposedly "more thorough rewrite of episode 1 based on several good suggestions" will be included in the next update? Because if it isn't, going by your current developement speed, I absolutely expect you guys to abandon this game.

Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to suggest you abandon it. It's more that I've seen this pattern with A LOT of games on here before, that ended with their abandonment.
People creating a game, not giving a shit about the story (because it's porn, who cares about story), expecting patrons to just magically flock to them. Then they realize that people actually DO care about story in visual NOVELS, get disillusioned because they only make, like $80 a month (that they have to split three-ways) and then decide, it's not worth the effort.

If I understood AG.'s previous post correctly, he rather rendered "very High quality images with lot of animations" for future updates, than to rework scenes from Day 1. Future updates, that (at the current speed) nobody will be even able to try out for a year or so. But I got to tell you... with the way the story is set up right now, I (and aparently everyone else) has absolutely no interest in ever playing those updates (and subsequently support you financially) until you fixed Day 1.
Right now, I would be perfectly happy if in the next update you scrap the incest-Tag and MC just goes "Fuck you all, I'm obviously no longer a part of this family, my Aunt only accepts me in her house for my dick, so I'm going to college on my own. Never contact me again, have a nice life!".
Because of how you introduced those characters, I abhor MCs entire family with a passion and wouldn't want to touch any of them with anything other than a baseball-bat at high velocity. Much less try to sleep with any of them. I have absolutely no more interest in these characters, apart from seeing them getting what they deserve. Which is NOT a spineless and all-forgiving Simp-MC, who just let's them do whatever they want because they have tits.
So PLEASE, either completely rewrite Day 1, or at least rewrite the dialogue to show some kind of remorse on the family's part and start a guilt-tripping plot or something.

*EDIT*
The longer I thing about this, the more I realize that these characters are simply burned for me. Even if you rewrite Day 1, I will always remember them as those assholes that didn't give a single shit about the MC I'm playing here. So maybe a redemption-Ark (using their guilt) would actually be the better choice.
*EDIT END*

And when you're already at it... can you please make the MC wear some pants while he's mowing the lawn? Those red/white undies he's wearing (for whatever reason) make him look like a twelve year old Child. Maybe even get rid of the undies in general and use some boxer shorts.
 
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Liquid_Donut

Newbie
Nov 7, 2019
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Well... I played the game when it came out, and I absolutely hated everything about it.
Now I played the "rewritten" game, and I still hated it. Please tell me that supposedly "more thorough rewrite of episode 1 based on several good suggestions" will be included in the next update? Because if it isn't, going by your current developement speed, I absolutely expect you guys to abandon this game.

Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to suggest you abandon it. It's more that I've seen this pattern with A LOT of games on here before, that ended with their abandonment.
People creating a game, not giving a shit about the story (because it's porn, who cares about story), expecting patrons to just magically flock to them. Then they realize that people actually DO care about story in visual NOVELS, get disillusioned because they only make, like $80 a month (that they have to split three-ways) and then decide, it's not worth the effort.

If I understood AG.'s previous post correctly, he rather rendered "very High quality images with lot of animations" for future updates, than to rework scenes from Day 1. Future updates, that (at the current speed) nobody will be even able to try out for a year or so. But I got to tell you... with the way the story is set up right now, I (and aparently everyone else) has absolutely no interest in ever playing those updates (and subsequently support you financially) until you fixed Day 1.
Right now, I would be perfectly happy if in the next update you scrap the incest-Tag and MC just goes "Fuck you all, I'm obviously no longer a part of this family, my Aunt only accepts me in her house for my dick, so I'm going to college on my own. Never contact me again, have a nice life!".
Because of how you introduced those characters, I abhor MCs entire family with a passion and wouldn't want to touch any of them with anything other than a baseball-bat at high velocity. Much less try to sleep with any of them. I have absolutely no more interest in these characters, apart from seeing them getting what they deserve. Which is NOT a spineless and all-forgiving Simp-MC, who just let's them do whatever they want because they have tits.
So PLEASE, either completely rewrite Day 1, or at least rewrite the dialogue to show some kind of remorse on the family's part and start a guilt-tripping plot or something.

*EDIT*
The longer I thing about this, the more I realize that these characters are simply burned for me. Even if you rewrite Day 1, I will always remember them as those assholes that didn't give a single shit about the MC I'm playing here. So maybe a redemption-Ark (using their guilt) would actually be the better choice.
*EDIT END*

And when you're already at it... can you please make the MC wear some pants while he's mowing the lawn? Those red/white undies he's wearing (for whatever reason) make him look like a twelve year old Child. Maybe even get rid of the undies in general and use some boxer shorts.

I definitely understand some of where you're coming from. It is very much in juvenile stages, and many development choices are strange. But man honestly it sounds like you need to just walk away from this and find other games. So much animosity for something you apparently hate. Like why even keep hanging on? That's like somebody hating poop and being disgusted by it but constantly trying to look at it and smell it for some reason.
 

Sarkasmus

Member
May 4, 2020
157
941
I definitely understand some of where you're coming from. It is very much in juvenile stages, and many development choices are strange. But man honestly it sounds like you need to just walk away from this and find other games. So much animosity for something you apparently hate. Like why even keep hanging on? That's like somebody hating poop and being disgusted by it but constantly trying to look at it and smell it for some reason.
It's not really like I keep coming back because I get some kind of guilty pleasure out of it :D
I tried it, didn't like it, and walked away. Then I coincidentally read they rewrote the story, adressing many of the points I didn't like, so I tried it again. That's it.

Now, I could just drop in here, write "game suxx!!1!!11!" and leave again. But I learned that many devs here are quite ambitious and want their game to work. So I like to spell out what MADE ME dislike the game, so they have a way to adress those points (if they want to). That's why my text was so long.
 

Liquid_Donut

Newbie
Nov 7, 2019
37
42
It's not really like I keep coming back because I get some kind of guilty pleasure out of it :D
I tried it, didn't like it, and walked away. Then I coincidentally read they rewrote the story, adressing many of the points I didn't like, so I tried it again. That's it.

Now, I could just drop in here, write "game suxx!!1!!11!" and leave again. But I learned that many devs here are quite ambitious and want their game to work. So I like to spell out what MADE ME dislike the game, so they have a way to adress those points (if they want to). That's why my text was so long.
Well that does make sense, to be fair. It just seemed like you were pretty upset hah
 

Fappable One

Active Member
May 14, 2020
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Bruh this update was supposed to come out on Saturday. Yesterday claiming "we're uploading to the server"
Uploads do not take 25 hours to get published
Shouldn't jerk people around like that. Best not say anything if you can't back up your words. This isn't the first time we've been through this
Meanwhile nothing new on Patron, or Subscribestar. The red flags are piling up
 

AG.

@ráy Gámës
Game Developer
Apr 20, 2020
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Bruh this update was supposed to come out on Saturday. Yesterday claiming "we're uploading to the server"
Uploads do not take 25 hours to get published
Shouldn't jerk people around like that. Best not say anything if you can't back up your words. This isn't the first time we've been through this
Meanwhile nothing new on Patron, or Subscribestar. The red flags are piling up
getting some distribution problem, so we take it down and again re-uploaded. sorry for inconvenience.
 
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Avaron1974

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So I like to spell out what MADE ME dislike the game, so they have a way to adress those points (if they want to).
Not to nitpick but, you didn't say what made you dislike it at all.

You made a very long, very angry post that explained nothing and gave the devs nothing to work with.

The only character you mentioned was the aunt who you hated for wanting the MC's dick, that's it, your entire post and that was the only point you made that could be addressed.

You made long paragraphs about how shit the story was, how much you hated the characters but not why, you didn't give them anything to work with.

Your entire post can be summed up with "your game sucks, fix it".

And a bit about the MC being spineless, i'll elobarate.

Well... I played the game when it came out, and I absolutely hated everything about it.
Now I played the "rewritten" game, and I still hated it. Please tell me that supposedly "more thorough rewrite of episode 1 based on several good suggestions" will be included in the next update? Because if it isn't, going by your current developement speed, I absolutely expect you guys to abandon this game.

Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to suggest you abandon it. It's more that I've seen this pattern with A LOT of games on here before, that ended with their abandonment.
People creating a game, not giving a shit about the story (because it's porn, who cares about story), expecting patrons to just magically flock to them. Then they realize that people actually DO care about story in visual NOVELS, get disillusioned because they only make, like $80 a month (that they have to split three-ways) and then decide, it's not worth the effort.

If I understood AG.'s previous post correctly, he rather rendered "very High quality images with lot of animations" for future updates, than to rework scenes from Day 1. Future updates, that (at the current speed) nobody will be even able to try out for a year or so. But I got to tell you... with the way the story is set up right now, I (and aparently everyone else) has absolutely no interest in ever playing those updates (and subsequently support you financially) until you fixed Day 1.
Right now, I would be perfectly happy if in the next update you scrap the incest-Tag and MC just goes "Fuck you all, I'm obviously no longer a part of this family, my Aunt only accepts me in her house for my dick, so I'm going to college on my own. Never contact me again, have a nice life!".
That was over half your post just saying how shit you think it was and that no one plays it.

Because of how you introduced those characters, I abhor MCs entire family with a passion and wouldn't want to touch any of them with anything other than a baseball-bat at high velocity. Much less try to sleep with any of them. I have absolutely no more interest in these characters, apart from seeing them getting what they deserve. Which is NOT a spineless and all-forgiving Simp-MC, who just let's them do whatever they want because they have tits.
So PLEASE, either completely rewrite Day 1, or at least rewrite the dialogue to show some kind of remorse on the family's part and start a guilt-tripping plot or something.
A paragraph just saying you have no interest in any of the characters but a small point about them maybe showing remorse.

*EDIT*
The longer I thing about this, the more I realize that these characters are simply burned for me. Even if you rewrite Day 1, I will always remember them as those assholes that didn't give a single shit about the MC I'm playing here. So maybe a redemption-Ark (using their guilt) would actually be the better choice.
*EDIT END*
You'll always hate the characters and the MC sucks.

And when you're already at it... can you please make the MC wear some pants while he's mowing the lawn? Those red/white undies he's wearing (for whatever reason) make him look like a twelve year old Child. Maybe even get rid of the undies in general and use some boxer shorts.
1 of only 3 actual points you made .... his pants.

So we have his aunt, some remorse and pants. It took you a massive post to request a change of pants pretty much.

I'm not trying to dig but your is one of many, many, many posts where people say they offered advice to the dev but said absolutely nothing helpful.

I see it so many times, people just post "you should fix this shit" but that's it. Even if the dev wanted to take all the advice you could give him .... you gave him none.

People on this forum suck at constructive criticism.
 
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