- May 4, 2020
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Well... I played the game when it came out, and I absolutely hated everything about it.
Now I played the "rewritten" game, and I still hated it. Please tell me that supposedly "more thorough rewrite of episode 1 based on several good suggestions" will be included in the next update? Because if it isn't, going by your current developement speed, I absolutely expect you guys to abandon this game.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to suggest you abandon it. It's more that I've seen this pattern with A LOT of games on here before, that ended with their abandonment.
People creating a game, not giving a shit about the story (because it's porn, who cares about story), expecting patrons to just magically flock to them. Then they realize that people actually DO care about story in visual NOVELS, get disillusioned because they only make, like $80 a month (that they have to split three-ways) and then decide, it's not worth the effort.
If I understood AG.'s previous post correctly, he rather rendered "very High quality images with lot of animations" for future updates, than to rework scenes from Day 1. Future updates, that (at the current speed) nobody will be even able to try out for a year or so. But I got to tell you... with the way the story is set up right now, I (and aparently everyone else) has absolutely no interest in ever playing those updates (and subsequently support you financially) until you fixed Day 1.
Right now, I would be perfectly happy if in the next update you scrap the incest-Tag and MC just goes "Fuck you all, I'm obviously no longer a part of this family, my Aunt only accepts me in her house for my dick, so I'm going to college on my own. Never contact me again, have a nice life!".
Because of how you introduced those characters, I abhor MCs entire family with a passion and wouldn't want to touch any of them with anything other than a baseball-bat at high velocity. Much less try to sleep with any of them. I have absolutely no more interest in these characters, apart from seeing them getting what they deserve. Which is NOT a spineless and all-forgiving Simp-MC, who just let's them do whatever they want because they have tits.
So PLEASE, either completely rewrite Day 1, or at least rewrite the dialogue to show some kind of remorse on the family's part and start a guilt-tripping plot or something.
*EDIT*
The longer I thing about this, the more I realize that these characters are simply burned for me. Even if you rewrite Day 1, I will always remember them as those assholes that didn't give a single shit about the MC I'm playing here. So maybe a redemption-Ark (using their guilt) would actually be the better choice.
*EDIT END*
And when you're already at it... can you please make the MC wear some pants while he's mowing the lawn? Those red/white undies he's wearing (for whatever reason) make him look like a twelve year old Child. Maybe even get rid of the undies in general and use some boxer shorts.
Now I played the "rewritten" game, and I still hated it. Please tell me that supposedly "more thorough rewrite of episode 1 based on several good suggestions" will be included in the next update? Because if it isn't, going by your current developement speed, I absolutely expect you guys to abandon this game.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to suggest you abandon it. It's more that I've seen this pattern with A LOT of games on here before, that ended with their abandonment.
People creating a game, not giving a shit about the story (because it's porn, who cares about story), expecting patrons to just magically flock to them. Then they realize that people actually DO care about story in visual NOVELS, get disillusioned because they only make, like $80 a month (that they have to split three-ways) and then decide, it's not worth the effort.
If I understood AG.'s previous post correctly, he rather rendered "very High quality images with lot of animations" for future updates, than to rework scenes from Day 1. Future updates, that (at the current speed) nobody will be even able to try out for a year or so. But I got to tell you... with the way the story is set up right now, I (and aparently everyone else) has absolutely no interest in ever playing those updates (and subsequently support you financially) until you fixed Day 1.
Right now, I would be perfectly happy if in the next update you scrap the incest-Tag and MC just goes "Fuck you all, I'm obviously no longer a part of this family, my Aunt only accepts me in her house for my dick, so I'm going to college on my own. Never contact me again, have a nice life!".
Because of how you introduced those characters, I abhor MCs entire family with a passion and wouldn't want to touch any of them with anything other than a baseball-bat at high velocity. Much less try to sleep with any of them. I have absolutely no more interest in these characters, apart from seeing them getting what they deserve. Which is NOT a spineless and all-forgiving Simp-MC, who just let's them do whatever they want because they have tits.
So PLEASE, either completely rewrite Day 1, or at least rewrite the dialogue to show some kind of remorse on the family's part and start a guilt-tripping plot or something.
*EDIT*
The longer I thing about this, the more I realize that these characters are simply burned for me. Even if you rewrite Day 1, I will always remember them as those assholes that didn't give a single shit about the MC I'm playing here. So maybe a redemption-Ark (using their guilt) would actually be the better choice.
*EDIT END*
And when you're already at it... can you please make the MC wear some pants while he's mowing the lawn? Those red/white undies he's wearing (for whatever reason) make him look like a twelve year old Child. Maybe even get rid of the undies in general and use some boxer shorts.
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