So, just played the update. I'm a little disappointed that you seem to keep trying this patchwork-approach, instead of the announced rewrite. You fix some lines to fill a few plotholes, but then completely ignore all the other dialogue-lines that relate to them.
Like for example:
- Now nobody is home because she wrote down the wrong date. But just after telling her husband MC would come next week, she also told him that MC is basically all packed up and ready to go. She never questioned why someone would want to live out of a suitcase for an entire week?
- She tried to reach MC when she got the flight-notification, but he was already boarded. But her sister still had the bunkbed bought and installed a full day before his flight specifically for his visit.
- Now Cissy told him about the pageant, but during the phonecall in front of his home he still acts all surprised.
- When meeting the Tattooed woman we learn "I guess she isn't mad at me anymore". But when MC stands in front of the Bathroom we read "She already hates me to death...".
And then the inconsistencies.
She still wonders how MC looks like, because no loving and caring Motherfigure would want to get some pictures or do a videocall with the underaged kid they shipped off to boarding school on his own YEARS ago. He still needs to check the adress of his home, that looks kind of abandoned. She still does everything in her power to keep him from also coming to the pageant or even talk to Cissy.
Can MC come to the pageant? "No honey, I know you're tired,
take some rest". And then makes him go on a "short journey" of "a few hours" to her sister's place. But he still would like to come. So she says "this time please listen to me and
stay home" ...before sending him to her sister's place instead of simply letting him stay home (still no feasible explanation whatsoever, why that would be such a problem).
I mean, why does it have to be a multiple hour long journey at all? The housenumbers look like she lives just two houses down the road. The guy picking him up with a car could just be explained by him forgetting about it, and then seeing MC on the porch when he just wanted to drive to the airport.
Aunt still tells you to "make yourself at home" and use the bathroom... just to then go in herself. She tells you to "just come in, the door is unlocked", but if you do, it's GAME OVER because she is bent over, legs spread, with the shower-curtain wide open and her ass pointing to the door. But YOU are the pervert boldly walking in on her. Only if you PEEK she suddenly tells you to wait...
You know, I would still think there must be some hidden scheme going on by those women. But the dev already acknowledged those to be plotholes, so...