I've yet to get off the island and shit is bizarre. On the one hand, not counting the required multi-choice dialogue breaks, only like half the choices made affect anything (and by that I mean the other option tends to be "game over" outright rather than something that will factor in later).
On the other hand, there's a number of flip-flops between Mrs. Reigns referring to herself in the third person (as "Mrs. Reigns" as opposed to, say, whatever her first name is, or 'your caretaker' or whatever), the MC slipping up and referring to her as 'mom' and then 2 minutes later corrects himself to mom's BEST FRIEND, or one of the two shades-wearing goons referring to each other as 'mate' and only 'mate' (I mean I don't think we were expecting Shakespeare or a lot of character depth to red shirts, but wow), or immediately adopting a stranger because they offered to be something like a housemaid once you guys finally get out of the place... what.
Like, dialogue generally had odd spots besides this stuff (is the ALL CAPS dialogue supposed to be yelling or not? If not, what the fuck is it supposed to mean), but also, MC switching into supernaturally-horny mode when they got to the island was, like... I dunno, I guess that could maybe be explained away as brain damage from whatever landing they could pull from diving out with no parachute? Like, finally near something akin to action, he offers to sleep on the floor, then goes full-throttle on the pestering until even the offer to be on the bed got yeeted off the table.
Ah, also, there's this weird ish going on with their inner monologues where "sometimes" it's in parenthesis and "sometimes" it isn't, making it a bit of a tit to figure when someone's announcing things out loud and when they aren't.
Yeezus, this is an idiot. And from the last page or so of comments, I get the impression that manages to get worse.
