So...
I finally played through to the end of the current build. There are good and bad things here.
So the story is great. I am loving the whole Mafia story and what's been going on. However, there are SEVERAL instances of the wrong character doing the speaking. The editing to show what is said and thought needs to be improved, because as you're reading some of the 'thoughts' they are displayed as if they are spoken. There are a few scenes where a character not even in the scene is speaking, but you know it should be someone else. Not sure if English is the Dev Team's first language, but there are spelling mistakes, though not as much as some VNs, but noticeable.
The VN started off with some choices, none really too consequential, but I thought as time went on, there would be more. However it's really turned into a Kinetic Novel, which can be fine... but there are times where I would like to have more choice as the MC as there are times where he's a blithering idiot. Some may be warranted, but there are other times where based on past choices he should know better.
I don't mind the slow burn. The team has given some great lewd scenes and the payoff in this last episode was well worth it. I do think there are scenes that maybe shouldn't have been shown, but more implied... but that's personal and not a reflection of a good or bad choice by the Devs.
Overall, I have enjoyed this VN so far, even with it's flaws. Looking forward to future updates in the hopes of seeing a happy resolution for the MC... though I am also worried there won't be one for everyone involved... which kind of sucks, but that's just my personal theory. So, best of luck to the Devs.
