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How is it always so rare that devs have both a sense for making the games look good and a sense of writing.
First it's "Oh no, I can't have such impure thoughts about my mother", 2 minutes laterwe have this guy jerking off to her while she's passed out in the bathtub and another 5 minutes later he states that he wants to fuck this bitch in the ass all week long. This is so unnecessary and only makes him look the kind of person that you want to get away from asap.
On the plus side the art style looks good, the plot might be interesting and it's no an easy "dad is dead" scenario
Edit: And now goes around and adopts people like stray dogs ..
With some better writing in terms of dialogue it would probably improve quite a bit, as it is it seems like it was written by a 12 year old with all this "I can't hold back" and such.
First it's "Oh no, I can't have such impure thoughts about my mother", 2 minutes laterwe have this guy jerking off to her while she's passed out in the bathtub and another 5 minutes later he states that he wants to fuck this bitch in the ass all week long. This is so unnecessary and only makes him look the kind of person that you want to get away from asap.
On the plus side the art style looks good, the plot might be interesting and it's no an easy "dad is dead" scenario
Edit: And now goes around and adopts people like stray dogs ..
With some better writing in terms of dialogue it would probably improve quite a bit, as it is it seems like it was written by a 12 year old with all this "I can't hold back" and such.
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How do you come to the conclusion that stating your opinion and criticizing something is whining and even unwarrented? Are you that simple or just ignorant with this "You're automatically wrong if you don't see it my way"?
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damn, i tend to believe, i'm the center of the universe.
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Yeah mainly because the way the game was presented in the beginning (Ep 1-2) it seemed like it was going to be another run-of-the-mill incest game where you had decent DAZ models, MC who was going to fuck em all, etc (which got a lot of praise and hype around it in the beginning)
Then you had an over the top plot to the point of it being ridiculous and stupid (meh it's porn games - doesn't bug me too much), add in the douchiest of all douchey dialogues coming from the MC (pretty much whines and acts like an 8 year old but somehow is 18?), cringey writing overall... oh and the aunt
.The turn from what looked like in the beginning and for all intent and purposes how the author presented it - a straight harem MC fuck-em all fuckfest - to this voyeuristic and cringefest its become kind of rubbed people the wrong way to say the least.
And it didn't help that the developer went over the top with his whining and complaining on Patreon.
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I somehow doubt that the dev should make stealing such a big thing in this rant considering how expensive daz 3d assets can be and I doubt someone would spend a couple hundred bucks or so on something that might not take off.
That being said I can understand how the whole situation is frustrating, but ultimately it's not the players fault if they don't like things enough to place a pledge. As a dev you're in theory in the stronger position since you can take the game to whatever place you want it to be, but since you're paid by how much people like it you can't expect a small fortune when you deliver a weak plot with stupid writing. In the end you have to cater to their needs, not them to yours and how much you'd like to make per month with whatever you deliver.
Also the whole "but they've been here for years, it's much harder for new devs" doesn't really hold up. Sure it was a bit different, because you haven't seen the same models that often before, even back then 2 years ago when people like Faerin started he had to convince people to place their trust and their money in him and his abilities and in the end it worked out pretty well from what I've seen, even more for devs like MrDots, Palmer and other big shots.
To end the post on a somewhat positive note: The coding and rendering seems to be good enough and if the dev reads up on writing a story or let's someone else focus on it while he does the coding/rendering I'm sure things can improve.
Edit: And for the sake of everything, take smaller steps. Nobody goes around and suddenly adopts grown adults who they met like 2 hours ago and if things will take longer (the island episode almost seemed a bit rushed) develop a bit of a sub plot or let things run in the background, for example what the others are up to or something similar.
That being said I can understand how the whole situation is frustrating, but ultimately it's not the players fault if they don't like things enough to place a pledge. As a dev you're in theory in the stronger position since you can take the game to whatever place you want it to be, but since you're paid by how much people like it you can't expect a small fortune when you deliver a weak plot with stupid writing. In the end you have to cater to their needs, not them to yours and how much you'd like to make per month with whatever you deliver.
Also the whole "but they've been here for years, it's much harder for new devs" doesn't really hold up. Sure it was a bit different, because you haven't seen the same models that often before, even back then 2 years ago when people like Faerin started he had to convince people to place their trust and their money in him and his abilities and in the end it worked out pretty well from what I've seen, even more for devs like MrDots, Palmer and other big shots.
To end the post on a somewhat positive note: The coding and rendering seems to be good enough and if the dev reads up on writing a story or let's someone else focus on it while he does the coding/rendering I'm sure things can improve.
Edit: And for the sake of everything, take smaller steps. Nobody goes around and suddenly adopts grown adults who they met like 2 hours ago and if things will take longer (the island episode almost seemed a bit rushed) develop a bit of a sub plot or let things run in the background, for example what the others are up to or something similar.
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Legit only excited for the updates of this game to see how much of a fucking whore the aunt continues to be. And normally I hate that shit. But between the cringey plot and dialogue, and the actually super sexy scenes with the aunt, she's what I look forward to the most. Maybe it's because I'm not attracted to the "mom that looks nothing like a mom" that much, or because the game was pretty up front and heavy handed with the Stacy scenes (I started on version 3, so I learned what to expect real quick), but I wasn't as upset by those scenes as I normally would be. Even if she is kind of terrible for being more focused on dick than her missing sister and nephew. I just can't get interested in the main story that much. Maybe if the sister(s) and the island savior get some good content too, I'll change my mind. But until then, just sitting back with my popcorn to watch the aunt be a cock hungry whore.
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Guys, Episode 5 is about 75% completed now. Getting close to the finish line.
This time I'm just going to release as soon as it's completed instead of announcing a release date.
I think it's better that way. Watch out for the release soon.