VN Ren'Py Sinful Delicacies [Ep.17] [Temptress Games]

[Sinphil]

What a crazy ridiculous mess of a roller coaster ride. I swear 75% of dialogue is internal dialogue with MC over mother...while story is so abbreviated its hilarious. Rescued by girl to adopting her in 2 minutes but it takes 10 minutes to grind through any dialogue MC looks at moms ass or tits. And seriously what 18 yo calls their mother mommy FFS. The characters are all just as over the top bad like B grade 80's action films. Things going to meltdown mode all around so hell lets have another 10 minute internal dialogue about moms ass.

This is so over the top bad in every writing aspect its a train wreck I cant stop watching.

EDIT I do find it strange everyone so worked up about Aunt though. Its the mainstay H content for large part of game and fits the ridiculous over the top nature of game....of course the cheating wife had to do it in spades and hit every dick in 5 mile radius. Nothing wrong with a woman getting what she wants and at least she not a brain dead bimbo.

 

[Bullet07]

Any sex scene with mom?

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Any sex scene with mom?

Pretty much yeah

 

[Lotex]

How is it always so rare that devs have both a sense for making the games look good and a sense of writing.
First it's "Oh no, I can't have such impure thoughts about my mother", 2 minutes laterwe have this guy jerking off to her while she's passed out in the bathtub and another 5 minutes later he states that he wants to fuck this bitch in the ass all week long. This is so unnecessary and only makes him look the kind of person that you want to get away from asap.
On the plus side the art style looks good, the plot might be interesting and it's no an easy "dad is dead" scenario

Edit: And now goes around and adopts people like stray dogs ..
With some better writing in terms of dialogue it would probably improve quite a bit, as it is it seems like it was written by a 12 year old with all this "I can't hold back" and such.

 

[Lotex]

Plenty of complaints about this game, most quite unwarranted imo. I find it more than a little amusing to see people whining about a given storyline or dialogue. I'm guessing they're the same people who complain about similar issues in pornos.

How do you come to the conclusion that stating your opinion and criticizing something is whining and even unwarrented? Are you that simple or just ignorant with this "You're automatically wrong if you don't see it my way"?

 

[Bullet07]

here is my unofficial android port of Sinful Delicacies Ep4 v1.0.

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Is it patched?

 

[the66]

Is it patched?

is the earth orbiting the sun?

 

[Noneless]

I laught the shit of my with this game, jesus christ.

 

[Bullet07]

is the earth orbiting the sun?

No! Its ur head

 

[the66]

No! Its ur head

damn, i tend to believe, i'm the center of the universe.

 

[Kingvlad]

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[Kar177]

Wow some people really have a hate boner for this game. I think it's pretty wicked, even though I will skip through every single scene with the aunt lmao

 

[crewfalcons]

Wow some people really have a hate boner for this game. I think it's pretty wicked, even though I will skip through every single scene with the aunt lmao

Yeah mainly because the way the game was presented in the beginning (Ep 1-2) it seemed like it was going to be another run-of-the-mill incest game where you had decent DAZ models, MC who was going to fuck em all, etc (which got a lot of praise and hype around it in the beginning)

Then you had an over the top plot to the point of it being ridiculous and stupid (meh it's porn games - doesn't bug me too much), add in the douchiest of all douchey dialogues coming from the MC (pretty much whines and acts like an 8 year old but somehow is 18?), cringey writing overall... oh and the aunt .

The turn from what looked like in the beginning and for all intent and purposes how the author presented it - a straight harem MC fuck-em all fuckfest - to this voyeuristic and cringefest its become kind of rubbed people the wrong way to say the least.

And it didn't help that the developer went over the top with his whining and complaining on Patreon.

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[Lotex]

I somehow doubt that the dev should make stealing such a big thing in this rant considering how expensive daz 3d assets can be and I doubt someone would spend a couple hundred bucks or so on something that might not take off.

That being said I can understand how the whole situation is frustrating, but ultimately it's not the players fault if they don't like things enough to place a pledge. As a dev you're in theory in the stronger position since you can take the game to whatever place you want it to be, but since you're paid by how much people like it you can't expect a small fortune when you deliver a weak plot with stupid writing. In the end you have to cater to their needs, not them to yours and how much you'd like to make per month with whatever you deliver.
Also the whole "but they've been here for years, it's much harder for new devs" doesn't really hold up. Sure it was a bit different, because you haven't seen the same models that often before, even back then 2 years ago when people like Faerin started he had to convince people to place their trust and their money in him and his abilities and in the end it worked out pretty well from what I've seen, even more for devs like MrDots, Palmer and other big shots.

To end the post on a somewhat positive note: The coding and rendering seems to be good enough and if the dev reads up on writing a story or let's someone else focus on it while he does the coding/rendering I'm sure things can improve.

Edit: And for the sake of everything, take smaller steps. Nobody goes around and suddenly adopts grown adults who they met like 2 hours ago and if things will take longer (the island episode almost seemed a bit rushed) develop a bit of a sub plot or let things run in the background, for example what the others are up to or something similar.

 

[Roosta]

But in the end, I really like and enjoy the game, so Im supporting the dev at patreon, 10 bucks is not much but I like where the game is going.

 

[Kingvlad]

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[Freezer14]

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Legit only excited for the updates of this game to see how much of a fucking whore the aunt continues to be. And normally I hate that shit. But between the cringey plot and dialogue, and the actually super sexy scenes with the aunt, she's what I look forward to the most. Maybe it's because I'm not attracted to the "mom that looks nothing like a mom" that much, or because the game was pretty up front and heavy handed with the Stacy scenes (I started on version 3, so I learned what to expect real quick), but I wasn't as upset by those scenes as I normally would be. Even if she is kind of terrible for being more focused on dick than her missing sister and nephew. I just can't get interested in the main story that much. Maybe if the sister(s) and the island savior get some good content too, I'll change my mind. But until then, just sitting back with my popcorn to watch the aunt be a cock hungry whore.

 

[abhi1180]

where are his patreon post can't see anything on his patreon....